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08:05:53 katy | beetle

catori,
oo nice! she's gorgeous :0

08:04:34 Cat

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I just bred my first Chimera :o *sobs*

08:03:17 Silver (She/her)

Mal
I'm hoarding the 5 I have for warrior stones

08:02:17 Slate, Gray

Hi chat!

07:58:05 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Holy cow the cheapest apple is 1199 that's crazy

07:56:51 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
paws? ^^

07:55:57 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Sam,
Practically at this point

SammytheRaccoon

07:53:30 Sam/Samuel/Racc

in this economy, that's 2 apples

SammytheRaccoon

07:52:41 Sam/Samuel/Racc

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 0
Mushrooms Saved: 2,672

argh I'm broke

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07:49:21 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

07:45:38 Don't call me BJ.

I'm sick again omgs, the pain right now is killing me
Q^Q

07:42:26 Dusk (she/her)

paws?
-WP Click-

07:38:38 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Silver,
Two boosts one with a defect. Nice

07:36:45 Silver/Shadow/Night

Pup check?
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07:20:31 Amy/Anpmygdala

Fei
I know i know XD

Okay it's 2:20am
I think it might be wise to sleep

07:19:41 Pack of Sharp Snap

Amy
no too easy. Where is the challenge?

07:18:24 Amy/Anpmygdala

Fei
True
Imagine how crazy it would ve to randomly get apples from pack life lol

07:17:35 Pack of Sharp Snap

Amy
sadly our wolves never give us the apples lol

07:16:36 Amy/Anpmygdala

The truth untold trips over an apple.
Stats:Â Wisdom +2

It would be wiser to pick the damned apple up you idiot ;-;

07:14:41 Pack of Sharp Snap

Your wolves played: Group nap!

If only

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08:05:53 katy | beetle

catori,
oo nice! she's gorgeous :0

08:04:34 Cat

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I just bred my first Chimera :o *sobs*

08:03:17 Silver (She/her)

Mal
I'm hoarding the 5 I have for warrior stones

08:02:17 Slate, Gray

Hi chat!

07:58:05 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Holy cow the cheapest apple is 1199 that's crazy

07:56:51 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
paws? ^^

07:55:57 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Sam,
Practically at this point

SammytheRaccoon

07:53:30 Sam/Samuel/Racc

in this economy, that's 2 apples

SammytheRaccoon

07:52:41 Sam/Samuel/Racc

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 0
Mushrooms Saved: 2,672

argh I'm broke

Destinations End

07:49:21 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

07:45:38 Don't call me BJ.

I'm sick again omgs, the pain right now is killing me
Q^Q

07:42:26 Dusk (she/her)

paws?
-WP Click-

07:38:38 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Silver,
Two boosts one with a defect. Nice

07:36:45 Silver/Shadow/Night

Pup check?
-WP Click-

07:20:31 Amy/Anpmygdala

Fei
I know i know XD

Okay it's 2:20am
I think it might be wise to sleep

07:19:41 Pack of Sharp Snap

Amy
no too easy. Where is the challenge?

07:18:24 Amy/Anpmygdala

Fei
True
Imagine how crazy it would ve to randomly get apples from pack life lol

07:17:35 Pack of Sharp Snap

Amy
sadly our wolves never give us the apples lol

07:16:36 Amy/Anpmygdala

The truth untold trips over an apple.
Stats:Â Wisdom +2

It would be wiser to pick the damned apple up you idiot ;-;

07:14:41 Pack of Sharp Snap

Your wolves played: Group nap!

If only

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Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 01:49 AM

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I made this piece today
https://i.postimg.cc/fyDhLtMB/2392-C118-DF13-4597-9-BF2-6-E23-A916-B115.png

And I cant tell whats wrong. I think it has something to do with the back legs and maybe the ears or the rib cage. It's a species I made and I can post a reference sheet of one if it helps but I really want to fix this. Ps. The tuff on the shoulder is actually where a wing used to be. It was cut off by hunters.

Thanks!

Edited at November 23, 2018 05:00 PM by Path of Stars

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 03:49 AM

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I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.

The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D

The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.

The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 04:49 PM

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Wood Carve said:
I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.
The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D
The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.
The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Thanks! That makes sense.

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