Wolf Play : Tear into my art

Chatbox

10:31:31

Not much lol, just checking on the woofs and going exploring

10:30:31 Quasar, QH

what are

10:30:26 Quasar, QH

watch doing?

10:29:51

Hi Quasar!

10:28:52 Quasar, QH

hey lunar!

10:28:43 ET

The urge to start or join a wolf roleplay and then ghost it in 2 weeks is back </3

10:19:42

um obvi, Eagle!

10:14:21 eagle, they/them

Chat do you wanna see a new OC?

Mountain Chasers

10:11:45

Fog of War, thank you!

10:11:10

morning chat

10:08:57 Fog

Mountain Chasers
Go to your den, scroll all the way down and click "use" beside the bronze statue

10:07:28 slushy,ice,moon,

hi guys

TheCuteHuskyPack

10:04:14 Husky

Den of Thieves
925

10:03:56 Slate, Gray

Den of Theives

925

10:03:19

how many BE for death grip again?

Mountain Chasers

09:58:32

Hello everyone, please help me out. How do I use bronze figurine?

09:56:59 Nes/Spider

Demon
That sounds like some good tea
I'm sticking to my regular green tea XD

09:47:19

my boyfriend is on my digital one but he doesn't check it so i can get away with it lol. itll be easier when we are in person which is probably happening in the next month or two

09:45:47 The Scary Mod

@Nesta
Todays herbal tea is apple cinnamon with some local honey
I just ate a snack, I didn't bring much to work with me, maybe some sugar would help
@Saint
Trust me I know what you mean but my husband is the one that checks it, asks questions about it etc so it motivates me to keep up with it ^^

09:43:03

i need a planner but... i'm so lazy lol. that's amazing that you did that! i'm so anti breakfast that it's hard for me to but i'm working on it lol

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Quests

Alliance Battles

Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances

	Grey Fox : +1
	Alligator : -1
	Komodo Dragon : +4

Winter

Day

Blizzard

Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

My Subscriptions

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

1 2

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:00 PM

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 8083
#2020410
Give Award

[c]157083

BOOM

ANOTHER ONE

Alright, leave the black lined one I'm happy with that. Please just help with the red one.

This thread has indeed been reused.

Edited at July 9, 2020 02:33 PM by Eternity

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:04 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#2020430
Give Award

It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:05 PM by Deceit

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:06 PM

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 8083
#2020443
Give Award

Deceit said:

It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Thanks! I'll consider adding some fluff on the legs.

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:07 PM

Darkseeker

Posts: 612
#2020447
Give Award

I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:09 PM

Lightbringer

Posts: 1591
#2020453
Give Award

Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:11 PM by Reathmuaz

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:11 PM

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 8083
#2020463
Give Award

Sabbath said:

I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

Thank you! :D That's super helpful-

I've added one with altered back legs now, so hopefully, that improves the perspective?
Thanks! I like the tail too- well, I like the concept--

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:13 PM

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 8083
#2020464
Give Award

Reathmuaz said:

Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

-snip-

(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Thank you-

That's deffo helpful. I'm gonna put him a little on the skinnier side, but that picture illustrates the base stuff I need to follow like,,, a lot-

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:13 PM by Eternity

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:42 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#2020547
Give Award

From considering my own style-

idk if it will help at all-

bring the chest a little lower down. Like just pull the sternum a little lower and round it. Then like Reath said, those shoulders and hips *^* also agreeing with Sabbath lol (I'm sorry I piggybacked-)

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 04:51 PM

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 8083
#2020574
Give Award

Thanks Bro! <3

I'm honestly giving up with this lowered head to come back to on a later date, I'll raise the head up instead as I'm more confident with that. :')

Tear into my art

May 11, 2020 05:00 PM

Neutral

Posts: 0
#2020597
Give Award

I agree with others on the left bAck leg, it looks off.

The head also look weirdly small too me. But that might be because my drawings have say too big heads

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

1 2

Refresh

Copyright ©2013-2025 Go Go Gatsby Designs, LLC All Rights Reserved
Terms Of Use | Privacy Policy | DMCA | Contact Us