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12:18:41 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome thank you so much <33

12:18:08 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
:D glad you like it! You bet it's staying. If a nickname is liked, it stays either for all eternity or until I come up with a better one XD

12:15:46 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome is it staying 🥺 ?
Okay :3 (hoping ive improved LMAO)

12:14:18 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
(How do you like the nickname lol)
I say yeah sure. If you're feeling up to arting and you want to, go ahead!
All for being nice lol

12:13:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Labuor please >.> -WP Click-

12:09:44 AsStraightAsMySpine

Hmm i already asked this question earlier but nobody answered twt do I be nice and redo some shit comms for free ?

12:07:49 Aroaceinthehole

and I just got another stolen food. Starting today off strong XD

12:07:47 Mama Maggy

Sateda
Oof>.> could be a fallen tree or even a transformer blowing up

Kháos

12:06:50 Kaos || Kháos

Fei-
lol that's good, and cat cuddles sound nice

Thank you!

12:06:34 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
Awhh

Sateda

12:06:33

HEY my power just was out for like an hour and just came back on. Really random, no storm or anything.

12:03:21 Mama Maggy

:') I feel like power is about to go out DX

RainbowRat

12:02:30 Gay lord (he/him)

Bruh that was no fair, after I fought a pack and just barely served I ran into one just after that, with only one wolf and it’s health was only 31, 31! Sobs

12:02:26 Aroaceinthehole

Alas, chat, we end the day with only 97 stolen food. Such tragedy.

Feiella

11:59:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Khaos
Not sleep depraved so I won't be saying chaotic stuff lol

I mostly been doing art or cuddling with my cat.

Hope your job searching goes good.

11:58:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
Maybe my wolves are just favoured by the gods :/

Red River Wolves

11:57:43 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Patience and persistence perhaps? Though I can't let that go unanswered though...

11:56:53 AsStraightAsMySpine

The others are like 300, 100, and i think 200 something trained ? Another on my team has 0 exp but shh he doesn't have to know

11:56:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
My wolves are barely trained (in my opinion) one of them has 1 battle exp I have no idea how I did it xD

Desire of The Hills

11:55:20 Hills / Desire

I can't wait until I get my fiber optic internet upgrade so I can go harder muahaha

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12:18:41 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome thank you so much <33

12:18:08 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
:D glad you like it! You bet it's staying. If a nickname is liked, it stays either for all eternity or until I come up with a better one XD

12:15:46 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome is it staying 🥺 ?
Okay :3 (hoping ive improved LMAO)

12:14:18 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
(How do you like the nickname lol)
I say yeah sure. If you're feeling up to arting and you want to, go ahead!
All for being nice lol

12:13:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Labuor please >.> -WP Click-

12:09:44 AsStraightAsMySpine

Hmm i already asked this question earlier but nobody answered twt do I be nice and redo some shit comms for free ?

12:07:49 Aroaceinthehole

and I just got another stolen food. Starting today off strong XD

12:07:47 Mama Maggy

Sateda
Oof>.> could be a fallen tree or even a transformer blowing up

Kháos

12:06:50 Kaos || Kháos

Fei-
lol that's good, and cat cuddles sound nice

Thank you!

12:06:34 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
Awhh

Sateda

12:06:33

HEY my power just was out for like an hour and just came back on. Really random, no storm or anything.

12:03:21 Mama Maggy

:') I feel like power is about to go out DX

RainbowRat

12:02:30 Gay lord (he/him)

Bruh that was no fair, after I fought a pack and just barely served I ran into one just after that, with only one wolf and it’s health was only 31, 31! Sobs

12:02:26 Aroaceinthehole

Alas, chat, we end the day with only 97 stolen food. Such tragedy.

Feiella

11:59:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Khaos
Not sleep depraved so I won't be saying chaotic stuff lol

I mostly been doing art or cuddling with my cat.

Hope your job searching goes good.

11:58:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
Maybe my wolves are just favoured by the gods :/

Red River Wolves

11:57:43 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Patience and persistence perhaps? Though I can't let that go unanswered though...

11:56:53 AsStraightAsMySpine

The others are like 300, 100, and i think 200 something trained ? Another on my team has 0 exp but shh he doesn't have to know

11:56:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
My wolves are barely trained (in my opinion) one of them has 1 battle exp I have no idea how I did it xD

Desire of The Hills

11:55:20 Hills / Desire

I can't wait until I get my fiber optic internet upgrade so I can go harder muahaha

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January 3, 2018 03:51 AM

Former Pack

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Please tell me what I need to fix on this pile of junk of a pegasus...

https://i.imgur.com/B7vGbab.jpg

Edited at January 3, 2018 04:40 AM by Unlit Skies

January 3, 2018 04:31 AM

Mistress Nyx

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Legs are way too long, the bottom jaw of the mouth is too wide. Wings are too small.

January 3, 2018 04:40 AM

Former Pack

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Mistress Nyx said:
Legs are way too long, the bottom jaw of the mouth is too wide. Wings are too small.

Thank you! Now I need to fix it!

January 3, 2018 08:12 AM

MossenMoose

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I like it all except the long legs

January 3, 2018 02:33 PM

Red Moon

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Also, legs are too thick. Look at some reference pictures of horse to see how they gradually become thinner from the hips/shoulders. The top of the legs should be more muscular than any part of the legs.