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Critique My ArtJuly 7, 2019 07:57 PM


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Edited at October 30, 2019 05:49 PM by Bearly
Critique My ArtJuly 7, 2019 08:08 PM


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Your painted style is incredible, I feel like you shouldn't change all that much of it since that style is what you are mainly known for. Everything you do looks great though <3
Critique My ArtJuly 7, 2019 08:19 PM


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I absolutely love your work! IÂ’ve seen a lot recently and keep thinking to myself, how can I do that?

What I have done, personally, is draw out a physical sketch by hand then make it digital with a few layers and different tools. IÂ’m still far from my goal, but thatÂ’s what has worked for me. I donÂ’t know if thatÂ’s what you do, but it has helped me.

(If you could give me art criticism, IÂ’d love to know how I could do better as well)
Critique My ArtJuly 7, 2019 08:21 PM


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Wow these are pretty, if IÂ’m being honest you shouldnÂ’t really change anything I mean itÂ’s so good
Critique My ArtJuly 7, 2019 08:24 PM


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Panic! at My Romance said:
Your painted style is incredible, I feel like you shouldn't change all that much of it since that style is what you are mainly known for. Everything you do looks great though <3


Thank you so much <3



Thunder Claw said:
I absolutely love your work! I've seen a lot recently and keep thinking to myself, how can I do that?

What I have done, personally, is draw out a physical sketch by hand then make it digital with a few layers and different tools. I'm still far from my goal, but that's what has worked for me. I don't know if that's what you do, but it has helped me.

(If you could give me art criticism, I'd love to know how I could do better as well)


I actually don't sketch by hand- I prefer to keep my digital art completely digital as I enjoy being able to adjust the sketch with the tools of my program (specifically the undo!). I actually jump straight from sketch to color, and I don't do multiple layers of sketch. I just keep playing with that first layer until I get something that I like- it never turns out right if I draw over a layer unless I'm lining it.
If you'd like some tips, feel free to send me a PM and I'd be happy to help!


Mxmtoon :3 said:
Wow these are pretty, if I'm being honest you shouldn't really change anything I mean it's so good


Thank you!

Edited at July 7, 2019 08:25 PM by ilannaq
Critique My ArtJuly 8, 2019 01:45 AM


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I quite love your art, but, giving constructive criticism here, the one and only thing that has bothered me and driven me crazy is the direction of the fur that you have on the wolf legs. That isn't the direction that fur goes and it's just always been something that bugs me. I did google a few wolf image (just to make sure I was correct on the direction of the fur ^^'), and I believe you should take a look at wolf leg references to help you and guide you with the direction and flow of the fur.

Edited at July 8, 2019 01:49 AM by Mistress Nyx
Critique My ArtJuly 8, 2019 07:26 AM


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Mistress Nyx said:
I quite love your art, but, giving constructive criticism here, the one and only thing that has bothered me and driven me crazy is the direction of the fur that you have on the wolf legs. That isn't the direction that fur goes and it's just always been something that bugs me. I did google a few wolf image (just to make sure I was correct on the direction of the fur ^^'), and I believe you should take a look at wolf leg references to help you and guide you with the direction and flow of the fur.


Yeah that's something that I've also noticed that bugs me, I'll definitely work on fixing that in the future. Thanks!
Critique My ArtJuly 8, 2019 07:36 AM


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something i noticed is the eye placement. at least on the second piece. the eye would usually be a bit higher up, not so align with the nose.

before--

https://i.postimg.cc/cC5VmMxw/Untitled20-20190708082704.png

after--

https://i.postimg.cc/85bGh6fm/Untitled20-20190708082702.png

not exact but yeah. besides that, i love your artwork! your legs are yes.
Critique My ArtJuly 8, 2019 07:47 AM


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ghost said:
something i noticed is the eye placement. at least on the second piece. the eye would usually be a bit higher up, not so align with the nose.

before--

https://i.postimg.cc/cC5VmMxw/Untitled20-20190708082704.png

after--

https://i.postimg.cc/85bGh6fm/Untitled20-20190708082702.png

not exact but yeah. besides that, i love your artwork! your legs are yes.



I agree that the eye may be a little low, but maybe not to that extent haha. In that specific piece, I think the angle of the head made me draw it lower than it should be?

But it used to be something I was very bad about. Case in point:
https://i.postimg.cc/CK4rpd0c/image.png

Thanks for your critique!

Edited at July 8, 2019 07:54 AM by ilannaq

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