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Critique please!November 11, 2020 04:58 PM

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Exactly what the title says, critique away!
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Edited at November 11, 2020 04:59 PM by Flower Field
Critique please!November 11, 2020 05:46 PM

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They lookin' mighty thick 0///0
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:52 PM

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Lol they are thicc but gotta love that qwq
I am not a artist but for the one on the left, I think its face needs to be a bit longer like the one on the right because rats (and mice) tend to have longer faces and noses that stick out like buttons ^^
Maybe work on the toes a little if this is a comm?
Otherwise that is so cute and gorgeous! Love your style <3

Edited at November 11, 2020 06:53 PM by Crescents
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:56 PM

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oh god

thicc rats are just what i needed

uhh tails look a bit short, I would make them just a touch longer. the noses should stick out a little more too
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:57 PM

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Critique please!November 11, 2020 07:48 PM

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I didn't even notice how thick they are at first XD
Yeah, the toes are really annoying to draw but it's not a comm so we good.

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