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He's my poor orphan boy and the target of so much angst. He's just so easy to give angst to. Darn it. - Awwww, I love all of them. They're all great.
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The poor boy I do understand though, lmaoo - Glad you like them! They're amazing :)
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Haha, yeahhh Feel bad but like... Oops. This is what happens when I hyperfixate lol - They are most definitely amazing Oh, and I should be finished getting everything ready. I just have to make the forum now
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Yeahhh, it happens, lmao - Alright! :D
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Alright and the forum has been made/finished!! Wooo - Also, when it comes to rank... I only know that Logan is either 1st or 2nd in Command and that Euric is either 2nd or 3rd in Command. That's all I got though. So, uh. Yeah.
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Also, also- Let me know if I need to change anything regarding the NPCs
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Yayyy! :D - Also, I think everything looks good! I'll probably have Narin's mom come in eventually, but I don't have a name or power for her yet, I just know she's a bitch, lmao Also probably his ex, Belial Revanche, but I also haven't decided q power for him, lol Edited at October 23, 2024 03:41 AM by Lost Memories
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Alright, sounds good! Let me know when you have the stuff lol I'll be adding two more government official NPCs too, just so you know but, uh, yeah. The third snippet isn't done yet, um, but it does have ~875 words
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I find it important to mention, in the form of, well, how we do quotes- *Logan and Euric after meeting Garvin for the first time.* Logan, whispering to Euric; "CGV." Euric; "The fuck!?" Logan, gesturing; Euric, after a glancing around; "Ah." *Next time they see Garvin.* Logan, to Garvin; "Those are nice tattoos." Garvin; "Yeah, I know, right? Got 'em wit a friend." *Euric immediately turns and leaves the room.* - Moreso for every universe- Garvin's immune system is wack, as we know. He rarely gets sick, but when he does, it's terrible. A lot of less severe stuff, like a flu or cold, end up turning into pneumonia with him, actually. Because his lungs are shit. Edited at October 23, 2024 03:19 PM by Overthink101
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Alright! I think I figured out a power for Belial, actually- Dude's about to be a major menace, and, like he was already aweful with Narin, but I think I just made things worse, oops, sorry Narin- Voodoo Doll; Using any form of DNA (hair, blood, etc.), Belial can physically control how someone moves as well as cause physical sensations (pain or pleasure) without having to touch them at all. However, for this power to work, Belial must have the DNA on him in some way (doesn't matter how, could be through some sort of jewelry, doll, or just directly on his skin, he just has to have it on his person), and he must be in close enough proximity to them that he could hear them if they were to speak at normal volume. - I love that, lmao And the information is great! :D Edited at October 23, 2024 07:51 PM by Lost Memories
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