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10:46:50 Asmodeus (he/they)
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Mushrooms: 124
Mushrooms Saved: 0

its gonna take forever to save mush for apples since I'm not a pack who explores a bunch
 Zeraphia
10:44:51 Space Pirate Captain
Spirit

Bruh you literally attacked me after I got you one of Grim's adopts XDD

Never

10/10 movie honestly. I enjoy it a lot. It is one of my favorite to just watch / put in the background now.

But oh my goodness. I honestly don't think I could live without my car. It'd mean either taking the manual soul or my brother's "holding on by hopes and dreams" land yacht. ;-;
 Avatar Of Lust
10:44:44 Asmodeus (he/they)
I'm in so much pain I cant sleep :(
 Avatar Of Lust
10:37:50 Asmodeus (he/they)
spirit

my school quarantined me for a day
 SpiritGuardian
10:37:28 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful,
Eesh that sick? Im sorry
 Avatar Of Lust
10:37:07 Asmodeus (he/they)
oop didn't mean for that to send twice
 Avatar Of Lust
10:36:51 Asmodeus (he/they)
Spirit

I don't have any choclate doughnuts

I do how ever have chips and ritz crackers , but also I have been vomiting up anything I eat sooo probably not best to eat
 Avatar Of Lust
10:36:43 Asmodeus (he/they)
Spirit

I don't have any choclate doughnuts

I do how ever have chips and ritz crackers , but also I have been vomiting up anything I eat sooo probs not best to eat
 Demon Mistress
10:36:42 The Scary Mod
Boo
 SpiritGuardian
10:35:37 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful, relationship issues >->
Try a chocolate donut for your sickness?
 Nevermore.
10:35:07 Never/Nev
Vah

Ooh, sounds interesting, I might have to watch it now :o

My roommate took it to town yesterday, and it started to snow and get icy so she spent the night at a friend's. Everything and I mean everything was in there since I thought it'd be home before dinner but no 😔
 Avatar Of Lust
10:34:35 Asmodeus (he/they)
Good soup

I'm sick currently

how are you?
 SpiritGuardian
10:34:13 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful, hey how are you?
 Avatar Of Lust
10:33:34 Asmodeus (he/they)
Good soup

hii
 SpiritGuardian
10:32:54 Mr Palette Guy
Vah,
Bruh I thought you weren't premium ;-; i was about to buy you premium fuck
 Hyacinthus
10:32:31 Apollo's Flower
I just realized how my music taste and how my profile looks are complete opposite aesthetics XD
 Zeraphia
10:31:34 Space Pirate Captain
Never

Hehe. My siblings got me into it. It's the Transformer One movie--

That's good though, that your truck made it!
 Night Shade
10:29:25 Graves | Chaos
Hyacinthus
Hecate!
 Hyacinthus
10:27:57 Apollo's Flower
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 Avatar Of Lust
10:51:05 Asmodeus (he/they)
Bye chat
 Avatar Of Lust
10:46:50 Asmodeus (he/they)
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 124
Mushrooms Saved: 0

its gonna take forever to save mush for apples since I'm not a pack who explores a bunch
 Zeraphia
10:44:51 Space Pirate Captain
Spirit

Bruh you literally attacked me after I got you one of Grim's adopts XDD

Never

10/10 movie honestly. I enjoy it a lot. It is one of my favorite to just watch / put in the background now.

But oh my goodness. I honestly don't think I could live without my car. It'd mean either taking the manual soul or my brother's "holding on by hopes and dreams" land yacht. ;-;
 Avatar Of Lust
10:44:44 Asmodeus (he/they)
I'm in so much pain I cant sleep :(
 Avatar Of Lust
10:37:50 Asmodeus (he/they)
spirit

my school quarantined me for a day
 SpiritGuardian
10:37:28 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful,
Eesh that sick? Im sorry
 Avatar Of Lust
10:37:07 Asmodeus (he/they)
oop didn't mean for that to send twice
 Avatar Of Lust
10:36:51 Asmodeus (he/they)
Spirit

I don't have any choclate doughnuts

I do how ever have chips and ritz crackers , but also I have been vomiting up anything I eat sooo probably not best to eat
 Avatar Of Lust
10:36:43 Asmodeus (he/they)
Spirit

I don't have any choclate doughnuts

I do how ever have chips and ritz crackers , but also I have been vomiting up anything I eat sooo probs not best to eat
 Demon Mistress
10:36:42 The Scary Mod
Boo
 SpiritGuardian
10:35:37 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful, relationship issues >->
Try a chocolate donut for your sickness?
 Nevermore.
10:35:07 Never/Nev
Vah

Ooh, sounds interesting, I might have to watch it now :o

My roommate took it to town yesterday, and it started to snow and get icy so she spent the night at a friend's. Everything and I mean everything was in there since I thought it'd be home before dinner but no 😔
 Avatar Of Lust
10:34:35 Asmodeus (he/they)
Good soup

I'm sick currently

how are you?
 SpiritGuardian
10:34:13 Mr Palette Guy
Lustful, hey how are you?
 Avatar Of Lust
10:33:34 Asmodeus (he/they)
Good soup

hii
 SpiritGuardian
10:32:54 Mr Palette Guy
Vah,
Bruh I thought you weren't premium ;-; i was about to buy you premium fuck
 Hyacinthus
10:32:31 Apollo's Flower
I just realized how my music taste and how my profile looks are complete opposite aesthetics XD
 Zeraphia
10:31:34 Space Pirate Captain
Never

Hehe. My siblings got me into it. It's the Transformer One movie--

That's good though, that your truck made it!
 Night Shade
10:29:25 Graves | Chaos
Hyacinthus
Hecate!
 Hyacinthus
10:27:57 Apollo's Flower
-WP Click-

I need a Greek goddess to name her after




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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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