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05:40:04 tiger\Owl|she\her

red I'm not 100% sure but I think that anything in the pelt description doesn't affect the wolf in any way just how the pelt looks

05:37:38 Graves | Chaos

Im nauseous and my joints ache. :( I wanna go home :((

05:04:16 Red

thank you! I was worried it'd affect her in some way.

04:57:03

Red
Its' just a pattern/coloration in her pelt. It doesn't do anything besides affect her looks

04:49:58 Red

what is a somatic mutation? My pup Redwillow has it in her coat discription.

04:45:49

My recommendation would be to pick one or two things that you care for more than other things, and focus on that. It's difficult to breed for too many things, especially as you are starting out.
You can also try posting in the forum to see if you can find breeding partners that also want to focus on the same things as you ^^

A bonsaitreasure

04:44:05

okey good to know :) just wonder if i can make a line that personsw will be breeding to :)

04:40:44

Some people breed howlers & wrestlers for FMC (I think it is 5th-9th each month?), but I don't think those have any use outside of that if I remember correctly

04:39:33

Bonsai
It depends entirely on what you want to breed for. Rarity is only a pelt thing, but tends to be popular for their looks. Talents means your pups will start out with more CP, which is good if you're breeding battle wolves/ explore a lot. Many people love defects too though

A bonsaitreasure

04:24:52

can i ask is there anything helpfull for persons to breed for and what would be on top youre list RARITY BOOST TALENTS?

03:50:26 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Mee

03:19:17

I just used the explore map for the first time, as I apparently missed out on a challenger yesterday, due to the glitch issues x')

A bonsaitreasure

02:29:13

dang it need more space for wolfs loll :)

Night Raven College

01:26:48 NRC/Raven

Sense*

Night Raven College

01:25:27 NRC/Raven

Which doesn't make any sene

Night Raven College

01:24:37 NRC/Raven

Lol, I'm doing well apart from the not able to sleep thing and my bedroom being as cold as a freezer.

01:23:24

NRC
tired xd
my brain keeps trying to type your name as NCR because MCR
how about you, lol

Night Raven College

01:21:53 NRC/Raven

Anyways how are you doing snake?

Night Raven College

01:20:29 NRC/Raven

So I caved

Night Raven College

01:20:17 NRC/Raven

I'm not supposed.to be lol but I can't sleep and it's 2:20 am.

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05:40:04 tiger\Owl|she\her

red I'm not 100% sure but I think that anything in the pelt description doesn't affect the wolf in any way just how the pelt looks

05:37:38 Graves | Chaos

Im nauseous and my joints ache. :( I wanna go home :((

05:04:16 Red

thank you! I was worried it'd affect her in some way.

04:57:03

Red
Its' just a pattern/coloration in her pelt. It doesn't do anything besides affect her looks

04:49:58 Red

what is a somatic mutation? My pup Redwillow has it in her coat discription.

04:45:49

My recommendation would be to pick one or two things that you care for more than other things, and focus on that. It's difficult to breed for too many things, especially as you are starting out.
You can also try posting in the forum to see if you can find breeding partners that also want to focus on the same things as you ^^

A bonsaitreasure

04:44:05

okey good to know :) just wonder if i can make a line that personsw will be breeding to :)

04:40:44

Some people breed howlers & wrestlers for FMC (I think it is 5th-9th each month?), but I don't think those have any use outside of that if I remember correctly

04:39:33

Bonsai
It depends entirely on what you want to breed for. Rarity is only a pelt thing, but tends to be popular for their looks. Talents means your pups will start out with more CP, which is good if you're breeding battle wolves/ explore a lot. Many people love defects too though

A bonsaitreasure

04:24:52

can i ask is there anything helpfull for persons to breed for and what would be on top youre list RARITY BOOST TALENTS?

03:50:26 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Mee

03:19:17

I just used the explore map for the first time, as I apparently missed out on a challenger yesterday, due to the glitch issues x')

A bonsaitreasure

02:29:13

dang it need more space for wolfs loll :)

Night Raven College

01:26:48 NRC/Raven

Sense*

Night Raven College

01:25:27 NRC/Raven

Which doesn't make any sene

Night Raven College

01:24:37 NRC/Raven

Lol, I'm doing well apart from the not able to sleep thing and my bedroom being as cold as a freezer.

01:23:24

NRC
tired xd
my brain keeps trying to type your name as NCR because MCR
how about you, lol

Night Raven College

01:21:53 NRC/Raven

Anyways how are you doing snake?

Night Raven College

01:20:29 NRC/Raven

So I caved

Night Raven College

01:20:17 NRC/Raven

I'm not supposed.to be lol but I can't sleep and it's 2:20 am.

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January 3, 2018 11:40 PM

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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo

January 4, 2018 12:21 AM

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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.

January 29, 2018 07:06 PM

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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3

January 29, 2018 10:16 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer

January 29, 2018 10:41 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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