Wolf Play : Thoughts? Constructive Criticism?

12:18:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a bit to get ready for bed

Destinations End

12:16:08 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

12:15:36 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone got any shifter/hybrid forms for ocs pm me (all but one will be an elemental if it helps powers are
Ash
Astral
Vapor
Sand
Glass
and magma
pm me please

12:15:15 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

what sounds cool for an oc design (eye/left side of face ) smoke leaking from the eye either wide opened or slit smoke/other ghostly thing falling from the eye, pupil looks like a ghost, no scalera, other(pm me) for face glowing marks, bits are translucent ill take ideas just pm me ,

Ezranian

12:11:33 ezra, he/him

well i turned in Something for my rough draft! but also now i am caffeinated and cant sleep lol

11:56:34 Kneecap stealer

Cream mocha?

Sabbath

11:56:04 Rook

any name ideas, chat?
-WP Click-

11:54:45 Boe

Hi Khaos xD
Yeah I'm doing alright lol
It's been a bit I guess ^^" not sure if I'm going to stick around for too long but for now I'm kind of back for a bit lol

Snow Song

11:54:33 Song

I don't know when to use sales chat for questions
Please advise
Selling stuff, advertising amerc i know goes in sales
I have been told i can ask pricing questions here (after I asked them in sales first)
What things of the more ambiguous nature belong in sales?

11:53:39 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing! I was just thinking about you yesterday. I can't stay in chat long, but I hope you're doing well. ^^

11:52:32 Boe

Hey Apothecary ^^

11:50:56 Kneecap stealer

Diamond is ugly on spectre

Apothecary

11:49:59 Medicinally Autistic

I'd rather we didn't talk about sales in main chat :)

11:39:51 Kneecap stealer

Everyone makes that mistake sometimes, even I still do, and I'm sure khaos does too lmao

11:39:39

ok thank you!!

11:39:13

ok i found it! nevermind. it is there after all

11:38:01 Kaos || Kháos

As for the other dyes, doesn't seem like there's a guide for them yet.

Eye of Eternity

11:38:01 tern | they/he

zefhyr
the eye colour doesnt show up well on some poses, try changing that
and it should be in customs, just search for the name of the dye in the base pelt section

11:37:12 Kaos || Kháos

There's a guide for crystallines, but it's not too accurate / detailed at the moment. When I'm done going through my class notes for the night (223 pages </3), I'll look at updating it a bit. ^^

Guide: -WP Click-

11:36:59

i used 'solar flare' but it doesnt show at all. i want totry basecoat dyes but need toknow what they look like. i tried the customs page, but there is no option to see what dye or deco looks like. that must have changed.

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12:18:30 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

off for a bit to get ready for bed

Destinations End

12:16:08 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

12:15:36 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone got any shifter/hybrid forms for ocs pm me (all but one will be an elemental if it helps powers are
Ash
Astral
Vapor
Sand
Glass
and magma
pm me please

12:15:15 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Ezranian

12:11:33 ezra, he/him

well i turned in Something for my rough draft! but also now i am caffeinated and cant sleep lol

11:56:34 Kneecap stealer

Cream mocha?

Sabbath

11:56:04 Rook

any name ideas, chat?
-WP Click-

11:54:45 Boe

Hi Khaos xD
Yeah I'm doing alright lol
It's been a bit I guess ^^" not sure if I'm going to stick around for too long but for now I'm kind of back for a bit lol

Snow Song

11:54:33 Song

11:53:39 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing! I was just thinking about you yesterday. I can't stay in chat long, but I hope you're doing well. ^^

11:52:32 Boe

Hey Apothecary ^^

11:50:56 Kneecap stealer

Diamond is ugly on spectre

Apothecary

11:49:59 Medicinally Autistic

I'd rather we didn't talk about sales in main chat :)

11:39:51 Kneecap stealer

Everyone makes that mistake sometimes, even I still do, and I'm sure khaos does too lmao

11:39:39

ok thank you!!

11:39:13

ok i found it! nevermind. it is there after all

11:38:01 Kaos || Kháos

As for the other dyes, doesn't seem like there's a guide for them yet.

Eye of Eternity

11:38:01 tern | they/he

zefhyr
the eye colour doesnt show up well on some poses, try changing that
and it should be in customs, just search for the name of the dye in the base pelt section

11:37:12 Kaos || Kháos

11:36:59

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August 13, 2024 05:25 PM

Former Pack

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This is my first time drawing digitally. I just used a free drawing app on my old kindle and drew with my fingers.

I was attempting to make a cute picture of my oc Mack, a wolf-mako shark thingamajig.

Any thoughts on what I did good vs bad, constructive criticism, etc. would be very welcome.

August 13, 2024 05:48 PM

Night Shade

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I think it's a very bold choice going for a lineless piece as your first digital drawing.

Overall it looks wonderful, though it is difficult to tell what the background is. I would suggest trying to define details like this a little more, but I'm not much of a background artist. As for the character itself, it's absolutely adorable! I don't really have any notes for the character. <3

August 13, 2024 07:40 PM

Urux

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^^ I agree. I think starting with some defined lineart would be the way to go. Trying to make things stand out and be obvious as to what it is can be very hard with lineless art. If you were to start with lineart, you could practice shapes and poses, moving onto colour then lineless it within your grasp!