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Flying Ramen said:
I agree with Valiant Winecup about the legs but I like how fluffy they are. I think it adds to their cuteness! - Is it okay if I post some old art? I'm still very proud of it, and I would love to get some critiques on it
YES! YES! YES! Dust off your old art and post them! We'd love to see them! <3 I think I'll add that to the rules as well, ;) |
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they refused to comply. >.> But kind of like how this is positioned? How the hind leg bends, and the little elbow tip of the front leg. I wouldn't copy that exactly though, it's not perfect, and the leg on that reference should be shortened a little maybe. The main part to focus on is just how the legs bend xD |
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Valiant Winecup said:
they refused to comply. >.> But kind of like how this is positioned? How the hind leg bends, and the little elbow tip of the front leg. I wouldn't copy that exactly though, it's not perfect, and the leg on that reference should be shortened a little maybe. The main part to focus on is just how the legs bend xD
Oh I see- especially comparing the back legs! I have it more blocked shape when it's supposed to act like a muscle! Thank you so much! <3 |
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 This is Ramen God and actually what inspired my name! I tried to incorporate a lot of my favorite additions to traditional ramen |
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@ Flying Ramen Oh my gosh? I'm astounded! I love the details and the theme!!! You're awesome at this! One thing I did find a little confusing- is that the snake body in the back is the same color and shading as the front? I found a bit hard to differentiate how the body curls. What if you added a slightly darker color to show the snake body extending into the bakground? ^^ |
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No problem!! I'm glad it helped! |
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Oh wow. I really like that |
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Elbowen said:
@ Flying Ramen Oh my gosh? I'm astounded! I love the details and the theme!!! You're awesome at this! One thing I did find a little confusing- is that the snake body in the back is the same color and shading as the front? I found a bit hard to differentiate how the body curls. What if you added a slightly darker color to show the snake body extending into the bakground? ^^
Thank you! I definitely get what you're saying, someone else also suggested I could have made it less detailed as they went further back to give the effect of less focus? But I would be worried it would come off more as unfinished, if that makes sense |
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Opinions on the animation sketch? ^^; Also, dont mind that things appear and disappear, its just how I sketch- Edited at April 28, 2021 04:44 PM by Interstellar Sun |
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Stell I'd say it looks great for sketch stage. What sort of "emotion"/mood is the wolf in? Do you want advice on what "steps" to take next or something? |
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