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 Bobcat
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Arrow
I know the annoyance.
 Blades of Fire
07:06:30 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
Thanks. Though they're a year older than me, it's super hard training anyone how to ride XD
 Blades of Fire
07:05:43 Night, Whisp, Fire
Wander runs around in the snow.

Stats: Agility +1
Mood: Happy

What snow
 Bobcat
07:05:35 (She/Her) Cat
Arrow
Good luck with your cousins. You might need it.
 Blades of Fire
07:04:24 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
I might have to leave soon, my cousins coming around 10 and my dad and I need to get the bikes working/started up
 Blades of Fire
07:03:03 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
Fun!
 Bobcat
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Arrow
Mine is martial arts. I promoting to apprentice black belt tomorrow.
 Blades of Fire
07:01:38 Night, Whisp, Fire
I need a banner before my premium runs out...
 Blades of Fire
06:59:43 Night, Whisp, Fire
It was either dirtbikes or my bunny. When my bunny died, dirtbikes were my go-to
 Blades of Fire
06:58:57 Night, Whisp, Fire
Lol
 Bobcat
06:58:41 (She/Her) Cat
Arrow

We all have that 1 thing that does that.
 Blades of Fire
06:57:01 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
It's SUPER fun once you know how to do it safely. It's probably the only this that is keeping me truly sane XD
 Bobcat
06:53:33 (She/Her) Cat
Arrow

I want to learn how to ride a dirt bike.
 Blades of Fire
06:53:15 Night, Whisp, Fire
I also only have 11 days left of premium
 Blades of Fire
06:50:35 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
Lol. My cousin wants to learn how to ride one
 Bobcat
06:47:42 (She/Her) Cat
Arrow

Lucky. I only have badminton.
 Blades of Fire
06:46:20 Night, Whisp, Fire
Crystal,
Good! I'm happy because I'm going to do some dirtbike riding today
 Bobcat
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Hi Pizza, Arrow. How are you guys?
 Blades of Fire
06:43:57 Night, Whisp, Fire
Peppy,
Who? Crystal is my nickname for Bobcat
 PizzaDragon
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oh sorry hey cystal!

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:29 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/43BvHBPL/Determination.png

Can I get some critiques on the BG mostly? Something about it bothers me, just don't know what
And, yea, I realize there are no craters in the moon.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:48 PM

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The mountains look a bit odd, since mountains have different shapes, not only a /\ as top ^^

The light seems like it's like seems to spill out, or it's the detail of the mountains, and you already mentioned the moon crates missing.
In my opinion the moon is a tad large but if ya liked it better this way, than it's fine!
But damn the details in this piece is insane, well done ;w;

Edited at January 27, 2019 02:51 PM by Neytrix
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 06:31 PM

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Thank you so much Dragon! I see what you mean by all your suggestions :) and I think I might need to lower the other eyebrow :3
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 07:05 PM

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Thank you Trixy!
Oof, considering I practically live in the mountains you'd think I know better :,)


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No problem. Yea, that would help too ^^

Edited at January 27, 2019 07:07 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:04 PM

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Better?
https://i.postimg.cc/rFGTnyHd/Noodle5.png
https://i.postimg.cc/MGzRgGtv/Noodle4.png

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:05 PM by B R A V E
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:50 PM

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Oof, those are so cute *.*
I literally can't see a single thing wrong with them!
Great job!

(Shoot, now I'm dying for some of your art XD)

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:51 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 11:04 PM

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Lol thank you so much! It means a lot coming from artists I look up to I just wish I could be more detailed in my fur. But I did open up a shop...that just got full but I do have a shop XD
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 02:04 PM

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Thank you, midnight demons, and thanks, Dragon's Fire, I know what you mean.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 04:29 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/DZ6XRXRB/Untitled41.jpg
Looking for some tips on this peice ^^
Wip for a contest

Also if you could try and physically show anatomy errors that would be Awsome!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 06:48 PM

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Your background is amazing, I am horrible at backgrounds myself and appreciate the effort that goes into a good one.

I've drawn a draft for the two figures, and it would perfectly fit over that image, if you wanted to copy it as a layer and use it for reference.

Your legs are a bit boneless, but that's perfectly alright, and a commen mistake. The joints don't bend quite right, and are a bit over-extended. Your noses are a little droopy, and the heads, for the size of the animals, could be a bit too big, but that is more a choice of style than anything else.

Your tail is beautiful, even in draft form. It has a very natural position.

Wings never have to be accurate, unless they are on a bird, but I personally like to make the joints a bit more visible, to show the weight of a wing that size.

https://i.postimg.cc/6phHwty3/yjomh.png

I am far from great at anatomy myself, so feel free to dismiss my draft.

Edited at January 28, 2019 06:49 PM by Coyote

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