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Mudpaws brushes against Sandstorms shoulder, eager to hunt.

Stats: Social +1
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Sandstorm growls dominantly at Mudpaws.


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Critique please!April 21, 2020 04:23 PM

Zora
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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!
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I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:14 PM

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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:17 PM

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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:20 PM

Zora
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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:33 PM

Reathmuaz
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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:34 PM

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Your welcome, keep up the good art!

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