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 Northwest Wind Pack
08:07:47 Windy
ET
Ok, thanks!
 The Tea Drinkers
08:06:14 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- Bloop. So much plotting >:D come join
 Wilverbeast
08:04:46 Will
@Etea

Ah perfection
I'm just gonna do a song or two >:]
 Eternity
08:04:13 ET
I think as long as you're not linking to your own Spotify playlist/account it's alright.
 Wilverbeast
08:04:03 Will
@Qyu

Cool cool :0
I'll ask a mod later tonight to be sure
 Eternity
08:03:47 ET
Northwest Wind
It just isn't, that's just how the game is/the custom maker has been set up since it was created. There's a suggestion to change that, here:
-WP Click-
 Nochnoy
08:03:47 Noch | He/Him
Will -

I did a Spotify link the other day so I'd assume it would be fine because no one yelled at me for it
 Qyusen
08:02:59 Qyu - all pronouns
The rules say "offsite chats and other games" so i'm inclined to say spotify would be ok? Don't quote me on that
 Devils Heart
08:01:40 FizenDevil, Zeni
-WP Click-

Can't wait to customize you *^*
 Wilverbeast
08:00:38 Will
Hey hey chat
Do we know if Spotify links are coolio? Or does that fall under "outside links" and it's better to just do song names
 Northwest Wind Pack
07:58:50 Windy
Hey guys, I have a question. Why is it not possible to modify the color of the markings on the head, tail, legs and inner ears of custom wolves independently? I had already asked in the "help me" section, but just in case I'm asking here too.
 Devils Heart
07:57:24 FizenDevil, Zeni
Desti - thank you ^^
 Nochnoy
07:56:02 Noch | He/Him
Desti -

Hello =)
 Destinations End
07:55:43 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Zeni
Sure
 Devils Heart
07:53:18 FizenDevil, Zeni
Desti - could you fix sales? Somebody kindof spammed posted. >.>
 Destinations End
07:49:45 Toliska, Desti, Coy
Heya.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:43:38 Tea, Tea Queen
Noch
Ahhh bummer :,)
 Nochnoy
07:43:03 Noch | He/Him
Tea -

I'm scared tho T.T my ADD/ADHD ass can't manage that much
 The Tea Drinkers
07:42:03 Tea, Tea Queen
Noch
I gotta shower so I can't chat long >.> however, if you get any ideas for drama, shoot me a PM >:D

Alsooo, if you're looking to pass time, you could always make another character 😘
 Nochnoy
07:40:56 Noch | He/Him
Tea -

Lol my bad

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM

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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM

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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM

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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM

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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM

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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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