Wolf Play : Thoughts/light criticism ?
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 kycantina
07:31:18 ky but it's spooky
**I
 kycantina
07:30:47 ky but it's spooky
Boe, ewww. U have a sun bear quest that I'm avoiding like the plague. By the way anyone know if you can find the mead hut in tundra?
 Luna👻
07:30:37 Silver (She/her)
eee Akira (you guys know I love that wolf way to much-) killed her first dreki :3
 Luna👻
07:29:08 Silver (She/her)
I need to get some coins, but Grendel refuses to just die and give me his money
 Boeing
07:28:55 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Star
PM me. I'll help you find one.

Ky
Jungle grind B)

Also my team just took down 6 Sun Bears without all of them fleeing. This is - a new record-
 kycantina
07:27:55 ky but it's spooky
Boe, besides this month's FMC starts on fall 2 I think, trying to grind explore in the middle of winter sounds awful
 StarRun
07:27:40 
My wolves keep dying really easily when I try and explore. So I was trying to find a wolf that might help
 Boeing
07:26:48 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Star
What qualities are you looking for? I can help maybe ^^
 BloodWeb
07:26:39 Blood___She/Her
Gonna have to get his *social* up before FMC

-WP Click-
 Luna👻
07:26:26 Silver (She/her)
hiya Boe
 StarRun
07:26:24 
I'm just trying to find a good wolf for explore
 Luna👻
07:26:13 Silver (She/her)
back on my main :P time for explore grind!
 Boeing
07:26:02 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Ky
XD Oh well, next month then lol

Hey Luna
 kycantina
07:25:30 ky but it's spooky
Boe, oh cool, I'll have to remember to say gappy birthday! I'm working overtime during FMC and going to a conference on the other end of the country, the only free time I'll have comes with crappy train wifi
 Crystal Sky
07:25:03 Im Luna on wolflocke
ooh, a hero! -WP Click-
 Crystal Sky
07:24:20 Im Luna on wolflocke
I can afford another wolf!
 Sassy Otaku
07:23:20 Chuuya/Ruggie
Watch me say I won't do FMC, just to try for a top spot
 Boeing
07:21:08 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Ky
Damn why are you skipping the FMC this month?

Fine I'll join you in hunting hell.
But did you know Amy's birthday is 2nd of November, and since timezones it's technically now xD
 kycantina
07:19:50 ky but it's spooky
Boe, get exploring, join us in boss hunting hell >:) I'm good, work was super chill today- boss overscheduled so we had two security guards for a 30 guest event. I've decided I need to be number one basic explorer this week to make up for skipping FMC this month
 StarRun
07:18:51 
I've been trying to search for a strong wolf to explore with

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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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