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@Succubus It looks really good! OwO If you'd ever like to do an art trade I'm open- The only really nitpicky thing I have to say is that the lower jaw doesn't look in line with the top because of the teeth and jaw position. Its just more sideways compared to the upper muzzle. I'm really bad at giving advice like this :') But otherwise it looks awesome! Oh my goodness thank you! Now that you mention the jaw off place is really great for this... It's supposed to be a character who's face has been exposed to radiation, the owner wants a lot of GORE and defects.
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@SUCCUBUS Glad I could help! <3 And ooo, that sounds really cool! I need to finish the rest of my art trades and and commissions-
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Swifty- Thanks! :3 - Mist- It's a cat :0
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Why does my art motivation go bye bye so much :'(
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@Krow Oh, didn't know that XD
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Can I get critique on this? The arms look kinda wonky to me :,)
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:O I love that SO much The only thing i see is that on the front arm the bicep might be a lttle shorter than the forearm, they should be the same length unless you're dealong with odd angles. You could drop the elbow down a bit to fix that and maybe make it look a bit more relaxed? And for the back one I would accentuate the elbow a little more and maybe make the forearm a tiny bit of a sharper angle in? It looks amazing though, I love the detail :O Is that your OC? Edited at January 25, 2022 11:43 PM by Fusty-Dudget
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Any criticism? The wolf seems off. Edited at January 26, 2022 03:05 PM by Mist Fall Wolves
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Mist- Our styles are so different so this may not help much ^^" - The chest should pop out a bit more? It seems like it's a straight diagonal line without a curve- And The ears are a bit small or something? :')
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@Mist Hmm... The ears seem a bit small, and strangely shaped in a way. Maybe look at a reference? The eye looks too small and I can't tell which way the pupil is supposed to be looking. The forehead also seems too narrow and the muzzle seems either too long or too big Edited at January 26, 2022 03:40 PM by Black_Sand
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