Wolf Play : Criticism Needed
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 Magnus Bane
12:00:46 Mag/Maggy
Damn, close to my goal
 Nevermore.
11:59:31 Never/Nev
Sting

Oh nice! Best of luck with the foaling! And congratulations on the to the future baby!

I was like "But it'll be cold." But nah, not where you are lmao
 Narran Park
11:57:40 Sting
Nev, She isnt born yet. But we are hoping to welcome her around 12th December.

She will be most likely Bay or possibly Chestnut. And hopefully she will inherit her parents paint genes(Splash, Frame).

Her moth is called 'DY Miss Roxy' and her sire is 'Spooks Gotta Gun'

But i dont always incorporate the parents.

She will be the first in Australia by that sire.
 Zeraphia
11:54:08 Vah is Vah
Never

ES has the chance to attack twice. Just double the same move. HH does the sane but with a special move on the second one.
 Nevermore.
11:52:30 Never/Nev
Vah
Really? :o I haven't really looked into what the boosts do other than DH since those are the only ones I'll keep

Sting
Give me a moment and I'll send the hoard your way. What color if you don't mind me asking? Duns are my favorite to name since there is so many things you can do to incorporate dun into the name lmao
 Zeraphia
11:51:06 Vah is Vah
Never

My favorite explore boost. ES and HH honestly are not bad.
 Narran Park
11:50:57 Sting
Id love that Nev! I need some inspiration!
 Narran Park
11:50:31 Sting
i called my last horse 'All oopsie no daisy' aka Polly
 ~ Seeker Hive ~
11:50:21 Soundwave
Sting

I do lol
 Nevermore.
11:50:14 Never/Nev
Sting

I have a whole list of show names for horses somewhere if you'd like me to send you some :)
 Nevermore.
11:49:32 Never/Nev
Vah

Not an ES T.T Those are at least a decent boost.
 Zeraphia
11:49:30 Vah is Vah
Narran

I've got a few. Just a few. XD
 Narran Park
11:49:11 Sting
I need some Female Name suggestions for a horse....Does anyone have a Den full of wolves with interesting names? Formal names..not just Spot...
 Salem
11:48:55 Very Wisdom ✨
Support?
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
11:48:05 Vah is Vah
Never

Honestly, I'm more angry that the last kid he threw was an ES and the idiot pack didn't offer it to me before putting it up for auction.

Like ... come on, I have PoL. This is ... nothing new.
 NotTheRealWassip
11:47:51 
The Night Walker
Can I "Walk.. er" back?
 The Night Walker
11:46:56 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
Eli
Yeah sure, pull up to the next window.

Crawl back to pms you little critter-
 Nevermore.
11:46:26 Never/Nev
Vah

I would be fuming. He'd been sacrificed in my pack. Thrown into a volcano.
 Feiella
11:46:05 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Sleepy shark
 NotTheRealWassip
11:45:40 
Can I get a whopper with some fries please? That'll be all

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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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