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 The Rat Lord
09:16:06 Rat lord (he/him)
Moon
God damn that’s a post! 0.0
 Draconic Moon
09:15:21 Moon, Dracomoon
Everred
Ooo, pretty! The background actually looks so nice! Though, I think the balloons may be a bit too bright. I know carnivals are meant to be all kinds of bright colors, but normally for coloring (and I don't know how to properly explain this, so bear with me lol) normally you try to use colors to draw the eye, and would therefore use like brighter or just very different colors on the focal point/where you want a viewer to pay attention to compared to the background. (think, a forest at night with a pale colored character, or vice versa. It doesn't have to be dark v. light though. Color theory is your friend lol). I would suggest making them not so saturated. (I hope I explained that well, but if not, ask me to elaborate. I'll do my best :3) Also for the dragon, the placement of the leg that's holding the ring is placed a bit too forward. You have a side-view of the character, not a 3/4 or other view, so the shoulders should be about the same place either side. Also the poor guy just doesn't have their back half lol. (Which, honestly, is something I'd probably end up doing because sometimes there's just too many details in one spot for my poor brain to comprehend) It might help to space the characters out differently, alter the view, or change the poses if you're having a too-much-in-one-spot sort of issue there! (Honestly though, the only reason I noticed that is because you asked for constructive criticism. I hear that phrase and I just start studying the picture lol) I do think it's a really nice drawing though! The dragon (what are your characters' names?) looks like they're either about to cheat at the game or is just really excited and I love that lol. Go forth and enjoy your rigged carnival games. Also I feel like this is going to be super long and I'm so sorry about that.
 The Rat Lord
09:12:27 Rat lord (he/him)
Hell yeah! Domovoi is apparently good at poker so I just won 5 dog bones!!
 Zeraphia
09:11:14 Captain / Vah
Ever

Rendering is my enemy.

So I do it anyways. >.>
 distant-lands
09:11:06 katy | beetle
ever,
it's a whole scene piece too :'D i try to do one every year for artfight
 Evergreenhills
09:10:33 Juicy Arm Boy
Katy
You got this !! I believe in you !!

Storm
I should I should :0 bye <33

Vah
I’m working on it I swear XD I’m just too scared about rendering and shit like that :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:20 tern | they/he
rat lord
that sounds like something from booktok or the manosphere
 Zeraphia
09:09:24 Captain / Vah
Ever

It takes a lotta practice, I ain't lie lol
 Tikokura
09:09:05 Tiko / call me zap
Anyways, bye guys
 Tikokura
09:08:36 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
You should make a diva version of him
Also I have to read the rules again I forget which abbreviations are allowed :(
 distant-lands
09:08:08 katy | beetle
hey chat ^^
time to lock in and line this piece i sketched. i decided on doing thin-lines.
 Evergreenhills
09:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Bye Storm <33 it was soo much fun talking to ya :D
 Tikokura
09:06:55 Tiko / call me zap
I’m going to hop off now, bye y’all
 Evergreenhills
09:06:40 Juicy Arm Boy
Vah
It was soo good <33 genuinely made me stare at my art for a second and just wish xD

Storm
Maybe I’ll make him into a diva one day
 Zeraphia
09:05:06 Captain / Vah
Ever

Hehehe

The symbolism makes me happy
 The Rat Lord
09:04:38 Rat lord (he/him)
Quiz time! If you get it right I’ll give you 10 much! What is this from: “there’s a code amongst men, and it goes like this, I. Saw. Her. First”
 Evergreenhills
09:04:27 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
It always startles me 😭
 Tikokura
09:04:27 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
XD
I see that now, diva he is then.
 Evergreenhills
09:04:12 Juicy Arm Boy
Eughhh I just spotted a mistake in the drawing that I can’t unsee </3 can’t fix it either because I already submitted it as an attack :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:03:45 tern | they/he
genuinely why do all my youtube videos start playing in 2x speed its so scary

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 The Rat Lord
09:16:06 Rat lord (he/him)
Moon
God damn that’s a post! 0.0
 Draconic Moon
09:15:21 Moon, Dracomoon
Everred
Ooo, pretty! The background actually looks so nice! Though, I think the balloons may be a bit too bright. I know carnivals are meant to be all kinds of bright colors, but normally for coloring (and I don't know how to properly explain this, so bear with me lol) normally you try to use colors to draw the eye, and would therefore use like brighter or just very different colors on the focal point/where you want a viewer to pay attention to compared to the background. (think, a forest at night with a pale colored character, or vice versa. It doesn't have to be dark v. light though. Color theory is your friend lol). I would suggest making them not so saturated. (I hope I explained that well, but if not, ask me to elaborate. I'll do my best :3) Also for the dragon, the placement of the leg that's holding the ring is placed a bit too forward. You have a side-view of the character, not a 3/4 or other view, so the shoulders should be about the same place either side. Also the poor guy just doesn't have their back half lol. (Which, honestly, is something I'd probably end up doing because sometimes there's just too many details in one spot for my poor brain to comprehend) It might help to space the characters out differently, alter the view, or change the poses if you're having a too-much-in-one-spot sort of issue there! (Honestly though, the only reason I noticed that is because you asked for constructive criticism. I hear that phrase and I just start studying the picture lol) I do think it's a really nice drawing though! The dragon (what are your characters' names?) looks like they're either about to cheat at the game or is just really excited and I love that lol. Go forth and enjoy your rigged carnival games. Also I feel like this is going to be super long and I'm so sorry about that.
 The Rat Lord
09:12:27 Rat lord (he/him)
Hell yeah! Domovoi is apparently good at poker so I just won 5 dog bones!!
 Zeraphia
09:11:14 Captain / Vah
Ever

Rendering is my enemy.

So I do it anyways. >.>
 distant-lands
09:11:06 katy | beetle
ever,
it's a whole scene piece too :'D i try to do one every year for artfight
 Evergreenhills
09:10:33 Juicy Arm Boy
Katy
You got this !! I believe in you !!

Storm
I should I should :0 bye <33

Vah
I’m working on it I swear XD I’m just too scared about rendering and shit like that :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:20 tern | they/he
rat lord
that sounds like something from booktok or the manosphere
 Zeraphia
09:09:24 Captain / Vah
Ever

It takes a lotta practice, I ain't lie lol
 Tikokura
09:09:05 Tiko / call me zap
Anyways, bye guys
 Tikokura
09:08:36 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
You should make a diva version of him
Also I have to read the rules again I forget which abbreviations are allowed :(
 distant-lands
09:08:08 katy | beetle
hey chat ^^
time to lock in and line this piece i sketched. i decided on doing thin-lines.
 Evergreenhills
09:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Bye Storm <33 it was soo much fun talking to ya :D
 Tikokura
09:06:55 Tiko / call me zap
I’m going to hop off now, bye y’all
 Evergreenhills
09:06:40 Juicy Arm Boy
Vah
It was soo good <33 genuinely made me stare at my art for a second and just wish xD

Storm
Maybe I’ll make him into a diva one day
 Zeraphia
09:05:06 Captain / Vah
Ever

Hehehe

The symbolism makes me happy
 The Rat Lord
09:04:38 Rat lord (he/him)
Quiz time! If you get it right I’ll give you 10 much! What is this from: “there’s a code amongst men, and it goes like this, I. Saw. Her. First”
 Evergreenhills
09:04:27 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
It always startles me 😭
 Tikokura
09:04:27 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
XD
I see that now, diva he is then.
 Evergreenhills
09:04:12 Juicy Arm Boy
Eughhh I just spotted a mistake in the drawing that I can’t unsee </3 can’t fix it either because I already submitted it as an attack :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:03:45 tern | they/he
genuinely why do all my youtube videos start playing in 2x speed its so scary




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