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11:58:08 AsStraightAsMySpine

Fei
Ooh that sounds tasty :0 what kind of cookies did you make c: ?

11:57:46 Pack of Sharp Snap

Also made cookies last night and rocky road today ^^ I'm happy

11:57:32 Fossil

Chimera? What else do I need to know?

11:56:25 Mama Maggy

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You're trying to get me trouble XD frozen rubs a strict program

11:56:12 AsStraightAsMySpine

Why are these people tipping me mass amounts of mush it was just some shitty art :’0

11:56:00 Voluntold SV collect

Frozen
I hope to pull like a flax boosted chimera to gift mag ro customize xD

11:55:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Voluntold
Sorry but in real life family only. Besides you don't know what I'm making

11:54:39 Fossil

No one wants to aid me in spoiling Mag. >.>

11:54:12 Voluntold SV collect

Maggy
I didnt tell frozen about the one thing you told me to shush about so...

11:52:15 Fossil

Its only because I love you so dearly. :3 Now spill.

11:51:44 Voluntold SV collect

Feiella
Can I claim to be family? I'm hungry

11:51:36 Mama Maggy

No wait, you're XD

11:51:26 Mama Maggy

Your* Jesus

11:51:17 Mama Maggy

You're both trying to trick me

11:51:10 Pack of Sharp Snap

going to be cooking dinner tonight for family

11:50:15 Voluntold SV collect

Oh can you pm me cause now im morbidly curious
My lips will be sealed xD

11:49:25 Fossil

Say it. :3

11:49:03 Mama Maggy

I can't even say what my perfect present is without fear of frozen getting it lol

11:47:04 Voluntold SV collect

Maggy
We just wanna get you the perfect present :( so much effort is going into it

11:46:32 Fossil

My love language. :3

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11:58:08 AsStraightAsMySpine

Fei
Ooh that sounds tasty :0 what kind of cookies did you make c: ?

11:57:46 Pack of Sharp Snap

Also made cookies last night and rocky road today ^^ I'm happy

11:57:32 Fossil

Chimera? What else do I need to know?

11:56:25 Mama Maggy

Chat
You're trying to get me trouble XD frozen rubs a strict program

11:56:12 AsStraightAsMySpine

Why are these people tipping me mass amounts of mush it was just some shitty art :’0

11:56:00 Voluntold SV collect

Frozen
I hope to pull like a flax boosted chimera to gift mag ro customize xD

11:55:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Voluntold
Sorry but in real life family only. Besides you don't know what I'm making

11:54:39 Fossil

No one wants to aid me in spoiling Mag. >.>

11:54:12 Voluntold SV collect

Maggy
I didnt tell frozen about the one thing you told me to shush about so...

11:52:15 Fossil

Its only because I love you so dearly. :3 Now spill.

11:51:44 Voluntold SV collect

Feiella
Can I claim to be family? I'm hungry

11:51:36 Mama Maggy

No wait, you're XD

11:51:26 Mama Maggy

Your* Jesus

11:51:17 Mama Maggy

You're both trying to trick me

11:51:10 Pack of Sharp Snap

going to be cooking dinner tonight for family

11:50:15 Voluntold SV collect

Oh can you pm me cause now im morbidly curious
My lips will be sealed xD

11:49:25 Fossil

Say it. :3

11:49:03 Mama Maggy

I can't even say what my perfect present is without fear of frozen getting it lol

11:47:04 Voluntold SV collect

Maggy
We just wanna get you the perfect present :( so much effort is going into it

11:46:32 Fossil

My love language. :3

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

Darkseeker

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

Lightbringer

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

Darkseeker

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

Lightbringer

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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