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| Eye of Eternity |
| 1,074 words of buildup,,, most of my writing is about 400 to 600 words this is crazy work /silly |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon oh go to bed /silly okay!! :3 i think mostly the feedback i'd be looking for is spelling mistakes that i missed and if anything sounds utterly stupid and/or unreadable :'3 |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye It's 11:30 for me too T-T I've never beta read anything before, but I'd be happy to give it a shot! |
| Draconic Moon |
| Desti It's a card game. Think solitare, but easier for my tiny brain. Uhh, it's set up more or less the same, but instead of the draw pile, all of the cards are laid out face up and you get four empty spaces (the titular free cells) and you just gotta clear the play area from aces -> kings |
| white tail |
| Desti it is a Bismark class German battleship that was started in the 1930's and was finished in 1941 If you are talking about Trailmakers it is a block building game that is on steam and console! |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon you wanna beta it? i might have to quit for the night soon (its 11:30) but i might get it done :'3 |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye Oh that is interesting! Strange indeed, but interesting! Would probably read lol |
| Eye of Eternity |
| desti struggling through the most dialogue ive ever written /silly |
| Draconic Moon |
| Desti Explore, writing, drawing, and free cell. I am a multi-tasking master lol |
| Destinations End |
| @Tails I've never heard of that. What is it? @Nin I feel you on being bored and worn out |
| Ninjago Realm |
| @Sir skales being bored and worn out XD bout to hop off for a bit |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon the context is,,, strange and freaky i fear even if the thing im writing is not necessarily freaky basically two narcissists who think theyre gods (one is a deity, the other isnt) getting into a fight over whos more powerful and righteous because they disagree on how to treat their,,, worshippers(?) (the actual deity's worshipper is the one whos the third party, trying to get the other worshipper to break the rules he's been trained to follow) |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye Oh goodness indeed T-T Ah, fair, those more-or-less-nebulous ideas are always so fun. I am very intrigued by whatever you're writing. A fight between two people holding grudges? Caused by a third party? I am intrigueddd I must learn the context :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon oh goodness :'0 it didn't :'0 im so good at remembering words i swear true,,, but the way they started fighting wasnt well-outlined to start with i think ive got it though it was a third-party interjection that started it |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye lol I went looking for the right word and ended up with like a million total tabs and nearly crashed my browser XD Glad you could find the word you were looking for! (It didn't even have a d, I was never gonna find it then lol) Yeah writing is so hard but I love it. If you forget the buildup stuff a lot (or just forget stuff about your writing in general) it may help to make simple outlines like "X happens, leading to Y, leading to Z." do be careful though. It will spiral. That's how I have 120+ pages of writing ideas and not one chapter written XD |
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| Eye of Eternity |
| 1,074 words of buildup,,, most of my writing is about 400 to 600 words this is crazy work /silly |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon oh go to bed /silly okay!! :3 i think mostly the feedback i'd be looking for is spelling mistakes that i missed and if anything sounds utterly stupid and/or unreadable :'3 |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye It's 11:30 for me too T-T I've never beta read anything before, but I'd be happy to give it a shot! |
| Draconic Moon |
| Desti It's a card game. Think solitare, but easier for my tiny brain. Uhh, it's set up more or less the same, but instead of the draw pile, all of the cards are laid out face up and you get four empty spaces (the titular free cells) and you just gotta clear the play area from aces -> kings |
| white tail |
| Desti it is a Bismark class German battleship that was started in the 1930's and was finished in 1941 If you are talking about Trailmakers it is a block building game that is on steam and console! |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon you wanna beta it? i might have to quit for the night soon (its 11:30) but i might get it done :'3 |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye Oh that is interesting! Strange indeed, but interesting! Would probably read lol |
| Eye of Eternity |
| desti struggling through the most dialogue ive ever written /silly |
| Draconic Moon |
| Desti Explore, writing, drawing, and free cell. I am a multi-tasking master lol |
| Destinations End |
| @Tails I've never heard of that. What is it? @Nin I feel you on being bored and worn out |
| Ninjago Realm |
| @Sir skales being bored and worn out XD bout to hop off for a bit |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon the context is,,, strange and freaky i fear even if the thing im writing is not necessarily freaky basically two narcissists who think theyre gods (one is a deity, the other isnt) getting into a fight over whos more powerful and righteous because they disagree on how to treat their,,, worshippers(?) (the actual deity's worshipper is the one whos the third party, trying to get the other worshipper to break the rules he's been trained to follow) |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye Oh goodness indeed T-T Ah, fair, those more-or-less-nebulous ideas are always so fun. I am very intrigued by whatever you're writing. A fight between two people holding grudges? Caused by a third party? I am intrigueddd I must learn the context :3 |
| Eye of Eternity |
| moon oh goodness :'0 it didn't :'0 im so good at remembering words i swear true,,, but the way they started fighting wasnt well-outlined to start with i think ive got it though it was a third-party interjection that started it |
| Draconic Moon |
| Eye lol I went looking for the right word and ended up with like a million total tabs and nearly crashed my browser XD Glad you could find the word you were looking for! (It didn't even have a d, I was never gonna find it then lol) Yeah writing is so hard but I love it. If you forget the buildup stuff a lot (or just forget stuff about your writing in general) it may help to make simple outlines like "X happens, leading to Y, leading to Z." do be careful though. It will spiral. That's how I have 120+ pages of writing ideas and not one chapter written XD |
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