Wolf Play : Critique?

09:08:55 Acorn (She/Her)

Crypt
I like it, at first glance it seems like the lighter brown doesn't fit but then you see it's the same color as the spots so it does
I like it though, it's beautiful

09:07:09 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Crypt
I think it's perfect, perhaps add some earthy gear, like a leafy necklace or vine made back with leather pouch or something like those, perhaps leafy gauntlets or something?

Mistakes

09:05:28 Cryptic | Crypt

Can I get some opinions on this design? What works/what doesn't
-Click-

09:04:56 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Rook
Nugget
Caramello

09:03:43 Rook

any name ideas for him, chat? he needs something cute
-WP Click-

09:01:06 Redd Dead

Wild,
Uh, I don't know. I didn't "count it". I'm not really a "math guy"

09:01:05 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

hahah Spreadsheeters unite, hehehe should I make an alliance for us?

09:00:39 sinking into shadows

Redd,
how many have you eaten.. 🤔

09:00:14 Acorn (She/Her)

I only have spreadsheets for secret santa xD

08:59:13 Redd Dead

Wild,
Uh... which one?

08:58:59 sinking into shadows

Redd,
admit you stole my relic >:O

08:58:17 sinking into shadows

Redd,
xD
nice but corny joke

08:57:40 Rook

Redd's single confession making so many of us brave enough to admit we have a wolf game spreadsheet xD

08:57:19 Redd Dead

Wild,
One might say it's... fire

I'll go back to explore now

08:56:54 sinking into shadows

Rook,
I know right!
I might make it my goal to get this wolf xD

08:56:53 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

lol I am so glad im not the only one who does the spreadsheets, I organise mine with their doms and all their important stats and thigns

08:56:14 Rook

Wild
ooohh *^*

08:55:42 sinking into shadows

-WP Click-

This would be EPIC to have.
I love how the pattern looks on the back

08:55:24 Redd Dead

Most of my wolves have nothing because I simply do not keep track of that lol

Nevermore

08:54:52 Never/Nev

Rook
Honestly, I am guilty of the same thing... 💀

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09:08:55 Acorn (She/Her)

Crypt
I like it, at first glance it seems like the lighter brown doesn't fit but then you see it's the same color as the spots so it does
I like it though, it's beautiful

09:07:09 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Crypt
I think it's perfect, perhaps add some earthy gear, like a leafy necklace or vine made back with leather pouch or something like those, perhaps leafy gauntlets or something?

Mistakes

09:05:28 Cryptic | Crypt

Can I get some opinions on this design? What works/what doesn't
-Click-

09:04:56 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Rook
Nugget
Caramello

09:03:43 Rook

any name ideas for him, chat? he needs something cute
-WP Click-

09:01:06 Redd Dead

Wild,
Uh, I don't know. I didn't "count it". I'm not really a "math guy"

09:01:05 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

hahah Spreadsheeters unite, hehehe should I make an alliance for us?

09:00:39 sinking into shadows

Redd,
how many have you eaten.. 🤔

09:00:14 Acorn (She/Her)

I only have spreadsheets for secret santa xD

08:59:13 Redd Dead

Wild,
Uh... which one?

08:58:59 sinking into shadows

Redd,
admit you stole my relic >:O

08:58:17 sinking into shadows

Redd,
xD
nice but corny joke

08:57:40 Rook

Redd's single confession making so many of us brave enough to admit we have a wolf game spreadsheet xD

08:57:19 Redd Dead

Wild,
One might say it's... fire

I'll go back to explore now

08:56:54 sinking into shadows

Rook,
I know right!
I might make it my goal to get this wolf xD

08:56:53 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

lol I am so glad im not the only one who does the spreadsheets, I organise mine with their doms and all their important stats and thigns

08:56:14 Rook

Wild
ooohh *^*

08:55:42 sinking into shadows

-WP Click-

This would be EPIC to have.
I love how the pattern looks on the back

08:55:24 Redd Dead

Most of my wolves have nothing because I simply do not keep track of that lol

Nevermore

08:54:52 Never/Nev

Rook
Honestly, I am guilty of the same thing... 💀

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM