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06:45:30 Going to leave..

Oh that's nice

06:44:36 (She) Cat {no bob}

1/3 of my pack is in danger.

06:43:50 Amy/Anpmygdala

I have 3 wolves at risk, they are 17 and 18🥲

06:40:35 Hazbinhotelobsessed!

cae

I have one... sending you luck

06:39:54 Hazbinhotelobsessed!

Christmas

bye

06:39:53 Cae, Blue

22 wolves in danger im gonna cry

06:38:49 Christmas,Pumpkin

bye chat

06:38:29 Christmas,Pumpkin

icemoons

I was up till 4 am and I have tons to do

06:34:14 Hazbinhotelobsessed!

guys, fun fact: I have literally nothing to do, I was up till like 12 am last night,I have physical therapy tomorrow, so yeah I'm fine... totally fine, not wanting to pass out... not at all

06:25:02 Christmas,Pumpkin

dang raven feathers are expensive despite how many are currently in game

06:24:23 Very Wisdom ✨

06:23:45 Christmas,Pumpkin

-WP Click-

I hope he doesn't die

06:15:25 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

Existence
I'm hoping for maybe 20 or 19 but I doubt it will happen

06:11:08

-WP Click-

Look at my pretty girl now <3

06:05:12

I'm glad I don't have to worry about that right now, my oldest I believe is 8

06:00:55 Exist / Kuskyn

Feiella, I am kind of hoping a fair few will go honestly, I know my dom will drop but I need the space xD

05:56:14 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

and I got alerted about work tomorrow

05:45:57 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

I love announcing death script day XD

05:44:36

Oh ok so I don't have to worry about that for a little bit

05:43:05 Fei The Sleepy Ghost

Existence
Same here

StarRun
death day is what I call Mondays as wolves age 15 and over have a chance of dying from death script

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

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March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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