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Revan, glaring; "I don't blame you for what happened to Ni- Mx. Cosmos, Mr. Caeso! You're not the one that eventually has the teleportation ability! If I had learnt the ability by then none of that would have happened! Once again, I had a potential way to save someone and I failed to do so. I don't care about danger, Mr. Caeso, not towards myself. With my luck, even if something were to happen to me, someone else would pay for it... Regardless, fine. I'll stay, but you will not be interrupting my work in any way nor speaking to me unless necessary. None of you will be."
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Horatio, sighing: "It's not your fault, Revan, it's my responsibility to make sure you're progressing properly with your power, and teleportation comes much later in time. You didn't fail. Thank you, and I'm sorry again."
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I just finished Horatio's first part and Nico's part and I can confirm that first posts are the worst, they always feel so awkward :')
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Revan, walking straight on past Horatio; "Apology's completely unnecessary, Mr. Caeso." - My dude Rev just be completely shutting himself off from everyone- That totally won't be a bad thing where terrible thoughts fester and health declines :D - And yes, first posts are always the hardest and the worst. And I still need to figure out the appearance of the ghosts for my people XD
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Poor Rev and poor Nico, these two are just going to suffer after Nico gets taken :') - Yeahhhh, I feel like the ghosts make it more awkward to write, the dialog is interesting for sure XD
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Rev is going to suffer throughout lmao He just going to get considerably worse haha - Wish us both good luck, yep
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Same with Tio, honestly, and Briar, though their struggles are going to be very sheltered for a while, lmao
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All of my characters are going to be struggling, honestly. - I do have some questions though... 1) Would Gen'ya technically be able to say they were using the bathroom if they go in there, regardless of whatever he's actually doing in there? 2) Should I bring in Jakob as a toxic boyfriend of Aries at the start for extra angst plus continuity?
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Fair- My only character that won't be struggling (from the beginning I mean) is Micha, Nico's just isn't as heavy angst at first. - 1) They probably couldn't say using, but they could say they were going to the bathroom, as they are technically going to the bathroom, lol 2) Yes. I love the angst.
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Fair, fair- I love this - 1) I mean like, after they come out. If someone asked what they were doing in there. Could they say using the bathroom instead of being specific since technically they used it for something. 2) Great.
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