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Oh shit, I missed some stuff... xD
First of stop it Det TvT I feel so bad for Slicker now and I refuse to feel bad for hitting someone who hurt him😤 Also now I'm super conflicted because I was planning to make my post kinda include a tiny bit about William's past and then it would be kinda dark but now I feel so bad for Slicker that I just wanna make it sweet and have Will comfort him but I really shouldn't because the original plan would be more Will than the second... Agh
As for what happened with Matt and Slicker... Definitely something with a fire given the dream from Matt and I'm also thinking that maybe someone found out about their relationship and Matt put everything on Slicker, saying he took advantage of him or something, (hence why he now feels he took advantage of Will perhaps??). As for the scars maybe the barn caught fire and Slicker went to save Matt and ended up getting burnt?
I love both of your writing styles and I really love this RP, easily my favorite RP I have going on and I'm so in love with all your characters. I definitely have stuff I need to get better at with my writing, dialogue being one I feel.
I can definitely see now why Del only becomes more and more of a sarcastic and impulsive little shit when he gets older xD Three moms with completely different personalities that for sure will clash and two traumatized gay uncles, him and Aiden can never say they had a boring childhood atleast!
We got a plan for how the next posts for Esther and the crew should go or not? Because if we did then I definitely don't remember xD
Oh I'm a sucker for OC playlists, definitely gonna listen to it when I get time! |
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pffft you're fine Roaw! alright but you might regret that lol. I am just going to say now, both are almost equally at fault. why not do both though? have dark post but also have William comfort Slicker and Slicker comfort him too? I love both of your theories so far and I cannot wait to show you both all of their story. you both get really close in a lot of ways but are missing some key things and I cannot wait to share that. dialogue is so fun to write though! then again, I draw a lot of inspiration from Catcher in the Rye and the Body so I am kinda forced to love it... Aiden going from having one helluva rude nun for a mom to three moms and two uncles is just gold. technically even five moms if you count Roxie and her woman though... Maybe six if you count Ollie's? this is a wild family, man- uhhhh I dont know? you can maybe make her put the animals away and bury the body before looking at the unconscious but soon to wake up Alice? :D |
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No, I refuse to believe Slicker did anything wrong, he's a precious little baby in my eyes! A very dirty minded and flirty one but still!
Hmm I might have an idea... Now I really wanna write it but I need to pack my shit for when I leave tomorrow and I should write an Esther post first also TvT Damn
Stop teasing us xD Now I really want to know what happened!
It is but I always feel like I struggle so much with properly portraying my character's personality in their dialogue, if that makes sense?
A very wild family xD Poor boys
Yeah I'll probably do something like that, maybe I write it tomorrow in the car home, I'll try to atleast |
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precious little baby my ass! XD and believe me, he did. the bad thing he did still influences how he acts to this date. how about you write for an hour or half and hour and then go pack and once you finish you can come back and continue? hehehehe okay okay I will stop! hmm that makes sense... I guess if this helps, pay more attention to the people you talk to normally. of course, pay attention to things like if they dont pronounce hard ds or smush words together, but more thing about what your friends' personalities are and how they talk and interact with others. sorry if this doesnt make sense but it helps me when writing stories! well dont worry too much about it and take your time! |
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I'm so excited for his backstory TvT
I'm going to a festival now so I can't, Stopplemarkt or something like that but I did throw most of what I needed to into my bags so shouldn't be too much tomorrow
I'll try that, sounds like a good tactic or whatever you could call it xD
I have like 7 hours in the car tomorrow so I should be able to do it hah |
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honestly, I'd be more excited for Lucile's if I was you- Sandy has so much planned and I love her character entirely!! ooo okay! glad you got packed but go have fun now, alright?? oh my gosh- I hate long car rides like that. its even worse when my family call 14 hours a short ride... |
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I'm excited for every single post here because they are always amazing and both of yous characters are so damn good and I love them all!
Yes sir🫡 I'm in the car already we're there in like 15 minutes but I promise to have fun xD
It's so tiring and it's not like I can be so hungover and sleep in the car after tonight because I go with my grandparents... They were going to Germany anyway and it fit with me going home |
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pffft I am glad you love our characters then! tell us how it is when you get back, alright?? AND STAY SAFE oh.. oh no.. good luck... |
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Oo, good luck on your trip, and the festival Roaw! Make sure to tell us how it was :D And 7 hours?! I think the longest trip I've gone on was 4 hours. And how is 14 hours meant to be a short ride??? TvT - I'm so glad your excited for Lucile's backstory Determined! Theres tons I'm planning to do with it, but still, Slicker and Matt backstory got me wondering 👀 - "So which ones your mom?" "All of them." Also, "Roxie and her woman" lmao, they aren't even technically together. They're in some kinda very back and forth "dang, you cute", "You too", "We should kiss", "Good idea, but that'd be kinda gay bro", "Oh yeah, your right... but I'd still do it", "Same". Ollie's wife Mary Jane gonna give em two siblings though. You get a brother whos scared of most shit that moves and a sister who isn't scared of anything. - After Esther is posted for I'll do one last Lucile post before I'd say its safe for us to timeskip to the next morning if y'all fine with that? |
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bro my family is crazy- when we drive 20 hours for family in one night it is always wild hehehe if you are willing to pm me some info on Lucile, I might tell you a little bit on Matt and Slicker, but I am sorry to say you both are totally not able to even guess what is going on since I have yet to lay out enough clues- pffft "All of them" should be our slogan Roxie being a gay disaster like the rest of the cast just makes so much sense. also more siblings!! :D that works for me!! |
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