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Ah so 4k would over shoot lol

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That's the first book. Knife is kind of emotional lol

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You have : 1012 Dog Bones.

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Y'know, he totally suggested that for it at the store but we're a bit broke at the moment. x)

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What the fuck is seen

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(There's a knife seen in hunting Adeline)

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Well then lol

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It was definitely the one with the knife lol

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but wasnt that the one with the knife?

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I seriously wish I could explore more so I can get more mush for the event. It's so hard between work and my kids.

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07:32:56 Voluntold SV collect

Mkays gonna keep grinding ^^

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Ah so 4k would over shoot lol

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No you're at 16.1k

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You? I think you're at Luke 18k

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That's the first book. Knife is kind of emotional lol

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Hehe I haven't opened chat in a while, hello

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Night night everyone

07:20:48 Voluntold SV collect

Maggy
How much till 20k?

07:20:18 Twin/Triplet Keeper

Timon
thought it was a Pew Pew?

07:19:58 Hallow, Eve

You have : 1012 Dog Bones.

only 1k left till my goal :) Then its time to start my next goal

07:19:30

Y'know, he totally suggested that for it at the store but we're a bit broke at the moment. x)

07:18:47 Mag/Maggy

Is there mushrooms in the spaghetti >.>

07:18:42

I have a thing for masked stalkers lol

07:18:11

The husband made spaghetti. I'm in heaven, mmm....

07:17:50 Mag/Maggy

What the fuck is seen

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(There's a knife seen in hunting Adeline)

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Timon
Well then lol

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It was definitely the one with the knife lol

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Arch

but wasnt that the one with the knife?

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I seriously wish I could explore more so I can get more mush for the event. It's so hard between work and my kids.

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Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 01:49 AM

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I made this piece today
https://i.postimg.cc/fyDhLtMB/2392-C118-DF13-4597-9-BF2-6-E23-A916-B115.png

And I cant tell whats wrong. I think it has something to do with the back legs and maybe the ears or the rib cage. It's a species I made and I can post a reference sheet of one if it helps but I really want to fix this. Ps. The tuff on the shoulder is actually where a wing used to be. It was cut off by hunters.

Thanks!

Edited at November 23, 2018 05:00 PM by Path of Stars

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 03:49 AM

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I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.

The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D

The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.

The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

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November 23, 2018 04:49 PM

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Wood Carve said:
I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.
The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D
The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.
The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Thanks! That makes sense.

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