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Plane
They all dies the last couple of weeks
Balerion, caraxes, vermithor, tyraxes are all dead 😔
Now there is only cannibal left

I need to train the rest lol
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Grey
... happy christmas XD
 Boeing
03:42:33 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Wait you only have one DG DH?
What happened to the rest of them ToT

I have a worryingly high amount of trained DHs at the moment... I think they outnumber my non-DHs right now >.>
Considering I have like 12 none-DH DG wolves, that's worrying
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I just realized that I can access my alliance again
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Yay you get it too XD

Plane
No one is battling this week so rank can raise fast i guess
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You know we've been PvPing for like ten minutes and I'm already PvP rank 5
What is going on this month... I was rank 6339 like five minutes ago
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Plane
I only have one single DG DH wolf now...and like 4 total DH that can fight lol
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Okay one might be doable
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You spy 1 Elephant.

Hmm... Worth it? xD
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Luxio
Ps. Amygdala is part of brain so now i am
 Boeing
03:39:32 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Okay -
I think Alycia is my last wolf that is BE trained before I hot spring my wolves?
... maybe? I don't actually know
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Hi Leo XD

I stole Amy's brain the other day so now they are just
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Yeah! Darkgold is amazing! :D

747
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I just realized i only have 1700 dominance and i need 2000 to be part of my own alliance xD
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I wouldn't mind that XD
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Byeeeee
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I'm going to have to do that. I almost put one of my breeders into out last battle because I just can't tell because there's so many new names xD
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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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