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12:54:38 katy | beetle

vilk,
thank you ^^

12:53:59 katy | beetle

16 of 15 slots are full.
how did i manage that? lmao

12:50:01 Vilk

Love it Katy!

12:42:02 katy | beetle

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thoughts? :>

Pink Floral Cavern

12:21:29 CannibalCupid

I wanna draw, idk what tho

12:06:38 Exist / Kuskyn

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My lovely boy is done now just to make his match <3

12:03:10 Cat

*fortuitous Boldness

11:55:15 Cat

Winter
I don't do swamp that often either, I don't get that many enemies there haha

Katy
She is absolutely gorgeous, congrats! I'm trying to get a Mela HH lol... all I got was a Mela + Fortious blessing in the many many breedings lol

11:48:07 katy | beetle

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paws? :)

11:47:35 winter

lol my bounty's in swamp and i hate exploring there so i guess it'll never happen unless there's an event in swamp again

11:42:09 Cat

Finally after 50+ levels in the forest I have found diege the owl and finished my bounty :D

11:34:45 Reaper / Grim

Cat
For real lol

11:32:17 Cat

I feel like wishbones take forever to accumulate even though there are so many haha

11:30:59 Reaper / Grim

Cat
I feel like I've thrown a shit ton of wish bones at you and they haven't even made a dent X'D

11:30:53 Cat

:D

11:30:07 Reaper / Grim

Cat
Thanks! :D

11:28:11 Cat

Hmm I think person A should, and have them mysteriously watching them at times during the event :P

11:26:28 Reaper / Grim

I need y'all's opinion, I'm writing a story and I'm trying to figure out if person A should know if person B is at the event or not (It's the beginning of the story and they havent seen eachother in years. Person B doesn't realize person a is there)

11:14:24 Vah is Vah

I'm headed off though. See y'all tomorrow!

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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