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02:45:52 Asmodeus (he/they)
hello I have come to bless you all with my presence
 Crypto Currency
02:44:37 Ash they/them
Cy, I made a type lol. I meant to put 2, not 42 xD
If I tried climbing 42 levels, I would also probably pass out lol
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02:44:25 Mama Dee
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First custom for my new pack^^
 Crypto Currency
02:44:03 Ash they/them
Cy, hmm. Yes, totally get that check out lol
 Cypress Road
02:43:51 Cy, love
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If I tried climbing 42 levels I'd probably black out round level 7 or 8.
 Cypress Road
02:43:04 Cy, love
Cry
My breathing gets bad, heart races and I feel as if I'm about to collapse. It ain't fun. And I know I'm not just out of shape as I have always had this problem of getting out of breath and light head. Just never had. Smart watch to tell me my heart rate til now
 Crypto Currency
02:42:00 Ash they/them
Cy, you're good lol
 Crypto Currency
02:41:51 Ash they/them
2, not 42 lol
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02:41:24 Cy, love
Wrong person sorry trying to answer my friend at same time. XD that message was mentioned for her. She found an old conversation from a while ago and asked how bad it would be if she started talking to then again.
 Cypress Road
02:39:46 Cy, love
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I bet depending on how old it is. Few years ago definitely. Few months ago probably not too bad
 Crypto Currency
02:39:39 Ash they/them
Cy, yep. climbed 42 levels and was huffing, puffing, and blowing the house down lmao
 Crypto Currency
02:38:12 Ash they/them
Cy, ooh. it sucks, I'll tell ya that
 Cypress Road
02:38:03 Cy, love
Cry
Really?
L
 Cypress Road
02:37:46 Cy, love
I gotta set up an appointment with my doctor and talk to her about the possibility of me having pots.
 Crypto Currency
02:37:09 Ash they/them
Yall-I found my old nickname sheet *^*
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02:35:35 Ash they/them
Cy, same >.<
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02:34:33 Chat's snack
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I hope she gives me something good.
 Cypress Road
02:33:01 Cy, love
I just climbed to flights of stairs and checked my heart rate and it was 130
 Cypress Road
02:32:24 Cy, love
Yall I think I need to stop climbing stairs.
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thank goodness.

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM

Vennenum
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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM

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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM

Vennenum
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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM

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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM

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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM

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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM

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And the eyes are a little small

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