Wolf Play : Advise and Critique

02:51:53 Dark/fire/ice

Well bye bye chat

02:51:08 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

I could always add fluff around the neck and ears

02:48:55 Caesar

Jack, maybe? More fluff? Although it might be more than fine as it is, it still has to be colored, right? ^^

distant-lands

02:46:43 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
cute but i wish he was AC >.>

02:45:47 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- I almost thought she was in labor 🤦‍♀️

02:43:12 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

Cae

What do you think I should change/add?

02:41:20 Dark/fire/ice

Also it’s fine since I had to wear a dress and I hate wearing them but I had to look noce

02:40:57 Caesar

Jack, its giving much more german shepherd than collie <.<

Ever, neutral coats >>>>
Thank <33 yes, yes, study well, child, ace those exams *^*

Apothecary ^^ what quest took too long?

02:40:43 Dark/fire/ice

What? It was good

02:40:09 Worm/Ever

Dark
Oof </3

02:38:49 Dark/fire/ice

Hi ever! I just had waaaaaay too much of this yummy sparkly cranberry drink lol

02:36:43 Medicinally Autistic

Caeruleum ^-^

02:36:34 Worm/Ever

Hello dark ^^ how are you?

02:36:29 Medicinally Autistic

Now it's time to keep training...

02:36:25 Dark/fire/ice

Hi hi chat ^^

02:36:23 Worm/Ever

Jack
Ooh maybe border collie colours with a German shepherd coat pattern

02:35:14 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

Evergreen

Coolio. Now i just have to work out a fur pattern...

02:34:26 Worm/Ever

Jack
Id say so :3

02:34:21 Medicinally Autistic

I finally got this quest done.

02:27:59 Worm/Ever

Cae
Thank youu <33 im studying my ass off I swear LOL

Of course <3 all their coats are usually like very neutral (at least the ones im looking at lol) and all the patterns go together so well <3

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02:51:53 Dark/fire/ice

Well bye bye chat

02:51:08 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

I could always add fluff around the neck and ears

02:48:55 Caesar

Jack, maybe? More fluff? Although it might be more than fine as it is, it still has to be colored, right? ^^

distant-lands

02:46:43 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
cute but i wish he was AC >.>

02:45:47 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- I almost thought she was in labor 🤦‍♀️

02:43:12 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

Cae

What do you think I should change/add?

02:41:20 Dark/fire/ice

Also it’s fine since I had to wear a dress and I hate wearing them but I had to look noce

02:40:57 Caesar

Jack, its giving much more german shepherd than collie <.<

Ever, neutral coats >>>>
Thank <33 yes, yes, study well, child, ace those exams *^*

Apothecary ^^ what quest took too long?

02:40:43 Dark/fire/ice

What? It was good

02:40:09 Worm/Ever

Dark
Oof </3

02:38:49 Dark/fire/ice

Hi ever! I just had waaaaaay too much of this yummy sparkly cranberry drink lol

02:36:43 Medicinally Autistic

Caeruleum ^-^

02:36:34 Worm/Ever

Hello dark ^^ how are you?

02:36:29 Medicinally Autistic

Now it's time to keep training...

02:36:25 Dark/fire/ice

Hi hi chat ^^

02:36:23 Worm/Ever

Jack
Ooh maybe border collie colours with a German shepherd coat pattern

02:35:14 Jack/Kait| he/she/it

Evergreen

Coolio. Now i just have to work out a fur pattern...

02:34:26 Worm/Ever

Jack
Id say so :3

02:34:21 Medicinally Autistic

I finally got this quest done.

02:27:59 Worm/Ever

Cae
Thank youu <33 im studying my ass off I swear LOL

Of course <3 all their coats are usually like very neutral (at least the ones im looking at lol) and all the patterns go together so well <3

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

June 25, 2019 06:56 PM