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 Pink Tears
01:26:58 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
well i just made my creepiest doc
 Cryptid
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Quick question, where the heck do people get charon's blessing coins from?
 Insomnia
01:21:29 Skye
Would anyone be interested in a literate wolf rp? I have no plot in mind so open to brainstorm<3 pms or forums, but pm me to chat!
 Embershed
01:20:27 The Minor Nuisance
Clay finds a nest of baby birds and eats them.

Stats: Luck +1
Mood: Devious

NOOOOO! Clay! How could you ?! T_T
 Pink Tears
01:19:59 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
scatter

yeah but im out of melatonin
 FaithfulOakTree
01:19:47 Ash H:H!!
Melody rests their gaze intently on Sweetest Desire Of Poison..

Stats: Social +3
Mood: Flirty

Melody love.. Sweet already has a assigned stud to go with..
 Scatterboard
01:18:55 Scatter
Well, sounds like you have yourself an answer then.
 Pink Tears
01:18:18 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
scatter

i got school tomorrow

today was a very tramatic experience with school so i dont wanna be asleep tomorrow-
 Scatterboard
01:17:35 Scatter
I intend to stay up all night, do whatever suits you
 Pink Tears
01:15:44 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
should i sleep-

this random writing low key sounds like a threat somehow-

"dogs must be named."

like im zoning out then finding that-
 Scatterboard
01:14:08 Scatter
They should be, from what I remember.
 Boeing
01:13:48 Boeing, or Boe
Will the affinity with my pack be good or excellent if I go from the party?
 Silver via
01:12:48 Silv, Via
Boeing
I say Trading Post, you can get what you want a lot faster. It's not as fun, but still
 Scatterboard
01:12:45 Scatter
The wolves I've gotten have anywhere from 20 - 200 character points, its hard to make an estimate though
 angxl_pack
01:12:15 Angxl | ♡ | He
Boeing
I've got a few pretty wolves on level one, I find it good when you maybe don't really have any wolves but want one quickly without having to look through the TP but others might disagree
 Boeing
01:12:01 Boeing, or Boe
Scatter, how low should I expect if I got one form there?
 Pink Tears
01:11:55 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
what am i even writing

according to me

dogs have eternal youth if with puppies
dogs will die if puppies are removed
pitbulls can have a defect making them aggressive
and males dont exist
 Boeing
01:11:36 Boeing, or Boe
6:11pm here :)
 Scatterboard
01:11:27 Scatter
I find that the wolf party isn't usually worth it tbh, the wolves are usually very low in character points
 Silver via
01:11:20 Silv, Via
Cyber
good! I'm doing okay

Pink
... Totally random but I wish people could do that sometimes-
Also not the weirdest thing I've ever heard of :')

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Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 06:24 AM

0Written The Wolf
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Hi ^^ so I have this art piece I am working on and I am not happy with how water/puddle looks-it is supposed to be very shallow(so paws not being below water is kinda what I have been going for, thou you can comment your disagreement on that too and explain how and why to fix it). My issue with water is-it looks pretty muddy and yeah it is muddy water so it makes sense XD but also undefined, non trasculent and overall pretty fake looking water ;-; if water can look fake... It does not destroy the whole art, but I kind of wanna improve on it . And water circles look so out of place fdespite them having to be there cause it is raining and I ant it depicted that way :'3 maybe I just need another way to style them? Dunno?
Transculent water bolbs are sketch-so I have yet to define them, they are being water bended. You can give water advice for them too. And yeah I might lower that brightnes cause overall atmosphere is murky, thou I might keep shine to reflect how water is being manipuled by some unnatural power.
I am unsure if I will color lines of wolf cause on one hand it would fit with lineless background, but on the other black lines make him pop. Feel free to advise.
And links to tutorials would be helpful too :3
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 06:34 AM

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I think the water looks pretty good in general, but to make it more "water like" I would bring the water up the paws a little (very little) because when you look at water touching something it seem to go up a bit :)
I think you should also add like a basic reflection of the wolf, and since it's raining, if you make the wolf look more wet and dripping with water, I feel like it would really make the mood your looking for :D
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 07:14 AM

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Ah if only I wasn't in classes until 5pm today D:
Water is a super tricky thing to draw, so you're doing well!
Once I get out of my classes I can show you how I do it if it would help - I can't explain what I mean with words very well
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 12:37 PM

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Not Debbie said:
I think the water looks pretty good in general, but to make it more "water like" I would bring the water up the paws a little (very little) because when you look at water touching something it seem to go up a bit :)
I think you should also add like a basic reflection of the wolf, and since it's raining, if you make the wolf look more wet and dripping with water, I feel like it would really make the mood your looking for :D


*facepalm* Honestly, thank you so much cause I forget shadow or reflection 90% of the time unless I plan on it having some kind of semi-central role. Thank you for other advices too :3
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 12:39 PM

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Eternity said:
Ah if only I wasn't in classes until 5pm today D:
Water is a super tricky thing to draw, so you're doing well!
Once I get out of my classes I can show you how I do it if it would help - I can't explain what I mean with words very well


I will patiently wait :)
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 01:11 PM

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A bit rushed, but this might help! :0 this is how I usually do stuff with water. I hope you don't mind me doodling over the top of your image!
It looks really good as is!

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Edited at February 27, 2023 01:12 PM by Eternity
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 01:16 PM

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Thank you a lot :D (I should have put going over art as okay, but I kinda forgot ^^"") your edits do make it look better and fitted in with atmosphere.
special thank you for wet fur cause I was lost on how to do that too XD

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