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07:58:57 Da ba dee

Sunset Shadow falls down.

Mood: Sheepish

07:58:47 Tae/DH Queen

Nux,
Shes a dark abyss

07:58:13 Dojeje

There use to be more people on here

07:57:58 You're just yellow

Could someone do me a favor and go to my den and hover over Glitch and tell me if he's glitched for you too?

07:57:54 Tae/DH Queen

These noobs can't even handle cougars. To be fair I only have four wolves right now but still

Still need bald eagle feathers?

07:57:23 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
Rhinos and elephants are a good prey, as long as you are not the one fighting them lol

07:56:29 Amy/Anpmygdala

Tiny creature
-Click-

07:56:17 Cae, Blue

me and my trainees against 4 rhinos... i dont even know what else i expected aside from my wolves getting demolished :(

07:54:58 Tae/DH Queen

Yeahh.
My BE trainees keep getting whooped and I really want to be the top explorer pack - basic

07:54:39 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
I didn't vaccum her she hid herself🤣

All good i found her now

07:53:19 Cae, Blue

oh, blue jays? i still have my stash of them from hunting grendels mothers, hold on-

07:52:45 Dojeje

How do you do this pong minigame thing?

07:52:23 Tae/DH Queen

Cres,
What a prick.. The sole reason I am exploring the swamp is for blue jay feathers and he is withholding them.

07:51:10 Cae, Blue

tae, that guy doesnt even run away from my 55k+ ;-;

amy, how could you vacuum up your kitten D:

07:41:03 Amy/Anpmygdala

I vacumed the floor and now my kitten is gone😅

07:39:55 Tae/DH Queen

lol yeahh. I am not going all out like I use to! Just don't want my pack to get clapped every 5 seconds by the bird watcher

07:39:46 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
I hope i can get some tomorrow 🥲

I want to get 10k dominance

07:38:52 Cae, Blue

oh, thats not too bad <.<

07:34:24 Tae/DH Queen

Cres,

I only have 5 more I need so the market will be freed from my mush soon

07:33:54 Cae, Blue

oop- cant help with that, all svs are keepers :P

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Some critique on recent peices

August 6, 2019 08:11 PM

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Title says it all

https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=38129

Some critique on recent peices

August 6, 2019 08:26 PM

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Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

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August 6, 2019 08:28 PM

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Sablecrest Guardians said:
Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

The lineart for my work is something I'm always trying to improve and bring in new techmiques

But wow never would I ever think that so thank you so so much ❤️

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August 7, 2019 01:15 AM

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Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesn’t exactly fit with the background. For number six I’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

Edited at August 7, 2019 01:15 AM by Pride Klaw

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August 7, 2019 04:52 AM

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Oh wow thank you so much!

And yep I agree with everything you say fior 7

Pride Klaw said:
Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesnÂ’t exactly fit with the background. For number six IÂ’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

Some critique on recent peices

August 7, 2019 07:33 PM

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Still looking for some constructive criticism

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August 7, 2019 08:18 PM

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I think on 5 and 9 could be better blended into the background, and the rest I would clean up the line work.

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August 7, 2019 08:19 PM

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Thank you for your tips and yes I'm definatly trying to improve line work and mess with techniques as we speka

And with backgrounds it's something I struggle with doing phoot manip so I'll try and do that

Spring Spark said:
I think on 5 and 9 could be better blended into the background, and the rest I would clean up the line work.

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