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2 elite speeds from my twin elite speeds :O

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hehe one more apple left >:D

07:10:55

Pm me if you want to rp!

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Yay! My whole explore team got Death Grip!

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Barley, lol

06:58:23 Barley (she/her)

I forgot what having a weak pack feels like; three bears ALONE are pmo

06:56:05 kenley/cres

currently selling wolves

06:48:56 kenley/cres

hi pink kitty

06:47:29 Chat, Noir, Venti

Why do hawks and eagles look so silly when faced from the front?

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-WP Click-

What do we think?

06:41:36 Finger stealer

I wanna get all the stardust stuff in FMC :')

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-WP Click-

Can anybody tell me how to price this wolf

06:30:45 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

Snake

Muscular or thick, maybe

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RP anybody? PM me!

06:29:12

Jack
chomp chomp 🐊

if wolves builds determined what enemies they were better at fighting. which build would be better for alligators and bears?

06:28:46 Worm/Ever, It/Its

Wild
It’s okay that happens all the time lol

06:27:42 sinking into shadows

man I messed up in sales D:

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Jack
Mm fun </3

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Have to fight 9 more alligators-_-

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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