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Don't worry! Take your time. If you feel motivated to do one thing, I won't tell you not to do that.
Okay so hear me out- Ethan and Cal cheating at charades. Both know Morse code so they can communicate without actual speaking. No one can beat them and everyone breaks into a semi-heated/playful debate any time it's mentioned. |
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Aries has probably never played charades, and would probably try-hard his way into winning at least once against them. Otherwise he'd try hard his way into a secret championship without ever playing with the group again after he loses once, because he doesn't want to embrass himself by playing with them again. But then he'd go on and win the championship. He's crazy. And hilarious. |
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Hmm... How angsty should I do this? There's actually a few planned out moments near the end that I could do without spoiling too much. But which one? - We have a nice, little wholesome moment that has a lot of underlying messages and manipulation and just overall toxic relationship stuff. - We have a super angsty, take a break before coming back one that has some pretty dark implications. - We have a relatively angsty one that's sprinkled with concern and fluff, all the while manipulation lays underneath. - And those are your choices. |
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Probably the first or last one would work best. I like the idea of writing actually fooling the readers into believing that a character is good like in the Cask of Amontillado but despite it being well known that they are bad. |
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So the second one it is then, since you have no solid choice. Either way, no worries! The second one does that too, actually. It's far darker and has ton more gaslighting and manipulation that truly does just imply the worst things. It's bad. But the lover seems good... Ish. |
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Alrighty! I trust your judgement and story telling on this!! Now I am just going to be waiting excitedly for your post. |
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Not even done yet and I'm already at 1500+ words. Jeez... This one is so heavy. It starts out fairly wholesome, and then takes a dip(haha, I'm terrible, you don't even understand yet) off into the deep end. Jeez though, I still got so much to do. It does span a good chunk of time though, to be fair. |
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Ta daaa! Enjoy the not so small story. |
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Whoooooh boy. Two drugged rape stories in less than a week. Memery you better have enough fluff to make up for it. Please. Super good!! I loved how well written it is. This genuinely make me gasp in horror. Twice. |
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Haha, yeah. Aries is no stranger to questioning reality. Oh, and we get one very manipulative boyfriend, honestly- Smith is worse than J in some ways. But trust me, no lover has truly torn Aries down as much as well... Actually. It's probably a tie between Smith and the second lover, those two were brutal for him. Smith got really bad near the end, the second one was relatively bad throughout(and got worse as time went on) but due to literally everything Aries tried to stick it out. - I've also pinned all the other short stories, tell me if I've missed one though. |
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