Wolf Play : Advise and Critique

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Oh well, you tried

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I jsut want an albino
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You got a divine health :3

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Someone tell me what her pups are

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04:22:45 Dice eats uranium

It took me almost two days but I basically made the palette forum on here into one clean code where I can just plug in the details and then add extra features as I want them. Hopefully, it will be really easy for me from here on out.

04:21:58 Kaos || Kháos

I think making palettes is a lot easier than carrd >.< I still gotta figure that thing out.

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I could barely figure out how to build a carrd no thanks XD

04:19:49 Kaos || Kháos

I need palette motivation to bite me so I can get all of these palettes made and fixed.

04:19:44 Palette man

Im glad wolfplay is getting more palette artists, i hate coding

04:19:02 Dice eats uranium

Oh my gosh I love the palette feature so much. I'm making an autumn theme one next! :D

04:18:04 Kaos || Kháos

Oh I need to fix my favorite greyscale palette. Grey shouldn't be on matching grey. 😭

04:16:59 Palette man

Hazey, you should try making palettes

04:16:38 Kaos || Kháos

Whoa, I just realized I haven't seen my new mod color with other palettes.

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04:35:59 Good bi

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ooh boy what are you..

04:34:21 NRC/Night/Raven

Oh and Lovey, congratulations on becoming a forum mod

04:33:27 NRC/Night/Raven

And I gotta go get ready for my violin lesson, goodbye(:

04:32:39 NRC/Night/Raven

Oh well, you tried

04:32:13 Twin/Triplet Keeper

I jsut want an albino
😭

Apothecary

04:30:33 Medicinally Autistic

You got a divine health :3

04:30:30 NRC/Night/Raven

Lovey
You got one DH

04:29:43 Twin/Triplet Keeper

Someone tell me what her pups are

-WP Click-

04:26:56 Hazey

I almost paid my friend to help me set up my carrd I was so horrible at figuring it out. Was a lot easier when I finally did it on my computer though XD

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Hello everyone 👋. How are y'all today

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04:21:58 Kaos || Kháos

I think making palettes is a lot easier than carrd >.< I still gotta figure that thing out.

04:20:44 Hazey

Spirit-
I could barely figure out how to build a carrd no thanks XD

04:19:49 Kaos || Kháos

I need palette motivation to bite me so I can get all of these palettes made and fixed.

04:19:44 Palette man

Im glad wolfplay is getting more palette artists, i hate coding

04:19:02 Dice eats uranium

Oh my gosh I love the palette feature so much. I'm making an autumn theme one next! :D

04:18:04 Kaos || Kháos

Oh I need to fix my favorite greyscale palette. Grey shouldn't be on matching grey. 😭

04:16:59 Palette man

Hazey, you should try making palettes

04:16:38 Kaos || Kháos

Whoa, I just realized I haven't seen my new mod color with other palettes.

04:16:28 Good bi

-5k mush to duds...

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

June 25, 2019 06:56 PM