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01:32:13 Axol

♥Vienna꩜ sits down and starts to play Wolfplay on their computer. (4th wall breaking)

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01:32:09 Moth | All BI myself

Oh god dammit I have to complete the same module again.

01:27:47 Moth | All BI myself

Yay time to start ANOTHER module that may take 90 minutes to complete

01:23:41 Finger stealer

It indeed is 69 bones evergreen

01:05:06 fiening4rp

hi c

12:49:59 AsStraightAsMySpine

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Is it 69

12:48:19 Finger stealer

I am a mature adult, I will not laugh at the bone count I have

12:47:20 Finger stealer

God damn it, fuck everything, now I'm hungry

12:47:15 Kaos || Kháos

Whoa. Ice Nine Kills is on my mom's radio station. 🥹

12:46:52 Finger stealer

That looks so good khaos

12:45:03 Kaos || Kháos

xD

Desire of The Hills

12:44:50 Hills / Desire

Kaos
I know if I click that I will get cravings so I'm just going to trust you on that lol

12:44:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Khans
Ooh yummy yum !

12:44:05 fiening4rp

me personally i just eat raw ground beef right out of the plastic

slash j

12:44:02 Kaos || Kháos

-Click- 🤤 And I also ended up using the beans to make two bean & cheese tacos too.

12:42:21 Kaos || Kháos

I love enchiladas so much. One of my favorite foods ever.

Desire of The Hills

12:41:56 Hills / Desire

Kaos
That actually sounds delicious right now

12:41:46 Finger stealer

I'm jealous now

12:41:20 Kaos || Kháos

cheese, I always get cheese!

12:40:06 Finger stealer

What kind?

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01:32:13 Axol

♥Vienna꩜ sits down and starts to play Wolfplay on their computer. (4th wall breaking)

Interesting

01:32:09 Moth | All BI myself

Oh god dammit I have to complete the same module again.

01:27:47 Moth | All BI myself

Yay time to start ANOTHER module that may take 90 minutes to complete

01:23:41 Finger stealer

It indeed is 69 bones evergreen

01:05:06 fiening4rp

hi c

12:49:59 AsStraightAsMySpine

Pink
Is it 69

12:48:19 Finger stealer

I am a mature adult, I will not laugh at the bone count I have

12:47:20 Finger stealer

God damn it, fuck everything, now I'm hungry

12:47:15 Kaos || Kháos

Whoa. Ice Nine Kills is on my mom's radio station. 🥹

12:46:52 Finger stealer

That looks so good khaos

12:45:03 Kaos || Kháos

xD

Desire of The Hills

12:44:50 Hills / Desire

Kaos
I know if I click that I will get cravings so I'm just going to trust you on that lol

12:44:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Khans
Ooh yummy yum !

12:44:05 fiening4rp

me personally i just eat raw ground beef right out of the plastic

slash j

12:44:02 Kaos || Kháos

-Click- 🤤 And I also ended up using the beans to make two bean & cheese tacos too.

12:42:21 Kaos || Kháos

I love enchiladas so much. One of my favorite foods ever.

Desire of The Hills

12:41:56 Hills / Desire

Kaos
That actually sounds delicious right now

12:41:46 Finger stealer

I'm jealous now

12:41:20 Kaos || Kháos

cheese, I always get cheese!

12:40:06 Finger stealer

What kind?

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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#674972
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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

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May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

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May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

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May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

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May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

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May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

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May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

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May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

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May 21, 2018 09:53 AM

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Evee4ever228 said:
The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Thanks a lot ^-^

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