Feel free to comment on any part of my story, Storms, below. I appreciate positive feedback, but if you just have to rant because you're upset about something that's happened in my story (Ex: your fav character died, you wanted it to go a different way, etc..) feel free to! Just make sure you are simply ranting, not trying to get me to change something so it goes the way you like.

I am stopping at the 4 chapters I have posted right now. I am continuing to write privately, but I don't want to risk somebody stealing my story.

Have at it, my story's (probably 0) fans!!! comment and rant to your hearts desire!

Bad Bitties said:

I really think the Story is Awesome. Your really creative