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 Blade of Dreams
05:29:47 Winter, anything
Caeli,
ThatÂ’s so cool!
Fyre,
I just got stabbed by this taxidermy pufferfish that IÂ’m holding, but IÂ’m pretty good!
 Nightwood
05:29:26 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Blazer,

Oh no! My PM'S are open if you need to vent. As for me, I'm alright, thanks.
 WolffHowlinton
05:29:15 
you said, fire
 Hunting Leopard
05:29:09 It's I Nesta
Fire
Pretty not good. You?
 Salem
05:29:07 Salem (He/They)
Vote?
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 Austan vindar
05:28:52 Dont call me Blep :P
BAGELLL!
 Blade of Dreams
05:28:30 Winter, anything
TOPAZ!!!
YouÂ’re back!!!
Wolff,
Okay. IÂ’m not gonna make it anyway.
 WolffHowlinton
05:28:30 
firepack? what, me confused???
 Hunting Leopard
05:28:20 It's I Nesta
*nightmare*
 Hunting Leopard
05:28:14 It's I Nesta
Night,are
Horrible. You?
 Nightwood
05:28:04 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Hey Geronimo, Hey Blazer! ^^ How are you?
 The Sunshine Walkers
05:27:59 Sunny, Shine (he/him
Nesta
Ahh ok
 FirePack
05:27:55 Autumn/Fire
Nesta
Hello fam! How're you?
 Caeli
05:27:47 
Blade of Dreams

Me too! :D
 Hunting Leopard
05:27:31 It's I Nesta
Fire
Fyre is Nightwood
 The Sunshine Walkers
05:27:28 Sunny, Shine (he/him
People using nicknames that aren't like the pack nicknames genuinely make me feel like I'm loosing my marbles lol
 Hunting Leopard
05:27:15 It's I Nesta
Fire!
 WolffHowlinton
05:27:03 
ooohhh, ok then. blade, you got that mixed up, I have a game tomorrow and gym's Friday. two days from here
 FirePack
05:26:44 Autumn/Fire
Who is "Fyre"?
 Hunting Leopard
05:26:30 It's I Nesta
Nightmare hey

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Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM

Dystopia
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On this boi, thinking about making a private species
also looking for priceing help, so if you'd put around what you'd pay for somthing like this that would be great
the wings are supposed to be that small, these are magic based creatures and their wings grown when they need to fly

Edited at October 30, 2020 02:41 PM by Fr3ak
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM

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All credit to me
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:37 AM

X-Marxs The Spot
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This would look like a really creative species! I'd definitely pay, like, 200-300 mush for one of these!
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:43 AM

Makato
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They be pretty. I'd pay somewhere around 500-1000
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 11:12 AM

Adira
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I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 12:33 PM

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Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.


Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 01:55 PM

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I don't know if this helps or not but it looks like the antlers are sitting on top of the head instead of coming from it. Also 500 to 1000 for sure^^

Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 02:18 PM

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Crescents said:

Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)


I would pay like.... 200-500 mush for something like this
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM

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I would probably pay around 300-350 mush, I think. As for criticism, the feathers going down the front legs/elbows seem to be a little off. I don't know exactly what it is, but they don't seem to follow the form of the leg quite as they should. Otherwise it looks great!
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM

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THIS IS AWSOME!

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