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 Celestial Saga
09:28:46 Queen / Jo
Sort of I only have 103 spac3 free and I'm on my holiday too so I'm hoping to be able to keep an eye on them
 StarRun
09:24:31 
Cel
Sounds so great!! I love pups
 SpookyMountain
09:24:07 Silver/Pyro/Luna
I need a den expansion so bad😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
 Celestial Saga
09:22:50 Queen / Jo
Ahh I forgot I have 234 pups due today all at 73-74 hours now
 teddy
09:22:27 its yellow
does a wolf doing defenceive moves help only them from being hit or the entire pack?
 Celestial Saga
09:21:42 Queen / Jo
Hello all
 Saint
09:18:12 
i had a quest for killing 25 wolverines, took maybe 2 hours... now i completed it, ive seen 10 in 20 tiles
 SpookyMountain
09:17:09 Silver/Pyro/Luna
Hi Leon
 Leon
09:16:29 
Smokeheart stalks HoneyPelt.

Stats: Stealth +2
Mood: Playful
 Leon
09:15:53 
hello chat
 ataciara
09:14:58 ciara
@ vapor

it's a trip that's for sure. because i take my classes online (working toward my associates in enterprise management, predominantly online courses at my tech school), my class time is several weeks shorter. instead of ~15 I get 7-8 weeks, and there's 0 content cut
so my deadlines are CRAZY but i'm doing a lot better than i would in person so it works lol
 Collar
09:13:05 Vapor
Ciara

Ohh, man I haven't taken english in AGES LOL
Good luck <3

That's SO awesome what? So jealous omg TwT

That's awesome dude! hell yeah!!

All I do is work on dog game gear and cry </3
 Caeruleum
09:05:39 Cae, Blue
tsk.

thanks ^^
 limbo
09:05:04 ZD
cae,
naw, it doesnt give you an encounter v.v
 Magnus Bane
09:04:55 Mag/Maggy
Cae
I don't think so
 Caeruleum
09:04:37 Cae, Blue
hey, if your wolves dont have enough stealth for the sleeping dreki encounter, do you get to fight the big bastard? <.<
 Magnus Bane
09:04:11 Mag/Maggy
Looks like I'll be off tik tok and facebook for a few days lmao
 ataciara
09:02:56 ciara
i do need to replace my rp samples in my journal though looking at these is so sad when i think about what i've been writing since my hiatus started
 ataciara
09:01:36 ciara
@ vapor

nothing quite like procrastination to get people checking on virtual wolves

english comp is killing me and i'm ahead in my intro to business class

i only have 2 classes a semester so i'm sitting here like
do i really need the perfect english grade

they're both high 90s right now i can slack off for a day LOL
 Collar
09:00:10 Vapor
Ciara

OMG So real for that <3 I feel you SO hard lolol
I'm avoiding getting ready for work right now and everything :"3

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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And the eyes are a little small

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