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tallula
yes, but not in a vulgar context, excessively, or directed at anybody
 BuggyOs
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mild cursing is okay, we just cant go too hard with it, nor can we cuss like AT others I think
 love story
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idk
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Oh can we curse here?
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Ok I’m off for a bit Peace ✌🏼
 love story
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i have not seen her in a long time i dont know if she is here
 Winterfell
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I know it's a joke but could be taken seriously
 cloudpack
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love story.......uhhhh fuck fuck fuck ask to go to the nurse
 Winterfell
11:58:04 Winter
Maybe not a good idea to say we will get hacked lmao
 Winterfell
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I see
 love story
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@cloud
my chest is hurting now
 love story
11:56:45 
@cloud
taking breaths but its not helping
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11:56:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I was listening to my what you might like music list and one of the songs from the little mermaid came on? Bruh
 love story
11:56:11 
yep we have known eachother for a long time
 cloudpack
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winter

you probly will me and lovestory have been doing this since we ehere in 6th grade (by this i mean playing blooket)
 Winterfell
11:53:45 Winter
Clicked the link feel like I'm going to get hacked >.>
 The dog lord
11:53:34 Doggy (he/him)
Tall
Oooo she’s pretty
 Tallula
11:52:30 
-WP Click-
I may have a favorite
 The dog lord
11:52:26 Doggy (he/him)
Cloud
Hehehe 😈
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Winter
Lol

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 Eye of Eternity
12:02:05 tern | they/he
tallula
yes, but not in a vulgar context, excessively, or directed at anybody
 BuggyOs
12:01:53 Lucky Ladybug
mild cursing is okay, we just cant go too hard with it, nor can we cuss like AT others I think
 love story
12:01:31 
idk
 Tallula
12:01:11 
Oh can we curse here?
 Lucky Rat
12:00:33 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Ok I’m off for a bit Peace ✌🏼
 love story
11:59:43 
i have not seen her in a long time i dont know if she is here
 Winterfell
11:58:25 Winter
I know it's a joke but could be taken seriously
 cloudpack
11:58:13 cloud (he/they)
love story.......uhhhh fuck fuck fuck ask to go to the nurse
 Winterfell
11:58:04 Winter
Maybe not a good idea to say we will get hacked lmao
 Winterfell
11:57:42 Winter
I see
 love story
11:57:20 
@cloud
my chest is hurting now
 love story
11:56:45 
@cloud
taking breaths but its not helping
 Lucky Rat
11:56:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I was listening to my what you might like music list and one of the songs from the little mermaid came on? Bruh
 love story
11:56:11 
yep we have known eachother for a long time
 cloudpack
11:54:37 cloud (he/they)
winter

you probly will me and lovestory have been doing this since we ehere in 6th grade (by this i mean playing blooket)
 Winterfell
11:53:45 Winter
Clicked the link feel like I'm going to get hacked >.>
 The dog lord
11:53:34 Doggy (he/him)
Tall
Oooo she’s pretty
 Tallula
11:52:30 
-WP Click-
I may have a favorite
 The dog lord
11:52:26 Doggy (he/him)
Cloud
Hehehe 😈
 Echo Eclipse
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Winter
Lol




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Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 04:08 AM


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Seriously, don't hold back. I want to improve, and the only way to do that it with some good, honest critiques. All are wanted and very much appreciated :)



Link to my art gallery:
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=26299&page=1

But, if you're lazy like me, here are some of my most recent artworks:
https://i.postimg.cc/5041gScN/Summer-Storm-Raffle.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/C1TJpcMS/Xery-Ref-Sheet.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/qvrjFbRr/Familiar-Background.jpg


Edited at July 11, 2019 04:14 AM by Wood Carve
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I can give negative feedback. It’s perfect. Maybe draw each individual hair on the Animals? I donΒ’ know.

Edited at July 11, 2019 03:22 PM by CanadianGirl
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I really like your art! I'd love an avatar from you
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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mara's pack said:
bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything


Same! My answer stands!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:35 PM


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Your art is pretty good, I especially like the last piece (the gold field).
The main thing that stuck out and- in my opinion- doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the piece: is the brightness in color for the wolf(?) in the first image.

I think the only main parts that should be as bright as it is, would be: the back and the beginning of the tail. The rest should be a bit darker, since it would be in the shade.
I did notice that you added shadow around the head/front of the animal, so that's good.
Besides that, I only have two nitpicks:

-The grass along the edges of the trees are a bit too bright as well, just a hint too bright
-The rocks(?) also seem very white, rather than a more grey. That could be the type of rock, I'm unsure, but they really jumped out at me and took some attention away from the animal and fire, which I felt where the main focus points.

Aside from those minor things, again, your art is very beautiful. :)
Keep up the great work!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:39 PM


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Thank you Mossious <3 I'll keep those in mind for the next thing I draw :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:40 PM


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You're welcome and best of luck to you. 8D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:48 PM


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You're a super talented artist, first of all <3

I just want to say that one thing I am SUPER jealous of in your art is your backgrounds and environments. They're just so good and detailed, and pretty, and /gah/. I love em. :'D

One thing I do think that you can improve on, though, is the shading of your characters. It just looks a little too... soft and blended together, and sometimes causes them to blend in a bit too much with the background. I think just a bit more detail in your shading and a bit less smudging would make your art go a loooong way.

One other minor thing I wanted to critique, is that when making ref sheets, try to make the background color a bit more muted. On the sheet of Xery, for example, the red is a bit too bright and blends in with the red of the character, and makes it kind of hard to look at. It might benefit to desaturate the background a little bit, or make it darker/lighter, or even make it a different color entirely that just compliments the character.

That's about all I have to say. Your art is /super/ solid, and I can't wait to see you improve and have your art become more amazing in the future :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:50 PM


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Thank you Dash!! <3

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