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11:43:31 Silv, Via

Fei
... how many unread messages? I'm kinda scared to know-

11:43:14 Asmodeus (he/they)

woods

start trek came out before star wars

11:42:55 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Hey Feiella!

11:42:48 The Minor Nuisance

xd my computer died...gonna go now.

11:42:40 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Hey Caeli! How are you? =)

Suburban Disaster

11:42:36 Key | Froggy | Keevy

Aus,
Yay! Thank you!

11:41:50 Dont call me Blep :P

Forgy, You are formally invited back to chat.

Bagel, :>

11:41:39 Fei the demon

I'm back and what the fuck with my mail?

11:41:35

Woods!

11:41:01 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Asmodeus,

I'd say they're a bit different, but I've watched maybe 1 and a half episodes of Star Trek sadly. =(

Austanley,

Oh ^^'

11:38:51 Dont call me Blep :P

Bagel, No. Forgy is grounded for saying very funny yet embarrassing things in chat. he shall remain out until 11:40 game time./jk

Also, thank you =D

Suburban Disaster

11:38:45 Key | Froggy | Keevy

Nightwood,
Aus kicked me out, and I must obey :(

11:38:39 Asmodeus (he/they)

I have watched Star Trek though, I love star trek

11:37:58 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Cannibal,

I hereby invite you back <3

Austanley,

That's good! =D

11:37:13 Dont call me Blep :P

Hehehe, I watched both avatars twice in one day :>>

Suburban Disaster

11:37:11 Key | Froggy | Keevy

Nightwood,
Ive been kicked out of chat by the way

11:36:52 Dont call me Blep :P

Bagel, Im fine :>

11:36:50 Chat's snack

I tried watching Star Wars. I don't have the attention span for it.

11:36:44 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Cannibal! Hello!

11:36:29 Woods, Woody (he/ th

Austanley,

Good, thank you! ^^ How are you?

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March 3, 2020 12:15 PM

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Any advice/suggestions for this - https://postimg.cc/sQftw23n

(I haven't lined it yet or put in color)

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:29 PM by Flower Field

March 3, 2020 12:19 PM

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It)s adorable! Maybe do some creams or reds when you color it in? Otherwise, beautiful!

March 3, 2020 12:51 PM

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Define the face a bit more. Other than that, it's great!

March 3, 2020 12:52 PM

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I am jealous....why

March 3, 2020 12:54 PM

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The right side of the mouth looks a tad bit distorted to me. And I think it would be rather cool if you gave a bit more attention to the 'extra' flowers or maybe choose one or two types of flowers to use in the entire piece.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty great! That's mostly just my personal opinion.

Edited at March 3, 2020 12:55 PM by Hollow_Howls

March 3, 2020 12:58 PM

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Thanks for the advice so far guys! I'm gonna work on it a bit more then post a new picture of it.

March 4, 2020 04:37 PM

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Here's one of the colored copies! (I made copies to color so I have more if I wanna change something) - https://postimg.cc/5j1YPtVv

Edited at March 4, 2020 04:38 PM by Flower Field

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