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Ugh, absolutely disgusting xD

I'm good! trying to muster the strength to clean, but my bed keeps getting comfier and comfier lol xD

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im good, dealing with taxes sadly lol

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got tourmaline eye dye on my first trade with bree and assumed it was always like that but the second time she gave me a stick lol

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Ezra
majorly so frustrating

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winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

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01:55:49 Eas

The apple orchard background is kinda actually really nice

The Hunters/Hunted

01:55:47 toe licker

hi ever!!

Eye of Eternity

01:55:22 tern | they/he

trying to apply for scholarships and its asking me what my portfolio shows about my process what does that even mean

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Hello chat

01:50:14 Eden/ Key/ TS

hiya. I am back

01:47:25 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Heyo

01:47:22 Ace

Ugh, absolutely disgusting xD

I'm good! trying to muster the strength to clean, but my bed keeps getting comfier and comfier lol xD

01:42:27 oi

im good, dealing with taxes sadly lol

how about you ??

01:42:19 Acorn (She/Her)

Ace
She's my baby :3

Toe licker
Thank you xD

I'll be charging my phone now, see y'all

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Hi Bruiser! How are you today? ^^

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01:38:05 toe licker

acorn
lol! cute goat! <3

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hallo chat

01:37:39 Ace

Acorn
SO cute oh my gosh *^*

01:31:55 Acorn (She/Her)

New avatar acquired

01:31:10 ezra, he/him

got tourmaline eye dye on my first trade with bree and assumed it was always like that but the second time she gave me a stick lol

01:19:58 Winter

Ezra
majorly so frustrating

01:03:53 ezra, he/him

winter-
ooh that sucks :(

01:02:49 Winter

Dude I bought 10 apples bought ONE relic space it refresh and purchased bought another one now my apples are gone ugh ;-;

01:00:15 ezra, he/him

i should have a muskox character

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October 15, 2020 10:00 AM

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I need advice on how good this is because 
I don't know what to think I mean to me 
it looks bad and I should work more on 
it but then I think it's good and I 
should stop working on it.

before

after

How does this look?

Edited at October 15, 2020 02:37 PM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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I can't click on the link.

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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link doesn't work..

October 15, 2020 10:11 AM

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I fixed the problem

Edited at October 15, 2020 10:24 AM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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I like it, your art looks great!

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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the blood could use a little more detail

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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Work on two layers (: if your not already.

lineart on top, coloring below. If you Change the refrence layer on bucket to the lineart, fill should still work(:

and blur the blood(:

overall, pretty nice ^^ good job

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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It's really pretty. I like it.

October 15, 2020 10:27 AM

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If you know how, you could try adding some shading and hilight to give it some extra detail ^^

October 15, 2020 10:28 AM

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I don't know a lot about art but I really like it! In my opinion I think a little bit more detail on the blood around the mouth would be nice :)

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