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♡ Norwegian stands on their hind legs and boxes at ♡ Love you to death AK
Stats: Battle +3
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huh, that's what I imagine Norwegian is doing right now.. <.<
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cinnamon.cloud, spell out your words. Textspeak is not allowed with the exception of oml, lmao, lol, omg, and irl.

"Tho" = "though".
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Look at the vitals >.>

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somewhat 😅
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I got burnt
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Im never going to the beach again.
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 cinnamon.cloud
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♡ Norwegian stands on their hind legs and boxes at ♡ Love you to death AK
Stats: Battle +3
Mood: Playful

-Click-

huh, that's what I imagine Norwegian is doing right now.. <.<
 Ecifircas
08:13:32 
cinnamon.cloud, spell out your words. Textspeak is not allowed with the exception of oml, lmao, lol, omg, and irl.

"Tho" = "though".
 Lightningpelt
08:10:39 Darkfire or Axel :3
Im doodling a new Avi :3
 cinnamon.cloud
08:09:45 Rayne, Cin, Mocha
how are you ?
 Evergreenhills
08:09:44 AsStraightAsMySpine
Hey Dark !! How are you?
 cinnamon.cloud
08:09:34 Rayne, Cin, Mocha
I'm doing good, woke up to another surprise this morning, got them from the sanctuary.
Look at the vitals >.>

-WP Click-
-WP Click-

I'm probably going to let them be explore wolves.
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Hiya ever!
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Heya Mocha ! How are ya :D doin well ?
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hey !! what's up Ever.
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Heyo
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Hmm
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somewhat 😅
 los campesinos!
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is that coffee good
 cinnamon.cloud
07:51:01 Rayne, Cin, Mocha
☕👀
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I must have bananas…
 ShadesOfRuin
07:38:18 Shades
Thank ya!




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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


Krampus

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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