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Fire am gonna try an do the face
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 Charalander
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Wolf,
No... maybe.
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Chara
Bear says otherwise
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Kitty, yeah guys it's all good lol
 Jester
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Fire am gonna try an do the face
 EntityW0LF
12:58:25 EGay
Also I finished
-WP Click-
 Pink kitty🐈
12:58:19 Finger stealer
Spaghetti sauce will you tell them it's safe
 Charalander
12:58:10 Chara
Wolf,
History is written by the victors and I totally won that
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Chara
Are you the kind of person that when you're losing a game, before the other person can win you straight up unplug the game?
 EntityW0LF
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Kitty, oo yes I never knew you did art
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Kitty
I'm not clicking any links from you anymore
 EntityW0LF
12:57:05 EGay
Jester, OOo so gorgeous:0
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Chara
Oh you're that kind of person?
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Does this look right chat
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Looks great! Very nice pose ☺️
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Wolf,
In my head it didn't happen
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This look right chat? I don't draw clothes or people often
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Chara
I know, it's luck I guess. He has the Karamic Blessings. He's my lucky boy
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Nah it's definitely a cult /silly
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Pink
Coincidence
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Chara
No WAY Bear just won that




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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