I'm working on looking over things right now.

For Fenris, please take into consideration the time period. I didn't finish reading his descritpion, but a lot of things you've describe wouldn't be found in the time period. Ex: the cross ear piercings, the choker, contacts, much of his fashion/clothing in general.
As mentioned this isn't modern times. I am willing to accept the dyed hair since dyes can be made out of berries and such.

For Shula and Azar,
They seem to be good.
Im willing to accept the birth defect that is covered by natural dyes. Her fashion is basic or simplistic enough that I don't have anything against it.

For Osiris and Odessa,
They are Good to Go.

For Jack,
First, he needs a last name. Again the fashion does not fit the time period they are in.

It looks like we are going to need a few more dragons so we can be even.

mkay. I guess I'm just trying to get a progress check XD

I'll fix this up as soon as possible

No worries, just let me know when you've finished and ill look over them again.

Where we are now:
5 : 7
Dragon to Rider Ratio

With known reservations it would be
6 : 9
So we will need a few more dragons. I am more than happy to make a third dragon if needed.

Can I reserve an air dragon. Should have it done by the end of today.

You got it :)

Added :)