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 Quasar Hoarder
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I cant wait till she pops!
 Collar
08:39:29 ♰ Vapor ♰
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Paws for my pretty dog? :3 <3
 Easnem
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My pretty Benzo :>
 Luna❄
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vote
 cavendish
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what to do with you, it goes against my code to custom...
 DuskkHeart
08:07:03 Blue, Dusk
You hear the boom of thunder and lightning flashes across the sky. But the weather is clear. WTF?

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 Luna❄
08:06:36 Silver (She/her)
Your wolves played: Aila and Asmodeous find a secluded waterfall, refreshing themselves in its cool, clear waters.

my pink wolves
 DuskkHeart
08:02:04 Blue, Dusk
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Go look at how much i bought this wolf for . Its nuts .
 Whispering Snow
07:57:19 It's me Rain!! :D
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 DuskkHeart
07:56:31 Blue, Dusk
Irish,

Hola :)
 Echo Eclipse
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PvP anyone?
 Doodle Dragon
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Hey chat
 Whispering Snow
07:34:35 It's me Rain!! :D
Why the crap am I battling Tony the Tiger at 7:30 am??
 Echo Eclipse
07:17:53 Echo | (They/She/He)
Ok I've fixed the bio text now it looks more appeasing to the eye now lol
 Embervale
07:11:54 Ember
Thank you!
 VioletEcho
07:11:33 Is a dinosaur rawr
King Waking up before your alarm goes of us just torture ;-;
 Caeruleum
07:11:05 Cae, Blue
yes, pack > pack activities > manage palettes > scroll down and theres the toggle
 Echo Eclipse
07:10:38 Echo | (They/She/He)
Ember
Yes in pack activities under palettes.
 Embervale
07:10:11 Ember
Is there a toggle to see other people's pallets?
 King
07:07:56 laffy or king
woke up an hour before my alarm gaaa. so tierd

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 Quasar Hoarder
08:42:16 Quasar, QH
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I cant wait till she pops!
 Collar
08:39:29 ♰ Vapor ♰
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Paws for my pretty dog? :3 <3
 Easnem
08:22:29 Eas
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My pretty Benzo :>
 Luna❄
08:21:00 Silver (She/her)
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vote
 cavendish
08:15:18 caven
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what to do with you, it goes against my code to custom...
 DuskkHeart
08:07:03 Blue, Dusk
You hear the boom of thunder and lightning flashes across the sky. But the weather is clear. WTF?

"no abbreviations allowed in chat."

Abbreviations in the game
 Luna❄
08:06:36 Silver (She/her)
Your wolves played: Aila and Asmodeous find a secluded waterfall, refreshing themselves in its cool, clear waters.

my pink wolves
 DuskkHeart
08:02:04 Blue, Dusk
-WP Click-

Go look at how much i bought this wolf for . Its nuts .
 Whispering Snow
07:57:19 It's me Rain!! :D
-WP Click-
 DuskkHeart
07:56:31 Blue, Dusk
Irish,

Hola :)
 Echo Eclipse
07:43:52 Echo | (They/She/He)
PvP anyone?
 Doodle Dragon
07:40:28 Irish Gay Rat
Hey chat
 Whispering Snow
07:34:35 It's me Rain!! :D
Why the crap am I battling Tony the Tiger at 7:30 am??
 Echo Eclipse
07:17:53 Echo | (They/She/He)
Ok I've fixed the bio text now it looks more appeasing to the eye now lol
 Embervale
07:11:54 Ember
Thank you!
 VioletEcho
07:11:33 Is a dinosaur rawr
King Waking up before your alarm goes of us just torture ;-;
 Caeruleum
07:11:05 Cae, Blue
yes, pack > pack activities > manage palettes > scroll down and theres the toggle
 Echo Eclipse
07:10:38 Echo | (They/She/He)
Ember
Yes in pack activities under palettes.
 Embervale
07:10:11 Ember
Is there a toggle to see other people's pallets?
 King
07:07:56 laffy or king
woke up an hour before my alarm gaaa. so tierd




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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