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Whispers Cost | DiscussionSeptember 30, 2023 08:26 PM


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Okay, just finished the short story-
It's about 7000 words.
Should I split it into two or into three?
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Whatever you think flows best is great!
I'm working on my T8P post right now, it should be done later tonight! :)
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Alright, if I split it into 2 then the first part would be ~3050 words and the second part would be ~4050 words
I could probably split the second part up more if you don't want it to be that long
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Edited at September 30, 2023 10:42 PM by Overthink101
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That sounds great to me!
Question: Should I have Horatio leave the room this post or wait until next post? I have Briar coming in and having a mini conversation with Tio and then starting an interaction with Aries, so either way works great for me!
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I can work with either one- Do whichever one you think makes more sense for the characters, you know your characters better than I do after all lol
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Enjoy! Major TW, read with the utmost caution.

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Aries Short Novel; Sharpened; Mercy (Part 1)

Gwyar/Khorne, age 15

Mr Cattell/Tyrgrim, age 35

Mrs Cattell/Gunnr, age 33

The Doctor, age 25

The Boss, age 25

Smith(ex), age 17 (deceased at 15)

Aurora(sister), age 19 (deceased at 11)

Irene (mother), age 45 (deceased at 37)

Again, Major TW, read with the utmost care and caution. Seriously, be safe. This is not, at all, for the faint of heart.

*~*~*~*

The air seemed both lighter and thicker today, at least to Gwyar. He, admittedly, had an idea as to why. From what he knew of the planned fight he had today, he was going up against someone who, similar to Lutatius, tended to simply knock out their opponents. More than that though, was that he was being trusted to go by himself. The perfect opportunity to show that he wasn’t just a… That he wasn’t what they said he was. He didn’t want the words in his head.

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So, with the recently named Tereus and Tereine at his sides, he was making his way to the arena. Apparently, his opponent was someone called Somnus by the arena. Someone who used a blunt nunchaku, though apparently with a small retractable blade on either far end. Not large enough to be lethal, and he knew from a few of their fights that he’d watched that they never killed an opponent. If all went well, he could win this match by knocking Somnus out. That was the plan, the goal. Not set by the Cattells, not set by anyone except for himself. He wasn’t what they called him. He wasn’t. He refused to be… Not that he’d ever say that aloud. Not that he’d ever say that to them. He couldn’t.

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He stepped into the barren warehouse where even the slight smell of blood couldn’t dampen his mood, glancing around before making his way down the rusted stairs that he had learned to never trust. The middle step had already collapsed. He reached the floor and began walking to the two guards that seemed to always be stationed at the entrance. At this point, he was fairly certain that this was their job. Still, he stopped when he reached them.

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Intent?” The one with dirty blonde hair. Was he always the one to speak? Gwyar had never heard the other one speak before.

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Not willing to waste time, he responded. “Fighting.

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The guard nodded, the blonde again, “Name?

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He was really starting to doubt that the one with black hair could even speak. Though, maybe he could and just didn’t want to? That would be understandable. He never wanted to answer with the name they wanted him to. He couldn’t stall though. “Khorne.

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Gwyar could’ve sworn the two guards inclined their heads towards each other, as if looking at one another. But he didn’t look them in the eyes, so he didn’t know. Regardless, they both nodded and the one with black hair opened the door for him. So, without another word, he started his descent into the narrow stairwell. The cramped space still made him uncomfortable, making the tension in the air double. So, as soon as he heard the door close behind him, he was picking up his pace to get through the stairs as quickly as possible. Besides, the sooner he got down there, the better chance he had of his fight with Somnus coming sooner too.

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Stepping down into the lobby where alcohol and blood became the normal scent found, he didn’t miss a beat as he began walking over to where most fighters with planned fights waited beforehand. If he were lucky, Somnus would already be there too. Planned fights happened in order of which ones had all the fighters in them that got there first, after all.

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With the apparent good luck of today, Gwyar saw that they were there already. If he were being honest, the day seemed to be going extremely well. Too well, if his traitorous mind was to be believed. Hope never works, his mind whispered against him. But today seemed to break that pattern, that norm. Because everything was going to plan.

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He walked over near to Somnus, a fighter with black hair around his own height and a burn at their right cheek, and stood in waiting. Even if today was going well, he wasn’t going to risk anything. Talking with an opponent before the fight was out of the question. He had to make sure this continued to go well. These nerves about needing everything to go well was what he chose to blame the feeling of being watched on.

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When the finishing bell rang for whatever the last fight had been, and the announcer declared a winner by death, he started counting down the seconds before someone would be here to collect him and Somnus. Mostly just to keep himself hyped, keep himself from paying too much attention to his nerves. He ended up being wrong a few times, restarting the count and hoping he wasn’t being too fidgety. Eventually though, he was right, and the door opened to a guard with ginger hair.

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Somnus. Khorne.” Compared to other guards, this one seemed brighter, happier, to be here. That alone had him hoping that he didn’t bristle. He didn’t need to seem disrespectful right now. This had to go well. As the guard turned and began walking, Somnus following close behind, Gwyar stepped into action and walked through the threshold behind them.

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Walking through the hall, he managed to fall into step besides Somnus and begin going over what the best way to go through with his plan was once the fight started. The shorter the fight was, the better, which leaned towards a more offensive style, but with Tereus and Tereine? He didn’t want to accidentally kill Somnus, which would mean defense might be better. Then again, that might drag out the fight, which he didn’t want. He wanted to prove he wasn’t what they said he was, not make them think he simply hadn’t been trained well enough. He could maybe base his style off of Somnus? They tended to be a good mix of offense and defense, using the nunchaku to block and strike, similar to how Lutatius had fought… Could he use that against them? Maybe. Only if the opportunity was presented. For now, he just needed to be quick on his feet, protect Tereus and Tereine, and make sure this went well.

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Stopping in time with the guard and Somnus, keeping his gaze to the floor as the guard turned to them and opened the door they’d stopped in front of. “Khorne.

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Without a word, moving with purpose, he stepped through the door and listened as he was closed into the room. Taking a breath as footsteps padded away, he straightened his shoulders and began walking towards the exit so he could enter the ring as soon as he was allowed to. He could do this. He’d been planning this, getting ready for this opportunity for weeks now. Even more so after he learned about this fight. Tension lined his shoulders as he waited in the armory room, as he fiddled with the ribbons that differentiated Tereus and Tereine.

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When the exit opened, he stepped through and into the ring, taking a moment to glance around the area and breathe in the dust and strong scent of blood and death. The ring was just as desolate as always, the crowd loud and cheering, and Somnus stood exiting from the armory they’d been in before. Shifting, he slipped to a stance that would give him easy access to whatever movement he decided was necessary.

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The announcer’s voice broke through the crowd. “Our next fight is starting soon! In one corner resides our double edge, Khorne!

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Gwyar took a deep breath, bristling in the safety provided by the distance, as the crowd roared in response to hearing the name he’d been given by the arena. He wondered if Somnus felt similar, what their actual name was. He wasn’t sure if that really mattered either though, he couldn’t change what the arena called them.

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And in the other corner stands our resident escrima fighter, Somnus!

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He glanced over at Somnus, meeting his blue eyes for a moment. Eye contact wasn’t as big a deal during fights. No one from the crowd could tell, after all. He wondered what their name was, if they knew what the arena name meant.

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Our dear audience, go ahead and place your bets on who you think will win! The fight will start in two minutes!

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Gwyar always hated waiting the two minutes, more than he hated some other things. Being forced to stand across from his opponent for two minutes, enough time to think about the life they must have. About the life that they’d be losing after the two minutes, because he had thought he hadn’t been able to spare lives here. And after he knew he could, because he hadn’t wanted to risk anything while the Cattells watched. They hadn’t liked when he brought up knocking out opponents, anyways. Now though, knowing he was going to make sure Somnus left the ring alive, the two minutes seemed much less daunting.

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Nearing the end of the two minutes, he pulled out Tereus and Tereine, adjusting his stance minimally so that he could account for them. And then the announcer was speaking again. “Welcome back, darling audience! With the two minutes done, we’ll start the match as soon as everyone’s in their seats and places! The steel, Khorne, versus the escrima, Somnus! Who’s ready to watch?

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The crowd cheered, deafeningly loud, and he shifted slightly. Taking in a final deep breath, he tried to relax his tension before the fight started. That was almost always a smart choice. After a few seconds of the screaming crowd, the announcer spoke again. “Good to hear! Now let’s get to the bloodshed!

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The sound of the starting bell rang out, and he watched as Somnus pushed off their feet to go onto the offensive. Pushing his own feet into the ground, he planted himself where he was, twisting Tereus and Tereine in his hands so he was holding them downwards instead. He had to be careful during this fight, he couldn’t risk Tereus or Tereine and he couldn’t kill Somnus. He wouldn’t kill Somnus.

-

He pushed off and to the side using his left foot, heading right as Somnus reached close enough to swing their nunchaku towards him. Narrowingly dodging the blow, he shifted on his feet to stay balanced, to stay in motion, and swung the hand that was closer to his opponent. Leaning to that side as the nunchaku came speeding towards his right, he made contact with Somnus’s side. Stepping back to the side quickly, he went to put some distance between them as his opponent stumbled minutely. He dug his heels into the ground as he shifted, and aimed a kick as Somnus was just getting their balance back. His foot landed square on their chest, pushing them back more before they were pushing forward again too.

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Landing his foot on the ground again, he shifted to dodge a swinging nunchaku before realizing he was probably too close to do so. In anticipation, his arms shot up to block instead. The wood didn’t hit him, narrowly missing, the retractable blade on that end however, did. A slicing pain erupted at his arms and he dug in where he was as he retaliated by swinging his right fist. The fist missed the mark, but due to how he was holding her, Tereine narrowly managed to strike the shifting Somnus.

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A wooden end came into view from his peripherals, colliding his left arm as he quickly went to block. He was being caught on the defense, he wasn’t used to this. He needed distance. His feet shuffled backwards, trying to stay on his toes to keep enough momentum and balance to make up some space. His eyes narrowed as he jerked his head out of the way of a fist coming towards him. Deciding to follow the way his head went, his feet shifted enough to turn him that way. His left fist went up to connect with a jaw as he used his right arm to block another swing of a nunchaku.

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Tereine was on the ground, both him and Somnus staggering back from the blows. He hadn’t meant to drop her, the swing had been stronger than he’d expected. He shifted, a foot landed below his ribs, knocking the air from his lungs and sending him stumbling backwards. He dug in his heels to stop himself, raising his arms as his peripherals caught sight of the nunchaku. He was out of his element here. Taking in a sharp breath, he braced and glanced at Tereine. He could do this, he had to do this.

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As he saw the nunchaku coming towards him again, he dove to the ground, rolling out of the attack path. Shifting so he could keep an eye on Somnus, he grabbed a fistful of the arena floor and threw the dirt up. Roll, dive, ignore the noise from the crowd, reach, block out the guilt of an underhanded tactic, Tereine’s textured red ribbon in his hand, get back up to his feet. He could do this. He had to do this.

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Shift his feet, move out of the way of a swing, shift again, block with left arm, pull back. He took a steadying breath, he could practically taste the dust and blood in the air. He needed to win. He needed to win by knockout. He looked for an opening, he needed to use Somnus’s style against them.

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Reel back, dodge, send his right fist forward, slice the arm that blocked his attack. He gritted his teeth and pushed forward, he needed to get closer. Render the nunchaku less effective. Send his left fist up, contact with his opponent’s burn scarred cheek, slice across as his fist returns, step back to reposition himself. Wasn’t Somnus more likely to block a more direct strike? Could that give him an opening?…

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Shifting, he twisted Tereine in his hand to hold her forwards again, reeling back and slicing her forward as if to actually strike Somnus. Said opponent grabbed either wooden end of the nunchaku, and raised the weapon to block the strike.

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Gwyar took a breath, forced himself to calm as time seemed to slow. This was his best chance, probably the best he was going to get. He had to do this. He shifted his hold on Tereine so he was holding her handle by his thumb and index finger, the rest of his palm connected with the chain between the two ends. He closed his fist around the metal, and reeled back his left hand. He needed to hit with the hilt or handle… He twisted Tereus in his hand so he was holding the blade, suppressing a wince as the double edge cut into his palm. He pulled the nunchaku downward by the chain, careful to keep Tereine protected, and pushed Tereus at full force towards the chin.

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When Tereus landed, he let go of the nunchaku, quickly going backward a few steps and watching as Somnus went down. Quickly, he twisted Tereus back to hold his purple ribboned handle instead of the blade. He took in a deep breath, watching his opponent with narrowed eyes to see if the fight was over. He hoped so.

-

Somnus didn’t get back up, and Gwyar allowed his shoulders to relax, for the tension to drain from him. He put Tereus and Tereine back at his sides, and straightened himself. After a few seconds, the finishing bell rang and the announcer spoke.

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And the winner by knockout is Khorne.!” There was a pause, and then the announcer continued. “Go ahead and make sure to collect whatever you won from bets! The next fight will be happening as soon as Somnus is out of the ring! With that said, enjoy your stay at the arena everyone!

-

Gwyar stood there, breathing in slowly to make sure he was calm whenever he walked out. The fight had been harder than he’d been expecting. He wasn’t used to trying to only knock someone out. He needed to work on that. But more than that… What was with the pause? Were they surprised he hadn’t killed them? Were they being forced to think about everything they did and had done? He wasn’t sure. He won though, they’d called the win. Everything had gone according to plan. Today had broken the pattern of hope not working. All that was left for him to do was leave.

-

Somehow, he managed to keep the smile off of his face as he made his way back towards the way he’d entered the ring. The way into the armory was open for him, and he knew that the door would be unlocked for him to just walk out. Normally, he’d have to wait in the hall for one of the Cattells, but he’d come here alone today. They had trusted him enough to come here, fight, and go back to the house on his own.

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Stepping through the armory, he stopped momentarily to actually glance at the weaponry. He’d never use them, not when he had Tereus and Tereine, but looking at them was always nice. Most of them were made to kill, only a few of them could be used to knock out opponents in a conventional manner. Not like how he did today. Even the ones that could be used for easy knockout though had ways to kill worked onto them.

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Still, the armory had less dust than the ring or hallways, so he gave himself a few seconds of looking at the weapons to take in a few cleaner breath’s. Tracing the symbol on them with his eyes, usually on the hilt or handle, wherever the surface area was most flat other than the actual blade. And then, he stepped out of the armory and started on his way through the hallways to leave.

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Enjoy! Major TW, read with the utmost caution.

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Aries Short Novel; Sharpened; Consequences (Part 2)

Gwyar/Khorne, age 15

Mr Cattell/Tyrgrim, age 35

Mrs Cattell/Gunnr, age 33

The Doctor, age 25

The Boss, age 25

Smith(ex), age 17 (deceased at 15)

Aurora(sister), age 19 (deceased at 11)

Irene (mother), age 45 (deceased at 37)

Again, Major TW, read with the utmost care and caution. Seriously, be safe. This is not, at all, for the faint of heart.

*~*~*~*

The hallway was quiet, and while the silence was usually unnerving, today the lack of noise was almost calming. A break before he had to step into the lobby in order to get out of here. He was almost glad for the peace. Knowing that he’d be caught off guard by the noise once he reached the lobby no matter how prepared he thought he was, was just about the only downside.

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…Gwyar never even got past the halfway point through the hallways to the lobby. Instead, he began hearing two pairs of footsteps, and after months of hearing those same footsteps… That was Mr and Mrs Cattell, getting closer to where he was, through and through. Still, he continued walking. He didn’t know why they were here but, well, there had to be a reason. And with how today was going so far, he nervously allowed himself to hope for a good one.

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When the footsteps got even closer and he rounded the corner to see both Cattells, his hope quickly diminished back into nothingness. He didn’t look them in the eyes, but neither were smiling. And while that wasn’t too worrying since they practically never smiled anyways, Mr Cattell quickening his pace to a speed walk with anger written on his face was. He barely had time to brace himself, panic leaping to clutch his chest, before he found himself on the ground. His face stung and he took longer than he’d like to admit to realize that he’d been hit.

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By the time he did though, Mr Cattell was speaking, anger in the command easy to find. “Get up.

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He didn’t waste time with his confusion, finding purchase on the ground and pushing himself up was almost second nature at this point. Apparently, he still took too long as he felt a hand grip his arm and pull him up to his feet quickly instead. Trying not to stumble with the quick movement, he tried to shift. Instead, he was immediately being pulled by the arm further into the arena.

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He slipped into following as quickly as he could, trying to get a grip on the sudden change in situation. Mr Cattell was speaking, he needed to listen, he might tell him what he did wrong— What had he done wrong? He didn’t know. He didn’t know.

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His foot slipped as he tried to pay more attention to what was being said, the speaking stopped as he started stumbling and slowing. His arm was yanked forward, trying to speed him up again, the grip holding him tightening. The speaking didn’t come back. He tried to figure out what was going on. He did. He tried. His mind couldn’t hook onto enough to connect the dots. What happened He’d just been— Today had been going so well.

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He skidded to a halt when he realized that Mr Cattell had stopped in front of a door, just barely keeping himself from colliding with him. He didn’t dare speak, not with the tension in the air.

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Without turning to him, Mr Cattell spoke, tone seeming eerily similar to a hiss. “I know this might be hard for a thing to understand, but just this once, all I need. Is for it to pay attention and listen.

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Resisting the urge to shrink or shift, he stayed as still as he could. An answer wasn’t waited on, the door they were standing in front of was knocked on, and within seconds a guard opened the door.

-

The room was obviously an office, with a desk and bookshelves and folders on the desk. And the Boss sitting at the desk, with the Doctor standing just to the side of him. Both looked upset. There were three guards in the room in various places, and the Cattells were there too, Mrs Cattell behind him and Mr Cattell still holding his arm. No one looked happy. What did he do?

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We brought it.” The tone was firmer now, clear and loud enough for everyone in the room to hear. Unceremoniously, Gwyar felt the grip on his upper arm tighten before he was pulled in front of Mr Cattell, the grip shifting to his back as he was pushed through the open door and into the room roughly.

-

Another glance, trying to gauge how badly he’d messed up— Where was the guard that had opened the door? A sharp pain of a blunt something between his shoulder blades pushed him to the floor. Catching himself with one hand on reflex as a knee connected, the blunt object dug into his skin, pushing him further down. Far quicker than he’d like to admit his arm crumpled under the pressure. Within seconds, his other knee hit the ground and his forehead met the floor.

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We aren’t blind, Tyrgrim.” Was that the Boss? That sounded like the Boss. He wasn’t sure. There was still something pushing into his spine between the shoulder blades.

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Silence stretched on for… He wasn’t sure how long. He didn’t know. He— He didn’t know. Apparently, he didn’t know a lot… What happened? Today had— Today had been going so well. This wasn’t fair. What did he do wrong? He didn’t want to be here. He felt a stinging heat build up behind his eyes, he wasn’t going to cry. He wasn’t supposed to. Not here. Not in front of these people. Not when he’d done something wrong. What did he do?

-

After some time in the silence, there was a slight hum, and then… “Hm… What to do with it… I mean, we don’t want a dull blade, now do we?” That was the same voice as last time, the Boss? He didn’t know. He wasn’t sure. He hated this.

-

When no one spoke, the Boss continued, clarified. He didn’t sound pleasant. “Do we have any suggestions? We can’t let it go uncorrected at the very least.

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Silence stretched again, and then something coldly metallic touched the back of his head. His breath caught in the back of his throat, he didn’t move. He didn’t shift. A voice came from behind him, one he didn’t recognize, so probably the guard. “It’s obviously past that, Sir. I’d suggest removal from your armory.

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A click sounded somewhere behind him, somewhere from that cold piece of metal against his head and— If he wasn’t already frozen, he certainly was now. That… They were to shoot him. What did he do? He didn’t— He didn’t know what he’d done wrong. Panic clutched his heart, he couldn’t— He couldn’t. He just couldn't. He didn’t know. Tears were certainly stinging at his eyes now, and he squeezed them shut in an attempt to not cry. That wouldn’t help him… Would anything help him now though? He was— He was going to die. This was the end. Bullet to the brain, just like— Just like Smith— He didn’t— Please—

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The sound of something, he didn’t know what, landing on a desk shook him out of his spiraling thoughts in time to realize he hadn’t been shot… Yet. Because that was still going to happen. Probably. A different click came from somewhere else though, closer to the desk, and a voice spoke, grim and warning. The Doctor.

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Remove the gun, now. This is your only warning.

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The cold metal disappeared from the back of his head, silence stretching out with a new tension. He didn’t dare move from where he was still being forced to kneel on the ground. When someone did speak again, the voice belonged to the Doctor, somehow casual. Somehow sounding disappointed.

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Removal isn’t necessary for this, I don’t think. After all, this is merely a missed weak spot. Every weapon has one. Isn’t that right, Gunnr? All that’s needed is to fix it. Sharpen it. Get rid of whatever its previous wielders, its previous forgers, had crafted into it. It belongs to the arena now, after all, not them.” A pause, tension lined every inch of.. Him. Every inch of him. “I believe, all that’s necessary here, is a severe correction. A… Reminder, if you will.

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…His hands pulsed painfully, as if they were still injured. Well, one of them was, he supposed. The other didn’t have an excuse. His throat still felt constricted and the floor was starting to truly dig into his forehead. But he wasn’t going to die. He wasn’t. Because of the Doctor. He almost pushed his forehead more into the ground himself, only stopping himself from doing so because this was wrong. All of this was wrong.

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A small tapping noise was the only sound for a moment, and he couldn’t tell if someone was tapping their foot or a pen on the desk. He wasn’t sure if that really mattered. All he knew was that the sound continued as the Boss spoke.

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Right then, as consequence for not doing as it was forged specifically to do, its wielders are to take it to 6B and wait for us to come correct it. In the meantime, the wielders will do whatever corrections they believe to be necessary and keep it sheathed for our arrival. Am I understood?

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Almost immediately, the sound of Mr Cattell’s voice answering could be heard. “Yes Sir.

-

There were a few more seconds of silence, with his head against the ground and some blunt object digging into his back to keep him kneeling, and then… The object was removed from his back, and he could breathe a bit easier, lift his head just enough so that his forehead wasn’t pushed against the ground as much, and a split second after he had done so, he felt a firm hand on his upper arm and what had been said fully processed in his head.

-

He was pulled up from the ground in a quick motion, with no words said between anyone else. With his head spinning to catch up, his eyes landed on the mask on the desk. The Doctor’s mask on the desk. His feet were forced to move with his eyes as he was almost dragged out of the room. He still wasn’t sure what he had done wrong. No one had told him. He was being taken to be corrected and he didn’t know what he’d done that needed to be corrected. How was he supposed to make sure he didn’t mess up again? He bit down on his tongue, trying to focus on just walking, on keeping up with the quick pace of the Cattells. He didn’t want to make this even worse. He’d find out eventually what he did wrong… Hopefully.

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For now, he kept his feet moving to keep up as he was pulled through the hallways of the back area of the arena. Forcing himself to not shrink or tense too much in anticipation of a correction he didn’t understand. He didn’t know what was being planned either. He didn’t know a lot right now. He wasn’t sure if he even wanted to know. The only reason he thought he did was so that maybe then he could prepare. Maybe then he could figure out what he’d done wrong and apologize. Do whatever was needed to earn forgiveness without being hurt again. He didn’t want to be hurt again.

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…He didn’t really have a say though, did he? He could apologize, he could find out and apologize and even beg and they’d still hurt him. Still correct him. Because that was the only way he’d learn. Because… Because things couldn’t learn, things could only be corrected through— Through being beaten back into shape. He… He wasn’t a… He wasn’t… He didn’t want to be a thing. Did that even matter though? If he was a thing then he couldn’t just decide not to be. But— He wasn’t. He wasn’t a thing.

-

Mr Cattell stopped in front of a door, and he stopped right behind him. Seconds later, the door was opened and he was pushed inside in front of the Cattells. Without a word, he heard the two enter and the door close. Turning, he backed up a bit, to give them room. Just to give them room, his pounding heart had nothing to do with that. Not like there was even a reason for his heart to be pounding anyways. This was just a correction. Corrections had happened before. There had been corrections before. There was no reason to want to back away into a corner. Especially since that was a terrible idea anyways, backing into a corner was never the right thing to do, that was more of a disadvantage than anything else.

-

Staring at the floor, he didn’t dare to try and gauge how upset they were. The office had told him enough. The smell of blood in this room was just as overwhelming as the scent was back in the ring, and the gray monochrome that made up the stone floor, cracked and bloodstained were almost familiar. Every room here for corrections looked the same… Or at least most of them.

-

Still, silence stretched for a moment, and then Mr Cattell spoke, voice biting with an angry, almost disappointed, sigh. “Just get on the fucking ground against the wall already. Gunnr, go grab the chains.

-

Suppressing a flinch as well as he could, he practically scrambled to kneel on the ground at the furthest wall from the door, desperate not to make anything even worse. Mrs Cattell's footsteps could be heard traversing the room, in time with Mr Cattell’s getting nearer to him. Until they stopped, and he was crouched down in front of him.

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Not that I expect a thing to listen to me but, remember, these corrections hurt us more. We don’t want to correct it, but if it keeps messing up… Well, we have to. There isn’t any other way to get it back into the shape we need it to be in, after all. No other way to sharpen it.” Mr Cattell’s tone seemed mostly disappointed now, with only some restrained anger about being forced to do this. He had the urge to apologize, to ask what had been done wrong… Neither option would help at this point though, so his head was merely bowed.

-

Seconds later, Mrs Cattell’s footsteps stopped nearby, the sound of metal shifting with her in the air. And then, in his peripherals, the cuffs could be seen in Mr Cattell’s hands. Mr Cattell spoke again, voice full of anger again. “Hands. Now.

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Desperate not to make things worse, his hands were offered with as little hesitation as was possible. The shakiness went stubbornly ignored by him, there was no reason for them to be shaking. After a couple seconds, a click of the cuffs opening could be heard, and then he felt cold metal on either wrist. He tried to ignore the panic crawling up as the click of the cuffs closing was heard and the cold metal was felt encasing both wrists.

-

Face the damn wall.

-

With as little hesitation as possible, he turned in a haste to face the wall. The sooner this was over, the sooner the cuffs came off. He— He didn’t want these on— He was trapped— Wanted out, out, out— Get him out— He rested his forehead against the wall, squeezing his eyes shut and trying to ignore the cold metal around his wrists.

-

His hands were forced up a bit as the chains were locked into place at the wall. Panic tore at his heart, making airways constrict. The sound of footsteps walking away, he tested the chains as subtly as possible, pulling and biting his tongue when they barely moved. Trapped. He was trapped. Completely, utterly trapped. Squeezing eyes shut even tighter, he pushed the forehead against the wall further, trying to ignore the panic that was beginning to drown out the rest of the world.

-

A sharp noise of something quickly cutting through the air was the only warning before pain erupted at several places on— On his back. The one saving grace from moving from the force was his forehead on the wall and grip on the chains. A contrasting sting came as the cold, open air hit the new warmth that came from open wounds. The feeling wasn’t enjoyable, though that was probably the point.

-

The next one, two, three were even worse. Overlapping with some of the previous ones, pinpointing exactly where each injury was located was difficult. The pain was the worst part. Dizzying and nauseating, stinging and throbbing, sharp and piercing. Breathing was hard, and not knowing when the next time the scourge would come down didn't help. The tears that had been held back previously were certainly making their way down now, unable to focus on much else other than the pain made keeping them back much more difficult.

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No matter the reactions, no matter the pain, the scourge came down again. And again, and again, and again, and again— Until differentiating between the strikes became too complicated, too difficult, too much. Accepting the overwhelming pain was easier, eyes squeezed shut and chain digging into raw hands making them bleed. Forehead pressed against the wall and tears running down cheeks, mixing with the sounds tearing from a raw throat. Well, mixing with sounds until something was suddenly clogging the raw throat, keeping any other noises or what may have been pleas from escaping. And then, raw pain was all there was. Over and over and over again— Stop and again and again— Please— and again and again and— Please stop

-

Seconds, or minutes, time was hard to keep track of with pain still destroying all concepts of such a thing, passed by before the fact that there weren’t any new strikes coming down managed to process. That there hadn’t been any new strikes coming down for a while. Breathing was painful, stretching the injuries and keeping them open.

-

There was movement, the sound of searing metal and speaking. No words could be made out through the fog of pain, and any attempts were met with overwhelming failure and stabbing pain that took all focus away immediately. Someone was close by again, crouched down and if the wind pushing against the open wounds were any indication, reaching out towards the tattered back. Trying not to move, the sound of cutting fabric was a distinct difference. The cold air of the room reached more of the skin as the shirt was cut and pulled off, pain shooting through the injuries where the shirt had been sticking.

-

The back of the shirt was peeled away completely, and the hands that had done so reached up to the cuffs. Relief threatened to jump up, but diminishing just as quickly as the cuffs were tightened instead. Along with the cuffs tightened enough to dig into skin, the chains were shifted to allow for even less movement. Fear clawed back up, even more so as cold metal wrapped around at the neck. The clicking clang of a chain attached to that and the forehead pressed against the wall was suddenly pushed downwards uncomfortably and the chain was locked tightly to the wall. Giving an experimental tug up to relieve the stress of the arms being higher, the collar dug into skin and didn’t budge. A tug at the arms had the same outcome. Fear clung and caught any breaths that had been previously possible.

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Whoever had cut the shirt and tightened the chains had walked away by now, allowing cold air to hit more skin. Time passed, the sound of something being heated was the only sound to be heard over the pain of cold air stinging the open wounds, over the fear that threatened to consume every sense of rationality. Eventually, more footsteps approached, bringing warm air along too. For a second, the warm air was a nice change as the warmth got closer and then—

-

It screamed. Pure agony exploded as skin and blood and scorching metal collided on its back. Pressure was applied, arms forced to move by the pressure and the cuffs dug into its wrists. The pain burned its mind, boring into every nerve and it begged. Screamed and begged for mercy it already knew wouldn’t be given. But not much settled in its mind, just that it needed the pain to stop.

-

When the metal was finally pulled away, after what felt like an eternity of never ending pain, cold air hit its back and all it felt for another moment was pain. And then, it fell to the side, not having noticed the cuffs and collar being taken off until it collided with the ground. It stayed there, pain wrapped around it and made everything foggy. Voices drifted somewhere, but it couldn’t focus with the smell of burning and burnt flesh in the air, with the smell of blood that coated everything, with the slight acidic taste of vomit in its mouth. Dizzying nausea clung to it, just the same as the pain that refused to let it focus on its surroundings.

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Something came into contact with the newest injury, pain erupted in response and it tried not to- It really did, it swears it did— It whimpered just a bit, curling away from whatever had just hurt it more. More insistently, harsher, the same thing came into contact with it again. It curled away further, biting back a yelp as well as it could. When it was hit again, harsher, to the point that it was moved by the offender, it managed to realize it was being kicked through the familiar pain. Realizing that didn’t make anything easier as it went to curl, went to cry out in pain for anyone to hear— Please— Instead, a hand roughly grabbed its upper arm and yanked it up, practically dragging it as its legs refused to remember how to work.

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As it was dragged through the halls, it continued to slip and fall, nausea and pain and the resulting dizziness making walking hard. Each time, its arm was yanked and it was pulled forward unceremoniously. It couldn’t tell if someone was speaking, couldn’t tell what was going on beyond the pain that every movement caused. It stumbled, it was yanked, it flailed, it was yanked. It bit back a cry as it was yanked yet again, stumbling blind in pain and not going near fast enough for whoever was pulling it around.

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At some point, the one dragging it around stopped walking. Standing alone was almost harder though, and it found itself slipping where it stood, legs wanting to collapse and crumble beneath it. Before that could happen though, it was being roughly forced through a door and it collided with a wall. A wall that was too smooth and too close. For a split second, while it still had light, it tried to go that way, legs crumbling and pain keeping it where it was as a voice drifted over it. And then, darkness consumed it as it found what it assumed was the floor.

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The room was dark, and smooth, and small, and silent, and it couldn’t see anything. But the pain was still there, the smell of blood and burnt flesh, and it couldn’t focus past the cloud in its mind. Past the pain and fear and desperation. It deserved this though. It had done something, it didn’t know what it’d done but it’d done something to deserve this. It had to have done something. It probably broke, they were just repairing it. That had to be what happened. They didn’t want to hurt it. It had broken… It had. This was its fault. This had to be its fault. There was no chance that this wasn’t its fault. They didn’t want to hurt it. They didn’t. They didn’t.

Whispers Cost | DiscussionSeptember 30, 2023 11:03 PM


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There the story is! Extremely angsty and hopefully you enjoy (sob) reading it!
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Whispers Cost | DiscussionSeptember 30, 2023 11:45 PM


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I am currently sobbing very much-
The story was so beautifully written and sooooo very terribly angsty. I love it, and my heart hurts, poor Ariessss :""""((((
God, I can't wait until the rest of the group goes and burns down the fucking arena, I want a massacre for this, there will be a massacre :'(((
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Haha- Glad you like the short story
Yeahhh, can't wait for the everyone to burn and the resulting angst from that too
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I loved the T8P post, by the way, very good
I will get a post out sometime tomorrow, no idea if that means in an hour or less though
For now, I think I'll just do an Aries post since not sure what to do with anyone else haha

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