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09:26:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

so weird but I love sneezing XDDD

09:25:21 tiger\Owl|she\her

ewwwww

09:24:07 tern | they/he

ew i just unwrapped the worst-textured kneaded eraser ive ever had the displeasure of touching

09:02:04 tern | they/he

anthony
will do

09:01:07 Anthony // He/they

little pear

09:00:24 tern | they/he

followup, someone choose little pear or big pear for sacrifice

08:56:18 tern | they/he

anthony
okk

08:54:37 Anthony // He/they

Tern
colored pencils

08:52:52 tern | they/he

hey chat- charcoal, coloured pencil, or markers?

Imladris

08:45:43

It's currently autumn in the game right now, and fall & winter are not as good for prey & mush as spring & summer (to mimic real life)

08:41:55

Also you can go to Realm > Arcade and then play some games every half an hour

Giftofeden

08:41:54 Eden/ Key/ TS

hello

08:41:08 Xan

okay thank you

08:39:14

Hmm, like fastest way to get mush is to buy apples and sell them, but that includes real world money. Other than that I'd say exploration in like forest or jungle, selling what you find, selling event currency - it is not exactly fast, but it is decent and consistent.

08:35:23 tiger\Owl|she\her

quests. and sorta the arcade

08:34:58 Xan

guys how do i make a lot of mushrooms fast

08:16:39 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im now saving up for the next HH event
Let the countdown begin lol

08:15:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

I decided to read instead of do my review packet for math XD

08:15:26 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Omg
Just let this ava end 🤣🤣

08:09:37

Okayish, woke up feeling sickly, but not sick so I got classes and studying to do even if I am feeling like all I wanna do is sleep

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09:26:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

so weird but I love sneezing XDDD

09:25:21 tiger\Owl|she\her

ewwwww

09:24:07 tern | they/he

ew i just unwrapped the worst-textured kneaded eraser ive ever had the displeasure of touching

09:02:04 tern | they/he

anthony
will do

09:01:07 Anthony // He/they

little pear

09:00:24 tern | they/he

followup, someone choose little pear or big pear for sacrifice

08:56:18 tern | they/he

anthony
okk

08:54:37 Anthony // He/they

Tern
colored pencils

08:52:52 tern | they/he

hey chat- charcoal, coloured pencil, or markers?

Imladris

08:45:43

It's currently autumn in the game right now, and fall & winter are not as good for prey & mush as spring & summer (to mimic real life)

08:41:55

Also you can go to Realm > Arcade and then play some games every half an hour

Giftofeden

08:41:54 Eden/ Key/ TS

hello

08:41:08 Xan

okay thank you

08:39:14

08:35:23 tiger\Owl|she\her

quests. and sorta the arcade

08:34:58 Xan

guys how do i make a lot of mushrooms fast

08:16:39 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im now saving up for the next HH event
Let the countdown begin lol

08:15:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

I decided to read instead of do my review packet for math XD

08:15:26 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Omg
Just let this ava end 🤣🤣

08:09:37

Okayish, woke up feeling sickly, but not sick so I got classes and studying to do even if I am feeling like all I wanna do is sleep

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again