Wolf Play : Critique?

12:15:46 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome is it staying 🥺 ?
Okay :3 (hoping ive improved LMAO)

12:14:18 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
(How do you like the nickname lol)
I say yeah sure. If you're feeling up to arting and you want to, go ahead!
All for being nice lol

12:13:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Labuor please >.> -WP Click-

12:09:44 AsStraightAsMySpine

Hmm i already asked this question earlier but nobody answered twt do I be nice and redo some shit comms for free ?

12:07:49 Aroaceinthehole

and I just got another stolen food. Starting today off strong XD

12:07:47 Mama Maggy

Sateda
Oof>.> could be a fallen tree or even a transformer blowing up

Kháos

12:06:50 Kaos || Kháos

Fei-
lol that's good, and cat cuddles sound nice

Thank you!

12:06:34 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
Awhh

Sateda

12:06:33

HEY my power just was out for like an hour and just came back on. Really random, no storm or anything.

12:03:21 Mama Maggy

:') I feel like power is about to go out DX

RainbowRat

12:02:30 Gay lord (he/him)

Bruh that was no fair, after I fought a pack and just barely served I ran into one just after that, with only one wolf and it’s health was only 31, 31! Sobs

12:02:26 Aroaceinthehole

Alas, chat, we end the day with only 97 stolen food. Such tragedy.

Feiella

11:59:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Khaos
Not sleep depraved so I won't be saying chaotic stuff lol

I mostly been doing art or cuddling with my cat.

Hope your job searching goes good.

11:58:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
Maybe my wolves are just favoured by the gods :/

11:57:43 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Patience and persistence perhaps? Though I can't let that go unanswered though...

11:56:53 AsStraightAsMySpine

The others are like 300, 100, and i think 200 something trained ? Another on my team has 0 exp but shh he doesn't have to know

11:56:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
My wolves are barely trained (in my opinion) one of them has 1 battle exp I have no idea how I did it xD

Desire of The Hills

11:55:20 Hills / Desire

I can't wait until I get my fiber optic internet upgrade so I can go harder muahaha

11:55:19 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Oh? Since my top BE wolves aren't boosted, I didn't think it would be too difficult compared to others with full boost teams

Ferenc V38

11:55:18 fiening4rp

Kernight II challenges Kernight for dominance.

son just tried his old man 🥀

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12:15:46 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
It's awesome is it staying 🥺 ?
Okay :3 (hoping ive improved LMAO)

12:14:18 Aroaceinthehole

Everred
(How do you like the nickname lol)
I say yeah sure. If you're feeling up to arting and you want to, go ahead!
All for being nice lol

12:13:29 AsStraightAsMySpine

Labuor please >.> -WP Click-

12:09:44 AsStraightAsMySpine

Hmm i already asked this question earlier but nobody answered twt do I be nice and redo some shit comms for free ?

12:07:49 Aroaceinthehole

and I just got another stolen food. Starting today off strong XD

12:07:47 Mama Maggy

Sateda
Oof>.> could be a fallen tree or even a transformer blowing up

Kháos

12:06:50 Kaos || Kháos

Fei-
lol that's good, and cat cuddles sound nice

Thank you!

12:06:34 AsStraightAsMySpine

Draconic
Awhh

Sateda

12:06:33

HEY my power just was out for like an hour and just came back on. Really random, no storm or anything.

12:03:21 Mama Maggy

:') I feel like power is about to go out DX

RainbowRat

12:02:30 Gay lord (he/him)

Bruh that was no fair, after I fought a pack and just barely served I ran into one just after that, with only one wolf and it’s health was only 31, 31! Sobs

12:02:26 Aroaceinthehole

Alas, chat, we end the day with only 97 stolen food. Such tragedy.

Feiella

11:59:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Khaos
Not sleep depraved so I won't be saying chaotic stuff lol

I mostly been doing art or cuddling with my cat.

Hope your job searching goes good.

11:58:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
Maybe my wolves are just favoured by the gods :/

11:57:43 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Patience and persistence perhaps? Though I can't let that go unanswered though...

11:56:53 AsStraightAsMySpine

The others are like 300, 100, and i think 200 something trained ? Another on my team has 0 exp but shh he doesn't have to know

11:56:13 AsStraightAsMySpine

Red
My wolves are barely trained (in my opinion) one of them has 1 battle exp I have no idea how I did it xD

Desire of The Hills

11:55:20 Hills / Desire

I can't wait until I get my fiber optic internet upgrade so I can go harder muahaha

11:55:19 Redd Dead

Evergreenhills,
Oh? Since my top BE wolves aren't boosted, I didn't think it would be too difficult compared to others with full boost teams

Ferenc V38

11:55:18 fiening4rp

Kernight II challenges Kernight for dominance.

son just tried his old man 🥀

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM