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01:46:16 Hallow, Eve

Is anyone else's explore super glitchy recently?

01:45:48 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Trying to figure that out, gotta make sure everyone can be on

01:45:22 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
Yeah tomorrow is another day
Isn't that tragic :'D

01:44:56 Sith Happens

Such a surprise!

01:44:34 Echo | (They/She/He)

Paws?
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01:44:33 P'Sky

Anakin
Wow^^

01:44:15 P'Sky

Plane
Tomorrow is another day :p

01:43:39 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealershop
...hmm? :D

01:42:39 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
That is something then I guess lol
I'm... eh. Another normal day I guess so nothing much for me
I guess e.e

01:41:21 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Uhh

01:41:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Look at her 0.0

01:41:04 P'Sky

Plane
Aww^^
Now to get home and read, I'll be so much happier xD
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01:40:46 Shatter/Sin

Hallow,

I think the wings look great on him.

01:40:18 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
I mean at least you're feeling better :D
Good that you are though

01:39:45 Hallow, Eve

-WP Click-
I can't tell if I like the wings on him. Any thoughts?

01:39:32 P'Sky

Plane
I'm ok^^
Nose is still stuffy, however still feisty

01:38:41

Anyways, I need to go shower. My PMs are open.

01:38:36 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Hi sky :D
You're feeling better now?

01:37:27 P'Sky

Plane!

01:35:48 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealership
When's the wedding lol

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01:46:16 Hallow, Eve

Is anyone else's explore super glitchy recently?

01:45:48 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Trying to figure that out, gotta make sure everyone can be on

01:45:22 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
Yeah tomorrow is another day
Isn't that tragic :'D

01:44:56 Sith Happens

Such a surprise!

01:44:34 Echo | (They/She/He)

Paws?
-WP Click-

01:44:33 P'Sky

Anakin
Wow^^

01:44:15 P'Sky

Plane
Tomorrow is another day :p

01:43:39 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealershop
...hmm? :D

01:42:39 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
That is something then I guess lol
I'm... eh. Another normal day I guess so nothing much for me
I guess e.e

01:41:21 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Uhh

01:41:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Look at her 0.0

01:41:04 P'Sky

Plane
Aww^^
Now to get home and read, I'll be so much happier xD
How are you?

01:40:46 Shatter/Sin

Hallow,

I think the wings look great on him.

01:40:18 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Sky
I mean at least you're feeling better :D
Good that you are though

01:39:45 Hallow, Eve

-WP Click-
I can't tell if I like the wings on him. Any thoughts?

01:39:32 P'Sky

Plane
I'm ok^^
Nose is still stuffy, however still feisty

01:38:41

Anyways, I need to go shower. My PMs are open.

01:38:36 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Hi sky :D
You're feeling better now?

01:37:27 P'Sky

Plane!

01:35:48 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealership
When's the wedding lol

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Critique this soon to be reference sheet!

April 8, 2018 11:06 PM

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Heyo, so I need some critique on this ref sheet, I’ll be transferring it to a digital one soon. Please give some helpful hints, it’s greatl appreciated! Thanks!

https://image.ibb.co/f23q2H/03_C94_DF5_C542_427_A_A5_F3_164893_C2_C50_B.jpg

Edited at April 8, 2018 11:07 PM by Deja Vu

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April 8, 2018 11:10 PM

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Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, Ill add a mouth section

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Deja Vu said:

Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, I’ll add a mouth section

No problem :)

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April 8, 2018 11:13 PM

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not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.

besides that; i like it

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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hell above said:
not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.
besides that; i like it

Thanks ! Ill change that ^^

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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you could add to the side the colors that you used.

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April 8, 2018 11:21 PM

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Lunar Moon said:
you could add to the side the colors that you used.

Thanks!

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April 8, 2018 11:33 PM

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The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

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April 9, 2018 12:52 AM

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Deer said:
The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

Oof, I see that now. Thanks!

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