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 Mistakes
11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt
Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
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 Mistakes
11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt
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Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.
 St. Cloverbeast
11:57:10 Will
@Crypt

If they're born after the season change, yup
 Mistakes
11:46:42 Cryptic | Crypt
Just to make sure, pups born at 12:00 are considered spring 1 right?
 St. Cloverbeast
11:42:30 Will
Hello party people, how is everyone?
 Lucky Rat
11:23:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I’m eepy but I can’t eep yet *sigh* I’d funk up my sleep schedule if I sleep now :’)
 Nekros
11:12:18 Kros
-WP Click-

RP anybody?
 The Silmaril Pack
10:53:01 
Thanks Desti!
 Destinations End
10:52:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
Black magic?
I don't think I have seen that one yet.

Good luck with your custom :)
 The Silmaril Pack
10:48:56 
Desti
That's a good point. I guess it would be nice if the first few generic pelts were free (like black, white...ones that the rarity stays at 0).

Black magic.
What do you think? It's a bit out there but it makes me think of Mardi Gras or Dios de los Muertos
 Destinations End
10:39:18 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
You're welcome.
It would definitely be nice if you could somehow not select a base coat in the situations where you were planning on using a dye; but I don't see how that could happen without there being people who would say they would use a dye, and not use one so they could get a cheaper custom.
That and Siku's point ^^'

What dye will you be using on your new custom wolf?
 The Silmaril Pack
10:38:29 
Siku
I'm starting to catch on.
And the base coat is exclusive, and can't be applied customs
 Siku of Kinapak
10:35:54 Siku
Yeah, I get that. But the custom wolf maker strips everything and starts from scratch. You might check though if the dye you plan on using is already one of the options for pelt colors when making the wolf. If so, you won't need the dye. ;-)
 The Silmaril Pack
10:34:15 
Siku
:3 hehe you're right.
In this case I'm doing it on a wolf I already have.
 The Silmaril Pack
10:33:09 
Desti
Oof. Ok. I was hoping to avoid throwing away two apples since I'm using a dye later.
Thanks for the answer
 Siku of Kinapak
10:32:05 Siku
@Silmaril
can't have markings floating on an invisible wolf. lol. There always needs to be a base color. When you use the customizer you customize everything. =)
 Destinations End
10:31:04 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
No. You have to choose a base coat too
 The Silmaril Pack
10:28:02 
Hello
Is there a way I can not apply a base color to a customization if I just want markings?
 Siku of Kinapak
10:25:37 Siku
@Sleep Ushabti shards 1, 2, and 3. They craft an Egyptian looking statue.
 Eye of Eternity
10:24:49 tern | they/he
hyunjin
i think ushabiti shards 1 and 2? there might be a third

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 Mistakes
11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt
Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
-WP Click-
 Mistakes
11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt
-WP Click-
Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.
 St. Cloverbeast
11:57:10 Will
@Crypt

If they're born after the season change, yup
 Mistakes
11:46:42 Cryptic | Crypt
Just to make sure, pups born at 12:00 are considered spring 1 right?
 St. Cloverbeast
11:42:30 Will
Hello party people, how is everyone?
 Lucky Rat
11:23:37 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
I’m eepy but I can’t eep yet *sigh* I’d funk up my sleep schedule if I sleep now :’)
 Nekros
11:12:18 Kros
-WP Click-

RP anybody?
 The Silmaril Pack
10:53:01 
Thanks Desti!
 Destinations End
10:52:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
Black magic?
I don't think I have seen that one yet.

Good luck with your custom :)
 The Silmaril Pack
10:48:56 
Desti
That's a good point. I guess it would be nice if the first few generic pelts were free (like black, white...ones that the rarity stays at 0).

Black magic.
What do you think? It's a bit out there but it makes me think of Mardi Gras or Dios de los Muertos
 Destinations End
10:39:18 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
You're welcome.
It would definitely be nice if you could somehow not select a base coat in the situations where you were planning on using a dye; but I don't see how that could happen without there being people who would say they would use a dye, and not use one so they could get a cheaper custom.
That and Siku's point ^^'

What dye will you be using on your new custom wolf?
 The Silmaril Pack
10:38:29 
Siku
I'm starting to catch on.
And the base coat is exclusive, and can't be applied customs
 Siku of Kinapak
10:35:54 Siku
Yeah, I get that. But the custom wolf maker strips everything and starts from scratch. You might check though if the dye you plan on using is already one of the options for pelt colors when making the wolf. If so, you won't need the dye. ;-)
 The Silmaril Pack
10:34:15 
Siku
:3 hehe you're right.
In this case I'm doing it on a wolf I already have.
 The Silmaril Pack
10:33:09 
Desti
Oof. Ok. I was hoping to avoid throwing away two apples since I'm using a dye later.
Thanks for the answer
 Siku of Kinapak
10:32:05 Siku
@Silmaril
can't have markings floating on an invisible wolf. lol. There always needs to be a base color. When you use the customizer you customize everything. =)
 Destinations End
10:31:04 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Silmaril
No. You have to choose a base coat too
 The Silmaril Pack
10:28:02 
Hello
Is there a way I can not apply a base color to a customization if I just want markings?
 Siku of Kinapak
10:25:37 Siku
@Sleep Ushabti shards 1, 2, and 3. They craft an Egyptian looking statue.
 Eye of Eternity
10:24:49 tern | they/he
hyunjin
i think ushabiti shards 1 and 2? there might be a third




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

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Colored final product

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Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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