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barley nooo I wanna eat the jello

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I'm going to encase you in jello /vsilly

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me. I disturbed it >:)

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Who dares disturb my slumber /silly

08:52:49 Barley (she/her)

RAH

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I command chat wake up.

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hi chat

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Night
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Well I want to go read my book ( it's too interesting), bye.

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Master Darkfire

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bye bye art time

09:09:06 Hallow, Eve

Good morning chat

Master Darkfire

09:04:36 Dark/fire/ice

sky goes for a swim in the lake.

Mood: Happy
why did you leave the den buddy ;-; you are pup bro.

09:03:34 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Group nap!

Mood: Exhausted

Shady Maple Syrup

09:02:15 dino nuggie master

I'm getting spammed with labor alerts xD

Master Darkfire

08:56:26 Dark/fire/ice

oh no. but wait...I'm really hungry so that shouldn't be a problem lol

08:55:37 Barley (she/her)

Dark,
GIGGLING, you'll have to gnaw your way out then

Master Darkfire

08:54:56 Dark/fire/ice

barley nooo I wanna eat the jello

08:54:22 Barley (she/her)

Dark,
I'm going to encase you in jello /vsilly

Master Darkfire

08:53:22 Dark/fire/ice

me. I disturbed it >:)

08:53:05 Barley (she/her)

Who dares disturb my slumber /silly

08:52:49 Barley (she/her)

RAH

Shady Maple Syrup

08:52:25 dino nuggie master

I command chat wake up.

Master Darkfire

08:51:04 Dark/fire/ice

hi chat

08:47:41 Acorn (She/Her)

Night
See ya :)

Night Raven College

08:46:04 NRC/Night/Raven

Well I want to go read my book ( it's too interesting), bye.

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October 15, 2020 10:00 AM

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I need advice on how good this is because 
I don't know what to think I mean to me 
it looks bad and I should work more on 
it but then I think it's good and I 
should stop working on it.

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How does this look?

Edited at October 15, 2020 02:37 PM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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I can't click on the link.

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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link doesn't work..

October 15, 2020 10:11 AM

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I fixed the problem

Edited at October 15, 2020 10:24 AM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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I like it, your art looks great!

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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the blood could use a little more detail

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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Work on two layers (: if your not already.

lineart on top, coloring below. If you Change the refrence layer on bucket to the lineart, fill should still work(:

and blur the blood(:

overall, pretty nice ^^ good job

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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It's really pretty. I like it.

October 15, 2020 10:27 AM

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If you know how, you could try adding some shading and hilight to give it some extra detail ^^

October 15, 2020 10:28 AM

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I don't know a lot about art but I really like it! In my opinion I think a little bit more detail on the blood around the mouth would be nice :)

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