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 Boeing
04:36:04 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Urux
Hey brown isn't bad :D I like brownscale wolves
Rosewood is nice I agree (mainly because red) but then it's easy to misuse it and make it just look... eh
I get where you think it's pretty from though :D
They all look really good e.e
 Graygloom
04:34:42 Gloomy Fog, Golden
Hehehe LOL
 Whispering Snow
04:34:26 It's me Rain!! :D
Gloom
You will have to change your pack Name to Goldgloom
 Urux
04:33:47 Urox, Uris
Boe
I can't help but make brown dominant designs. I mean, that other one I sent - the plague dye ones. I don't really lean towards rosewood at all but it was too pretty
 Graygloom
04:32:27 Gloomy Fog, Golden
Hey chat, I dyed my hair!!! It's so golden!!! :O
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 Boeing
04:32:15 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Urux
Yeah that looks pretty nice too :D
I like the third one best though e.e
The second one looks nice as axanthic but then it's all brown without it which felt a bit too... common I guess
 Urux
04:30:22 Urox, Uris
Hey Boe haha
I'm leaning towards that one. I do have this other one but I kind of want to use it on a non-pelt defect because it's so pretty
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I love it
 Feiella
04:29:22 Pack of Sharp Snap
I've yet to make a custom. Last one I made was Raya
 Boeing
04:29:09 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Hi Urux :D
I like the third one best
 Smilecat
04:29:09 Sleep deprived
Mir
Really anything other than a common color
 Luna❄
04:29:09 Silver (She/her)
Your wolves played: Starfall pins Pup 27 of pack Thunder Wolves (c) to the ground in a display of dominance.
Starry no its a child!
 Mirko
04:28:00 Mir
Smilecat
What color did you want to dye him?
 DuskkHeart
04:27:37 Blue, Dusk
Sooo , is savvy insight anywhere near a good boost ? still learning about those , and whats good .

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Got him from wolf party
 Salem
04:27:22 Salem but pink
Would love some votes :3
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 Urux
04:27:01 Urox, Uris
I need opinions~ also hi lol
For a G2 axan male I'm going to stud
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 Smilecat
04:25:56 Sleep deprived
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I wanna dye him now
But I'm also a little broke ;-;
 starmutt
04:24:50 marsh | they/it
winged honse indeed tehe
rare extra high effort piece x)
 Boeing
04:24:13 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
marsh
winged honse :D
I like it lol
 Eternitys Gaze
04:24:13 tern / gaze
marsh
that's so pretty- i love the colors and the stripes
 starmutt
04:23:20 marsh | they/it
thoughts? </3
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 Boeing
04:36:04 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Urux
Hey brown isn't bad :D I like brownscale wolves
Rosewood is nice I agree (mainly because red) but then it's easy to misuse it and make it just look... eh
I get where you think it's pretty from though :D
They all look really good e.e
 Graygloom
04:34:42 Gloomy Fog, Golden
Hehehe LOL
 Whispering Snow
04:34:26 It's me Rain!! :D
Gloom
You will have to change your pack Name to Goldgloom
 Urux
04:33:47 Urox, Uris
Boe
I can't help but make brown dominant designs. I mean, that other one I sent - the plague dye ones. I don't really lean towards rosewood at all but it was too pretty
 Graygloom
04:32:27 Gloomy Fog, Golden
Hey chat, I dyed my hair!!! It's so golden!!! :O
-Click-
 Boeing
04:32:15 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Urux
Yeah that looks pretty nice too :D
I like the third one best though e.e
The second one looks nice as axanthic but then it's all brown without it which felt a bit too... common I guess
 Urux
04:30:22 Urox, Uris
Hey Boe haha
I'm leaning towards that one. I do have this other one but I kind of want to use it on a non-pelt defect because it's so pretty
-WP Click-
I love it
 Feiella
04:29:22 Pack of Sharp Snap
I've yet to make a custom. Last one I made was Raya
 Boeing
04:29:09 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Hi Urux :D
I like the third one best
 Smilecat
04:29:09 Sleep deprived
Mir
Really anything other than a common color
 Luna❄
04:29:09 Silver (She/her)
Your wolves played: Starfall pins Pup 27 of pack Thunder Wolves (c) to the ground in a display of dominance.
Starry no its a child!
 Mirko
04:28:00 Mir
Smilecat
What color did you want to dye him?
 DuskkHeart
04:27:37 Blue, Dusk
Sooo , is savvy insight anywhere near a good boost ? still learning about those , and whats good .

-WP Click-

Got him from wolf party
 Salem
04:27:22 Salem but pink
Would love some votes :3
-WP Click-
 Urux
04:27:01 Urox, Uris
I need opinions~ also hi lol
For a G2 axan male I'm going to stud
-WP Click-
-WP Click-
-WP Click-
-WP Click-
 Smilecat
04:25:56 Sleep deprived
-WP Click-
I wanna dye him now
But I'm also a little broke ;-;
 starmutt
04:24:50 marsh | they/it
winged honse indeed tehe
rare extra high effort piece x)
 Boeing
04:24:13 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
marsh
winged honse :D
I like it lol
 Eternitys Gaze
04:24:13 tern / gaze
marsh
that's so pretty- i love the colors and the stripes
 starmutt
04:23:20 marsh | they/it
thoughts? </3
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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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