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Yuuna is accepted. | Lost Love and Ghosts Reservation will be added. Lost has 8 more hours to finish theirs. Ghost had another day. | Spell, Since the dragons were filled when you completed I'd be willing to allow him as a side character. But he would need to be fixed first. His abilities are where my issue is. First, Ominous Light feels like an amalgamation of different types of dragons, but nothing about it seems to pertain to Light. The power also feels extremely Overpowered. So I won't be accepting that power. Second, for Solar Aura there are three distinctive aspects to it that should all count for their own power, like how I have Akhens invenomation. |
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Lost Love said:
Koaga Age: [50 - 300 Years] 187 Gender: Female Class Crystal Rider: Tbd Appearance: When you lay gaze upon Koaga the thing you might notice first is how tall she is. She rests at 17 feet not being really tall but that doesn't stop her. Wether she's tall or not she still has a voice to bear. Her size and height doesn't control what she can and cannot do. Her build is feminine and more soft looking. Some underestimate her for weak but you'd be surprised. Under her pretty, soft looking form is a structure built for stealth and agileness. She's definitely more fast and agile. Not much for strength but able to pack the punch. But above all her form is the mesmerizing, shimmering crystalized scales of hers. You can tell from just looks she has rigid scales with sharp pointy ends. If you grazed over her the wrong way your due for a tiny slice. Her scales are the color of a pearl. Reflecting a more pinky color off then. Rose gold you could say. She also has crystal shards growing down the bone of her wings. Her tail is VERY sharp on the end, a little crystal point being dagger like. There are spiny crystals lining down her taiWhen you look close she has crystals lining her talons, jawline, haunches, and on the back of her neck. The crystals on the back of her neck are spiny and sharp alike to her horns. Her horns are made up of rocky crystals pointed and curved outwards on the end. Spiny horns run down her jaw line and the back of her neck. You can't forget her eyes though. Her eyes are a pretty, baby pink that have a pretty white glow in them. It contrasts to the white that fades onto her snout. Yes she fades from white to pink to white again. Personality: Smart || Naive || Sweet || talkitave || Trusting || Humble || Hopeful || Empathetic || Sympathetic || Co-operative || Very tame || Koaga can be described as, soft. She's very kind hearted and naive. Very gullible too, she doesn't know how to say no. You could say she's too hopeful and thinks nothing can go wrong. It's definitely a big weakness to her. And the only time it all seems to go away is when she's focused or in a tight situation. Then it's like someone turned her switch off. Her whole mood changed she's serious and very quite. Very- two sided you could say. She is determined and quick witted. Abilities: Sharding Crystal- When passing by and enemy or close to an enemy she does a quick, deep slash with her razor sharp tail end. Her tail is so sharp it always manages to cut right under their scales, or past their fur/feathers. The slash will burn like a paper cut after since it's such a thin cut, but it doesn't mean it not deep. It's like a thin laceration to their skin. It will hurt for awhile. Crystalizing Breath- Alike to breathing fire, she breaths a crystaly breeze that shards sharp crystals on the object/thing it hits. It takes her time to build up the breath though. And there is a cool down. Blinding Shine- Somewhat similar to a light dragon she can spread her wings in the sun and blind the enemy with her reflective scales on the webbing of her wings. Throwing Spine- Much like a porcupine she can throw spine like crystals from her neck. They regrow after some time and do have a small cool down. These spines are very strong when stuck inside something. There also very sharp like a needle. Ranging from how provoked she is is how deep the spiny crystal can go. Strengths Quick thinking Agileness Fast reflexes Stealth Quick defense Soundless Weaknesses Bad eyesight noticeable at day Doesn't know when to give up Small fighting spaces (She's claustrophobic) Crush: Open! Pm me Mate: Open pm me! Offspring: Maybe in the future Kin: Open! Affiliations: [Friends, Enemies, etc.] Open!!
Okay I think I'm finished, let me know if you want me to add more to personality. I hate writing them so I tried to finish it up quick. I can and am willing to add more to it ofc. Let me know if I need to change anything else. I usually write longer but I was getting lazy and wanted it finished fast. I swear im more literate writing roleplay responses than writing sign up sheets |
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Lost,
I would like to see a bit more for personality.
For her Ability, Sharding Crystal, I don't think it's viable. It's unfair to say that she has an attack that always hits, and always in a specific way, as it's taking control from the roleplayer. You could say that she can harden a sharp layer of crystal over her tail, and when her strikes hit it leaves very thin, papercut like wounds, that can be deceptive, as they cut a lot deeper than they appear at times. That kind of thing. ^^ |
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My bad if it made it seem like she ALWAYS manages to hit. I meat it like when she does manage to land a slash it always lands underneath their scales. If thats not okay ill change it again! But I decided to change up her personality. let me know if more to personality is needed. <3 |
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If you don't mind ^^ I just think that it slicing under scales everytime would be unlikely, as dragons are all different in terms of their scales. How their own abilities work for defense/shielding/armor, and just in general. It's hard to say that would be how it attacks everytime yanno? ^^
And let me go read the personality real fast.
Lost Love said:
My bad if it made it seem like she ALWAYS manages to hit. I meat it like when she does manage to land a slash it always lands underneath their scales. If thats not okay ill change it again! But I decided to change up her personality. let me know if more to personality is needed. <3
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Name: Mercy Oziel Age: 22 Gender: female. (cis. ace) Specialized Skill: tracking, hunting. Dragon: (idk yet) Affinity: air. ( her mana is stored in her feather hair pendant) Mercy is 5 '6 and has a decent figure, she is quite lean. Being only visibly toned when she is flexed. She has a more mixed skin tone to her. She has been told she Looks very similar to her father, being that they both share the same eye color (that very bright blue), the naturally darker gray hair, her more prominent canines, and her vitiligo that is scattered across her body. Mercy prefers to wear roughly the same outfit every day. Black top, black cargo pants, and black combat boots. She is more often than not seen wearing a gold necklace, and is always seen with her feather pendant. She has a very bad RBF, she has tried to fix it. It ended in her looking very passive aggressive. Personality: |Alert| |adaptable| |active| |energetic| |enthusiastic| |hardworking| |loyal (to a fault)| |self-reliant| |aggressive| |determined| |experimental| |intense| |outspoken| |sarcastic| |stubborn| |argumentative ( at times)| |fixed| |foolish| |flamboyant| |impulsive| |possessive| Mercy is a very stand-offish character, preferring to stay quiet and watch things unfold from a distance, until she gets invested (or she figures out what side she's on) then she will get involved. She is a very energetic elf, constantly seen moving, jumping, always climbing random things. Strengths: physical strength: she is a very physically strong person. Being able to carry around 160 pounds. Spatial awareness: being raised the way she was, caused her to be very aware of everything going on around her. Survival skills: again being raised the way she was. Her survival skills are on point, allowing her to live off the land more efficiently then the average person. Flexibility: she is just really flexible. Weaknesses: Lack of social skills: she was raised the majority of her life away from society, and this has caused her to lack basic social skills. Inability to handle structured environments: (ex. Large cities, schools, any type of church.) She finds that the structured planned out buildings set her off slightly. They make her uneasy. Lack of cultural awareness Fear of enclosed spaces Likes: Chocolate. Sushi. When it's anything but sunny outside (raining, snowing, storming, etc.), talking to others one on one. Being outside. Dislikes: Larger groups (12-14 people), sudden loud noises, people she doesn't know very well touching her. Crush: (-ing the competition. respectfully) Spouse/S.O.: none. (ace) Kin: Stoker Oziel (father) Affiliations: none as of yet (open) Other:(please tell me if you want me to add or change anything. I was rushing to get this character somewhat finished) |
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My Boy Has Been Edited ^^ I think I did his Solar Aura breakdown correctly
Imperial Sands said:
Yuuna is accepted. | Lost Love and Ghosts Reservation will be added. Lost has 8 more hours to finish theirs. Ghost had another day. | Spell, Since the dragons were filled when you completed I'd be willing to allow him as a side character. But he would need to be fixed first. His abilities are where my issue is. First, Ominous Light feels like an amalgamation of different types of dragons, but nothing about it seems to pertain to Light. The power also feels extremely Overpowered. So I won't be accepting that power. Second, for Solar Aura there are three distinctive aspects to it that should all count for their own power, like how I have Akhens invenomation.
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Imperial Sands said:
If you don't mind ^^ I just think that it slicing under scales everytime would be unlikely, as dragons are all different in terms of their scales. How their own abilities work for defense/shielding/armor, and just in general. It's hard to say that would be how it attacks everytime yanno? ^^
And let me go read the personality real fast.
Lost Love said:
My bad if it made it seem like she ALWAYS manages to hit. I meat it like when she does manage to land a slash it always lands underneath their scales. If thats not okay ill change it again! But I decided to change up her personality. let me know if more to personality is needed. <3
Okay! I changed her ability a bit. Let me know if her personality is alright. |
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I should be done with my character. But I can make edits if you want
Imperial Sands said:
Yuuna is accepted. | Lost Love and Ghosts Reservation will be added. Lost has 8 more hours to finish theirs. Ghost had another day. | Spell, Since the dragons were filled when you completed I'd be willing to allow him as a side character. But he would need to be fixed first. His abilities are where my issue is. First, Ominous Light feels like an amalgamation of different types of dragons, but nothing about it seems to pertain to Light. The power also feels extremely Overpowered. So I won't be accepting that power. Second, for Solar Aura there are three distinctive aspects to it that should all count for their own power, like how I have Akhens invenomation.
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Imperial Sands said:
If you don't mind ^^ I just think that it slicing under scales everytime would be unlikely, as dragons are all different in terms of their scales. How their own abilities work for defense/shielding/armor, and just in general. It's hard to say that would be how it attacks everytime yanno? ^^
And let me go read the personality real fast.
Lost Love said:
My bad if it made it seem like she ALWAYS manages to hit. I meat it like when she does manage to land a slash it always lands underneath their scales. If thats not okay ill change it again! But I decided to change up her personality. let me know if more to personality is needed. <3
Imperial I see when your online... I see you starting ten billion other roleplays... Don't be shy read my personality already (hj |
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