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11:42:25

Thank you so much for your help! :) Much appreciated!

11:40:43 Space Pirate Captain

-Click-
It is finally done *^*

garfield enjoyer

11:40:27 garf

Redwood
No problem :) If you ever forget, try searching "injured paw" or "broken tail" under item description in the barter.

11:36:18

Garfield thank you! :)

11:35:54 Space Pirate Captain

Vapor

*^*

That's such a gorgeous design--

garfield enjoyer

11:35:40 garf

Redwood
Green for the injured paw, yellow for the broken tail.

11:34:05

What do I use for a injured paw and a broken tail?

11:32:05 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
Your art is just-
So impossibly good

11:31:35

should I try and make myself a banner?

11:31:23 Is a dinosaur rawr

Vapor it's so cool :D

11:27:27 ♰ Vapor ♰

-Click-

Favorite kitty fromthe batch I just made :3

11:27:03 Space Pirate Captain

.>.

I am almost done

11:22:36 Is a dinosaur rawr

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11:20:08 Reaper / Grim

Thanks guys

11:13:13 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

Hmm... maybe you could try adding lines around them? I dunno

11:12:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- Gear ideas decor ideas pm me also if he starts tormenting you sorry...

11:11:02 Blu | Agee

- grim

try identifying your light source and giving the accessories shading, might help them feel more apart of the overall picture

11:09:32 Reaper / Grim

The accessories still don't feel right, there's something off and I'm not sure what's wrong or how to fix it

11:09:10 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper, to die for

Vah,
I used to keep all my palettes in cursive..

11:08:33 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

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Gorgeous!!

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11:42:25

Thank you so much for your help! :) Much appreciated!

11:40:43 Space Pirate Captain

-Click-
It is finally done *^*

garfield enjoyer

11:40:27 garf

Redwood
No problem :) If you ever forget, try searching "injured paw" or "broken tail" under item description in the barter.

11:36:18

Garfield thank you! :)

11:35:54 Space Pirate Captain

Vapor

*^*

That's such a gorgeous design--

garfield enjoyer

11:35:40 garf

Redwood
Green for the injured paw, yellow for the broken tail.

11:34:05

What do I use for a injured paw and a broken tail?

11:32:05 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
Your art is just-
So impossibly good

11:31:35

should I try and make myself a banner?

11:31:23 Is a dinosaur rawr

Vapor it's so cool :D

11:27:27 ♰ Vapor ♰

-Click-

Favorite kitty fromthe batch I just made :3

11:27:03 Space Pirate Captain

.>.

I am almost done

11:22:36 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning chat

11:20:08 Reaper / Grim

Thanks guys

11:13:13 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

Hmm... maybe you could try adding lines around them? I dunno

11:12:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- Gear ideas decor ideas pm me also if he starts tormenting you sorry...

11:11:02 Blu | Agee

- grim

try identifying your light source and giving the accessories shading, might help them feel more apart of the overall picture

11:09:32 Reaper / Grim

The accessories still don't feel right, there's something off and I'm not sure what's wrong or how to fix it

11:09:10 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper, to die for

Vah,
I used to keep all my palettes in cursive..

11:08:33 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

*^*

Gorgeous!!

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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