Wolf Play : Help me make this look more realistic/ better!

08:21:00 Silver (She/her)

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cavendish

08:15:18 caven

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what to do with you, it goes against my code to custom...

08:07:03 Blue, Dusk

You hear the boom of thunder and lightning flashes across the sky. But the weather is clear. WTF?

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08:06:36 Silver (She/her)

Your wolves played: Aila and Asmodeous find a secluded waterfall, refreshing themselves in its cool, clear waters.

my pink wolves

08:02:04 Blue, Dusk

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Go look at how much i bought this wolf for . Its nuts .

07:57:19 It's me Rain!! :D

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07:56:31 Blue, Dusk

Irish,

Hola :)

07:43:52 Echo | (They/She/He)

PvP anyone?

Doodle Dragon

07:40:28 Irish Gay Rat

Hey chat

07:34:35 It's me Rain!! :D

Why the crap am I battling Tony the Tiger at 7:30 am??

07:17:53 Echo | (They/She/He)

Ok I've fixed the bio text now it looks more appeasing to the eye now lol

07:11:54 Ember

Thank you!

VioletEcho

07:11:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

King Waking up before your alarm goes of us just torture ;-;

Caeruleum

07:11:05 Cae, Blue

yes, pack > pack activities > manage palettes > scroll down and theres the toggle

07:10:38 Echo | (They/She/He)

Ember
Yes in pack activities under palettes.

07:10:11 Ember

Is there a toggle to see other people's pallets?

King

07:07:56 laffy or king

woke up an hour before my alarm gaaa. so tierd

07:04:57 Echo | (They/She/He)

ET
Yeah but to be fair I don't even know what I'm doing lol, I need to update my bio text colour to fit it.

Eternity

07:00:43 ET

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It's got a very pleasing palette :0 Has a kinda dark academia vibe.

The text is a lil hard to read in some places though - like the sidebar. The blue text might be easier to read if it was a smidge lighter too :0

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My pretty Benzo :>

08:21:00 Silver (She/her)

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cavendish

08:15:18 caven

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what to do with you, it goes against my code to custom...

08:07:03 Blue, Dusk

You hear the boom of thunder and lightning flashes across the sky. But the weather is clear. WTF?

"no abbreviations allowed in chat."

Abbreviations in the game

08:06:36 Silver (She/her)

Your wolves played: Aila and Asmodeous find a secluded waterfall, refreshing themselves in its cool, clear waters.

my pink wolves

08:02:04 Blue, Dusk

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Go look at how much i bought this wolf for . Its nuts .

07:57:19 It's me Rain!! :D

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07:56:31 Blue, Dusk

Irish,

Hola :)

07:43:52 Echo | (They/She/He)

PvP anyone?

Doodle Dragon

07:40:28 Irish Gay Rat

Hey chat

07:34:35 It's me Rain!! :D

Why the crap am I battling Tony the Tiger at 7:30 am??

07:17:53 Echo | (They/She/He)

Ok I've fixed the bio text now it looks more appeasing to the eye now lol

07:11:54 Ember

Thank you!

VioletEcho

07:11:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

King Waking up before your alarm goes of us just torture ;-;

Caeruleum

07:11:05 Cae, Blue

yes, pack > pack activities > manage palettes > scroll down and theres the toggle

07:10:38 Echo | (They/She/He)

Ember
Yes in pack activities under palettes.

07:10:11 Ember

Is there a toggle to see other people's pallets?

King

07:07:56 laffy or king

woke up an hour before my alarm gaaa. so tierd

07:04:57 Echo | (They/She/He)

ET
Yeah but to be fair I don't even know what I'm doing lol, I need to update my bio text colour to fit it.

Eternity

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June 11, 2018 10:34 PM

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Hello! I was working on a semi realistic piece, and I wanted some critique of it! If you have any hints on where it could be improved to look more realistic , I would be so thankful!! Thanks!!

https://image.ibb.co/cC7q7o/33845_CD1_1_BE6_4586_86_C7_26_AF68_A26_C54.png

June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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Maybe expand the car side of dogs head up. ^^

June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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I loves the fur (its much better than I can do) but double check your anatomy. Also, the dog is way to skinny. But it's really cute! I can tell you have a lot of potential.

June 11, 2018 10:38 PM

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I love it!

Id suggest making the body a bit thicker and getting rid of the tongue(or repositioning it). Also, add some life to the dog's eyes if possible.

Unless it is a really small dog, that bunny isn't gonna be that big. Unless it is a giant bunny. I love it, but it isn't realistic ^^

That's all, really :D

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:39 PM by Astrophel

June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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I'm not great with canines, but I'm great with rabbits. The rabbit's nose is a V like shape, quite different from that of a dog's. And the nose isn't very pink, just a slight blush.

Here is my bunny

https://s15.postimg.cc/sqla5gf1n/3_F5_AE822-_E4_AD-43_BA-94_F0-3_C92_A48_CB008.jpg

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:40 PM by Damian Wayne

June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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Thanks everyone! I'll post some updates once I'm done

June 11, 2018 10:47 PM

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Also little note, it's supposed to be a puppy :D

June 11, 2018 10:53 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/mAxnL8/D42_FD071_0750_47_F5_8_AF0_3_F6_BC1_EA99_FB.png

Updated! I think it's better, but the eyes...

Anyone know how to add life?

June 11, 2018 10:55 PM

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Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?

At least maybe a bit brighter.

That could give it some life to the eyes

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:56 PM by Destinations End

June 11, 2018 10:56 PM