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TheFlyingKitten

10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!

10:32:13 a rock in your shoe

petri
me neither

SouthernScorpion

10:32:07 Scorpion

how do i use my relic to stagger dom?

TheFlyingKitten

10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:

10:24:36 Cervo

moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!

10:22:10 Many moons, one me

Oleander
They're gorgeous!!

10:20:51 Cervo

Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80

10:20:12 Many moons, one me

Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her

SouthernScorpion

10:15:53 Scorpion

messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response

10:11:38 Xan

Ello chat

10:08:35

WP mods are very good

10:07:14

Evergreen is a mod and online

10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy

Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it

SouthernScorpion

10:06:30 Scorpion

it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking

10:06:00 Your local therapist

Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon

10:05:25 Your local therapist

It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue

SouthernScorpion

10:04:51 Scorpion

I pm'd the only one online

10:03:30 Zuko/Legacy

Your*

10:03:15 Zuko/Legacy

Scorpion,

You're best bet is to PM one

SouthernScorpion

10:02:33 Scorpion

Hey i need an admin please

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TheFlyingKitten

10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!

10:32:13 a rock in your shoe

petri
me neither

SouthernScorpion

10:32:07 Scorpion

how do i use my relic to stagger dom?

TheFlyingKitten

10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:

10:24:36 Cervo

moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!

10:22:10 Many moons, one me

Oleander
They're gorgeous!!

10:20:51 Cervo

Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80

10:20:12 Many moons, one me

Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her

SouthernScorpion

10:15:53 Scorpion

messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response

10:11:38 Xan

Ello chat

10:08:35

WP mods are very good

10:07:14

Evergreen is a mod and online

10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy

Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it

SouthernScorpion

10:06:30 Scorpion

it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking

10:06:00 Your local therapist

Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon

10:05:25 Your local therapist

It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue

SouthernScorpion

10:04:51 Scorpion

I pm'd the only one online

10:03:30 Zuko/Legacy

Your*

10:03:15 Zuko/Legacy

Scorpion,

You're best bet is to PM one

SouthernScorpion

10:02:33 Scorpion

Hey i need an admin please

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

Darkseeker

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

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March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

Lightbringer

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

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March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

Darkseeker

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

Lightbringer

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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